New FF on Kriyansh & Swaron - DO DIL EK DHADKAN - Page 4

Originally posted by: achuAR

i loved it

next time lamba waala update

plzzz

tumne pehele comment kiya na [ on 2nd part ] so pakka tumharelia laamba wala update karun ji :D

awesome part...loved it very much

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

loved it tons n the way that girls crowded around him haye

i loved the way that kriya was acting babyish

and he was liking it

is there a divide in this college?

well i loved the way that kriya started to cry

and rey stopping her

IT WAS OVERALL 2 CUTE

thanks for the pm

1st of all thx sooo much 4 ur wonderful comments :D 2ndly there is no divide in d college [ well i hav a reason 4 dat tooo but ull get 2 knw it in d later episodes acctually vry later episodes :P ]

Originally posted by: binx-D3

Hahaha sooo cute it was...I always love the tum!! shocked expressions..they're soo funny when you imagine them :P ..super cute upddate!! Thanks so much for the PM! Can't wait for the next part!

haha same here dear ... well dnt worry i hav a lot of these TUM!!!! in my ff :D

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awsummm...n rey in white...haye!!!!😍 😍...n kriya sooo childish awww lovly n thnx 4 pm n update nxt soon...n plsss thoda bada update plsss

sure acctually this was a really big 1 but kya karun mom was sleepimg & she suddenly got up so i had 2 stop in d middle of my typing nly :P acctually they dnt knw ki im writing ll this ... they wont do anything but phir bhi daar tho lagtha hi hena :P :D & i PROMISE agla wala update is gona be longer aur agar tum log zayada comment karoge to may be FASTER 2 :P :P :P it all depends upon ur comments :D

Originally posted by: yogini64

Hey . . . Lovely ff . . . . . . I loved the concept nd inki meeting to bahot mindblowing thi . . . . . Nd plz plz inka romantic sequence zarur rakhna next update me . . . . . . . . Sorry, i'm a crazy fan...

Originally posted by: lovely7010

awesome...luved kriyansh ki second meeting update the next part soon n thnxxx for the pm...

check out d index :D

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome part...loved it very much

kriyansh fight was really very cute enjoyed it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part😍

thank u sooo much & will post it as soon as i can & check d index :D

Originally posted by: tejashreenrocks

check out d index :D

but y?????

❤️😊❤️Hey guyz 😃 1stly thank u 4 those lovely comments 😊 & nw i want something 4m u people ...