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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

very emotional...n beautifully written. felt really bad coz Arnav Khushi arent together in the end :) can't see them separated 😭😭😭

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Pissa99

@Pissa99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I absolutely loved your previous OS!! You never ever fail to surprise us...this is sooo Beautiful :)

I really loved the way you have described the whole story and so much pain involved it...The ending was amazing, brought tears to my eyes..

Pls write more for us and pm me.. I would love to read all your work..You pen them in such a way that so many emotions are expressed in every single word.. (Just like a movie..Seriously make me wanna read more and more)

Great effort 👏

Thanks!

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klloyd

@klloyd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Very nice, emotional, each and every moment captured very beautifully! I only hope this really doesn't happen to Khushi and Arnav!

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Pissa99
I absolutely loved your previous OS!! You never ever fail to surprise us...this is sooo Beautiful :)

I really loved the way you have described the whole story and so much pain involved it...The ending was amazing, brought tears to my eyes..

Pls write more for us and pm me.. I would love to read all your work..You pen them in such a way that so many emotions are expressed in every single word.. (Just like a movie..Seriously make me wanna read more and more)

Great effort 👏

Thanks!

Sob! Sniff! You are making me emotional. I never knew you would love my writing so much. Believe me, I sucked at writing before writing OS's here. Now I feel so honored. Ppl like you make my mundane life interesting and help me to move forward in life. Thank you so much🤗 It means a lot to me.

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Beautiful & Emotional OS⭐️

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Why do you all angsty writers make me cry???????? It's beautiful! But I hattteeed it...! Because I don't ever ever ever ever ever want Arnav-Khushi's story to end like this... 😭

Thanks for the PM...! Loved the way you have written this OS...

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556195

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

)i would sat it was perfect! ❤️ you are right.. what arnav did wasnt right and again true life doesnt get happy ending! but it was really touching! i really felt bad for Arnav! 🤔 i wish he could get someone too!! but..😔 in mid way while i read that khushi was married with someone else i felt and urge to stop it reading right there! 😆 but i thought to read it and trust me instead of arnav-khushi endin khushi-zubin ending was good! but thats my mind saying..in my heart i am still angry on you till you doesnt give a arnav-khushi OS! 😉😆

forgot to say that you made me cry!

love its sweets..in love with your works🤗

Edited by vampire_girl - 13 years ago

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

well written, but sad 😭

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Amudha_Arya

@Amudha_Arya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

very emotional..

Arnav finally closed this chapter of his life with a heavy heart as he let them go away from him, forever.

😭his line made me cry..i feat as if something is leaving me forever...

nice story...i cudnt imagine khushi with someone else...but ya nicely written

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preethika suresh

@preethi12345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

vry vry wel written ,, flt d emtns in d deeep !!!

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