SS: How do I love thee? Ch 4 pg 26 - Page 2

I was logging off..and this caught my eye...

As I started to read I was thinking these two are in some sort of old home but then when they started talking about their great grandchildren and the food I thought nah Vidhya has stash them safely in heaven😆

Om my good lord if they burp and fart every time someone remembers them down in the land of the mortal Arnav must release a LOT of gas due to his unceremonious ways while residing in earth 😲😆

Great going...I love the sonnet and I am sure I will love the rest of the story angst or not (though I am a fan of angst!)

🤣 Don't worry the laugh is not at you, it's on your crazy ability to think of such great ideas for stories. Frankly, who would have thought to write a story in Heaven ? I really , really loved the whole "farts and burps" plot line. I really think you did an awesome job keeping the details of the character intact while still writing a different plot line. Can't wait to see what happened on Earth ! :D

Mehrunnisa

J.E.A.L.O.U.S.Y was too good n i can see this is also goin gto be tought competetion !

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Originally posted by: current

I was logging off..and this caught my eye...

Brilliant..quirky...and totally unusual concept...though I can see why you chose this particular sonnet..

Just as they were soulmates that even death could not part them..so is ARHI..perfect soulmates..

Fantabulous piece of writing...as far as angst is concerned...I fear we are in for an overload from the reel one...so this

one suits me fine..

PS ..read your OS ..LOVED the poolside series.

PPS ...I loved..the hilarity..esp ..How Arnav is totally full of hot air...Pun intended..hahaha

and Khushi had Acidity overtime...hahahahahah ..that was Brilliant..

@ Khahani..I thought so too..the old home ..but then light dawned..

Thanks! Glad you liked it, and gladder you caught the small details like KKG's acidity😊.

Originally posted by: khahani

As I started to read I was thinking these two are in some sort of old home but then when they started talking about their great grandchildren and the food I thought nah Vidhya has stash them safely in heaven😆

Om my good lord if they burp and fart every time someone remembers them down in the land of the mortal Arnav must release a LOT of gas due to his unceremonious ways while residing in earth 😲😆

Great going...I love the sonnet and I am sure I will love the rest of the story angst or not (though I am a fan of angst!)

Old age home...hell no! I don't do old age homes. Neither does ASR! And Arnav's farting is punishment for his obnoxiousness on Earth...gotta pay somehow. Glad you liked it. Did I reply to your earlier comment on Malli? If not, consider this thanks for that too...I do remember reading it.

Woah. I didnt expect something like this as a sonnet, however, you've surprised me like ALWAYS. Its different, and in a way makes me smile, not at all the farting and burping though lol They must fart and burp alot, considering their importance on Earth...especially Arnav lol and Amans wife? LOL