D3 NEW FF-DIL DOSTI MASTI CHAP 22(a & b) PG 123,124 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i loved ur ff❤️...i must say u r a awesome writer👏..count me in too...i have send u buddy request😊...so plz pm me too when u update😃...love to read further...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
akshu nice promo..luved it..update soon...
n yaa thanks for d credit...!
n DIL DOSTI MASTI is d bst..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am really very sorry guys for irritating youl but i am updating it tday it self as tom i wont be able to update as i said
n one more thing i am continuing the ff😊
so here is the next updat hope youl love it lol
CHAP 2
NEXT DAY
all the dazzlers enter St Louis they are amazed by the coll
they start walking n talking
neha:guys kya coll hai yaar m ain toh pehle jake canteen dekhungi😆
mayank:bhukad yaar tu kab chdegi teri ye addat
sharon:kabhi nahi bhukasd hai no one lol😆
neha:shut up guys main ja rahi hoon main seedha prinipal office pohoch jaungi
kriya:arey par kaise u dnt know the way
jay:arey bacci nahi hai woh agayegi
neha leaves
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neha is walking in the corridor in her own dreams😆
vicky is walking age se he sees neha coming in his way but thinks
vic:ladki hai hath jayegi😆
n walks but neha doesnt move n both bang into eachother
neha's hair falls on her face she removes them n turns n sees vicky n
look look hawa hwa moment😳😳
both cum back to thier senses
neha:dekh nahi sakte tum????andhe ho kya???
vicky is just staring at her
neha:kya aadhe ke sath sath behre bhi ho kya
vicky:shut up just shut up na main aadha hoon na behra samjhi tum miss watever
neha:how dare u call me watever ???
vic:tumara naam nahi pata toh watevrr hi bolunga na da ha!!!!!
neha:tumari galti tumhe sorry bolna hoga
vic:wht are u nuts???main kyu sorry bolu
neha:no i am neha n sorry kyu ki tumari wajhse yeh sab hua ise acha toh main cabteen ja chuki hoti
vic:by the way ho koun tum ha????kisi jusre coll main admission nahi mila toh hamri coll main chali aye kya bina addmission ke bas joos gayi???
neha:are u mad???how dare u???tum
vic:whtever n walks away
neha:ohh god yeh kise milgayi main coll ke pehle din
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neha meets the dazzlers n they go to princi's office but they see another gang walks out of his cabin
neha,kriya n sharon are shocked😲
the group were the rockstarts
rey:baatcutter????
rockstrats n dazzlers toghether wht???? except kria
sharon:heloo mr boring tum yaha kal ka din kafi nahi tha ki tum yaha bhi agei???
vic:shit tum fir se poiting towards neha
all other are just shocked
sudeenly princi walks in n say ohh to tum log mil gaye
pointing towards the daazlers he ays yeh hai the rockstarts group hamara coll dance team
n rockstrats yeh wohi log hai jo london se aye hai
so i expect ki app inki maddfat karenge n leaves
both the teams just walk amne samne se staring at eachother
but rey krias are still there
rwey:listen i am really sorry for yest maine jaan buchke nahi kiya
kria:its k galti meri thi woh jab main gusse main hoti hoon toh kisi ko bolne ka mauka nahi deti
jay:kria kaha hai tu ana
kria:arahi hoon na gussa maty dila😡
jay:theek hai
n he leaves
rey:ya i can see tht😆
kria:i am really very sorry
waise tumara naam kya hai
rey:reyaansh but tum mujhe rey bula sakti hoon
kria:ohh main...
rey:baatcutter ho rite???sorry kria rite
jay:kriya chalo n he drags her kriya is looking at rey n rey is looking at her but kriya was gone
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BENJI-DIA
benji was walking he meets dia in his way
ben:hey i am benji
dia:toh main kya karu???
ben:wht???maine shir apna naam bataya
dia:par mujhe nahi janana k
ben:wht why u being rude???maine sirf hey bola
dia:par mujhe tumhe hey nahi bolna wasie bhi tumare group ke wajhse prince na humhe tum lgo ki help karne ko kaha hai n i hate ppl sorry ppl nahi foreiners
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VICKY NEHA
vicky n neha meet in the canteen
vic:OMG look whose here
nhea:well mujhe nahi pata tha ki mumbai ke logo ko saorry bolne main itna attitude ata hai
vic:really agar log humhe attitude dikhate hain toh we return the same👏
neha:ohhh thank u mujhe bata ne ke liya i mumbai ke log kaise hote hain
vic:n thank u mujhe yeh batane ke liya ki mujhe tumse door rehna chaiye
neha:wht😲
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SIMMI NIL
simmi was gettign confused where is the canteen
simmi:excuse me yeh canteen ka rasta kaha hai
nil:ah staright jake left
simmi:thank u*blushing*😳
nil:in his mind(why is she blushing??)
simmi goes n turns n startes n smiles at nil
simmi in her mind:cute hai😳par ek rockstar hai
nil:god why is she smiling at me whts wrong wid this chick
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SWAYAM -SHARON
sharon sees swayam in the rehershal hall n walks away
swa:kal kuch logo ko bahout bada chop mila tha
sha:ohh really jitna maine rockstars ke baareme suna hai sab cool log lagte hain par rockstrats mian padhaku log bhi hote hain dint know
swa:uska jawab maine kal de diya tha rite miss overconfident aka miss sharon rite???
sha:kkk theek hai tum theek thak salsa kar lete hoon kar salsa kyu kya tum baaki dance kar sakte hain jab tak woh nahi dekhauge main kaise manu
swayam is just staring at her n smiling
sharon sees tht
sha:yeh kya tum mujhe dekhkar smile kar rahe hoon???
swayam starts walking towards sharon
sharon starts gng backwards n finaaly hits the wall😳
swayam puts his one hand n the wall n leads down😳
sharon is just looking down😳
swa:tumhe mera dance dkehna hai??? pehle tum apna dance dikahu waise bhi main tumhe kyu answer doon ????tum meri kya hoon
n walks out of the rehershal hall
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this is guys this is the chap 2
hope youl loved it
n the ff name is dil dosti masti😊
i want long comments for love update
reminder:
plzz add
akshu-tehmu to ur buddylist for pm's
precap:
announcement
n other couple scenes
Edited by dmg_mjht_d3_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is really good basanthi...👏👏
keep it up 😆
loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: achuAR

it is really good basanthi...👏👏

keep it up 😆
loved it 😊

thjanx alot rey n athax for being the first one to comment😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much

kriyansh saying sorry to each other sooo cute

arguments between dia and benjing is really hilarious🤣 superb

loved viha tashan they are awesome

simmi gives smile to nil awee one wicket down😉

swayam and sharon scenes were tooo good

awesome continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...sab ki meeting achi thi update the next part soon n thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome. What a start.

Kudos to u. First time kriyansh meeting without fight. Loved it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok this stupid 'LIKE' button is not working... Anyways i loved the update amazing... Kya introoduction hua hai ek dusre se... Awesome... Aayye swayam saying me tumhara kya hoon... Awesome... Vicky-neha banging into each oder... Simmi nil meeting... Good going... Thanks for continuing with the FF... Update sson and thanks for the pm...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey finally read all parts of your ff
i have two questions in my mind
1. Do u really think Armaan & Riddhima suits college guys role?
2. Which Riddhima u chose? Jenny/Sukku/Shilpa?

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