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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

All i can is WOWWW.. brilliantly written..

Read all parts in a go.. starting from the letter to arnav, to her parents, payals outburst everything was so very touching.. LOVED IT!!!!!

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shraddska

@shraddska

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

How beautifully have u phrased every sentence... its elegant n classy... the end was handled with a subtle beauty...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

read the whole thing in one go. WOW!

first the letter to arnav was brilliantly written. arnav's confusing emotions was also displayed wonderfully.

loved anjili not actually having shyam's child. payal was brilliant so a round of applause to her. poor babuji. i really hope that doesnt happen in the real show. i would cry. arnav getting khushi back was nice but i personaly feel khushi forgave him too easily, but then again your story and you put it fabulously. :)

thanks for the pm.

xxx

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Wow ... I just read this from the beginning... sooo amazing! can't believe that shyam could fool arnav again... Arnav's not very smart is he? lol Payal's huge outburst was really something special!! And anjali being with Aman... OMG... never expected that!!! I liked how shyam can't father children... at least he will not have some evil blood line!!! Just glad there was a happy ending!!! Thanks for the PM :D

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Thank you so much for the pm Ashna I am not sure how i missed this one...fantastic story loved the emotions ...had a lump in my throat while reading...one of the best stories I have read so far...the last part was a bit rushed tho after the whole build up of emotions and the twists..you gave payal and Anjali and even mami some colour...woould have loved to see a slower healing between Arhi..if you are able to that would be a request to extend the last part... a beautifully woven story once again luved it..

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Sanjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

thanks for the update and the pm. Fab job, loved it, read it the first time and multiple times savoring it during every read.

Do keep me on the pm list for future publications

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HADmishti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

that was a wonderful ss love it plesae keep writing

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

This was amazinggg!!!!!!!!! God, I cried and cried and cried... Your words were simply magical! You put in the feelings brilliantly and oh my my - how awesome the twist was!

Loved your story! Waiting for more from you!!! Keep writing!

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

just read it all in one go and awww that was the sweetest and i can not tell you how much satisfaction i got from the fact that Avni was not Shyams child and that Anjali was a cheater!!