OS: Smitten with Kitten (Arhi, the morning after)

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Fabulous OS! Very cute too, loved it. Don't stop writing!

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awww so cute... how I wish something like this would have happened lol

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Aww cute :)

I am guessing this was completely different to the current track of the show? :)

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Krani
Aww cute :)

I am guessing this was completely different to the current track of the show? :)

Yes, in Poolside Love they married for love in a very entertaining fashion 😳

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Hiruni

@CDlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG! That was too good Mary! I LOVE IT! Dayum girl it was too short for my liking tho. I need MORE!!

Make this into an FF!! Make this into an FF! Please please! pretty please!

You need to continue Pool side love. Im completely addicted to it. Can't get it off my head.

Or make this into an FF! 😳 one way or another Im going to cyber haunt you if you don't 😆

And thank you for mentioning me in your post. 😃

you totally deserve all the praise for your writing.

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710617

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

U writ e very well.. There's a good flow in ur passage..

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Khushi wants to be called "Aap"! How cute!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: CDlove
OMG! That was too good Mary! I LOVE IT! Dayum girl it was too short for my liking tho. I need MORE!!

Make this into an FF!! Make this into an FF! Please please! pretty please!

You need to continue Pool side love. Im completely addicted to it. Can't get it off my head.

Or make this into an FF! 😳 one way or another Im going to cyber haunt you if you don't 😆

And thank you for mentioning me in your post. 😃

you totally deserve all the praise for your writing.

A compliment means that much more when it comes from such a stellar writer. I could not put it in the time I am sure you do to write that deep Brooken Mirror piece. I just wait no "My posts" for that to show up.

Thank you so much. I will see whatever inspiration comes next. Maybe I will give snippets of their married life post Poolside Love. I have taken to writing OS as SS gets moved and people don't comment after the first part, if at all. But this piece it getting replies, so I am quite happy. It's good to be back.

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exoLarmy

@exoLarmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

wow! this was such a cute & sweet OS !!

i totally loved it! the way she responded to Arnav when she him on the bed! ahaha Arnav is very naughty 😉...

he kept talking about their night before!

i wonder how he will be in the show after all the misunderstand & that psychopath is killed off!

omg i would literally faint if he does this !!!!!

thanks for writing this OS... 😃

Edited by beautiful1 - 13 years ago

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: beautiful1
wow! this was such a cute & sweet OS !!

i totally loved it! the way she responded to Arnav when she him on the bed! ahaha Arnav is very naughty 😉...

he kept talking about their night before!

i wonder how he will be in the show after all the misunderstand & that psychopath is killed off!

omg i would literally faint if he does this !!!!!

thanks for writing this OS... 😃

I would love to see it too! Just hope Barun and Sanaya don't get too shy to act this. I think it can be done in a very viewer friendly way.