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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: rockinggirl5
I loved this chapter. Everything that u were trying to convey through this part, u really did justice to it. It was lovely. Very beautifully written and I can't wait for the next update. Please continue soon.

thanks a bunch!!! Your comments always encourage me to keep on going and I'm so glad you liked the update. thanks for commenting so regularly and always keeping me going with your wonderful feedback:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: batgirl67
eee he kissed her cheek!! second time and still in shock!!!

Lol, I bet Khushi's in just as much shock as you:p

Thanks so much for liking, and I hope you like future updates too:) Please keep leaving your feedback:) :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: anita_21492
Amazing update

thank you for liking:) and also more commenting on the other updates as well, it means a lot:)

please do keep leaving your feedback, they really push me on to write:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

aaah ! Nafisa ! :D you blow me away at every update... *now, flatter yourself* LOL.. no honestly, you sure do.. no jokes.

Incredibly brilliant update ! though there's a lil' bit of Arnav and Khushi, Loved that bit of course.. her rambling on... awwh, I realli missed it, and I felt that adorable part of her came back.. and ahaaa, Arnav being clumsy, yet thoroughly over the moon at receiving her call, ... such a cutiieee ! can totally picture that..

eekk ! I'm soo looking over to their meet up, and being partners in an investigation.. figuring out and settling the situation of that 'husband' *Shudders*

PS; I picked out this particular 'metaphor' of yours that I fell in love with, and had to go back the 2nd time to relocate it: "Khushi's eyelids, heavy with fatigue, began to lower their curtain on stage." Marvelous job ! :D

I know, call me head over heels in your writing style, haha. Thanks for updating fast enough, and can't wait for the next one ! xxx <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: drdee142
Lovely update. I totally get it that Khushi needs her time and Arnav needs to woo her back and prove his love for her.

Loved it and waiting for the next update, thanks for the PM

Dee

Originally posted by: drdee142
Anjali's reaction is weird, does she know something 😕

I'm glad the Arnav is trying to show Khushi what she means to him through both actions and words and love his gesture both with what he said to Anjali about trusting Khushi and his very un-Arnavlike public display of love when he kissed her and said bye.

That should show Khushi that Arnav has changed and means what he said

Dee

First of all, let me start with a HUGE thanks for all your comments on previous updates! Your appreciation seriously means a lot to me and I can't tell you how happy your feedback on these chapters make me!! I know I'm seriously late in replying but I honestly, thank you so much:)

As for Anjali's reaction- you'll have to read on to see what's happening with her. Her role in the plot will come out slowly, but will nevertheless be very pivotal, so I hope I can do her role the proper justice.

And as for Arnav- his kissing Khushi in front of her entire family just goes to symbolise him claiming her as his, something Khushi is slowly going to have to realise. After all, this is the same guy who did a breathtakingly passionate dance number with Khushi in front of both their families that nearly knocked me senseless- so I thought that that slightly reckless, slightly naughty, slightly unpredictable aspect of his character ought to come out too:p

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: tinsel
Amazing update!👏I loved how you can portray each characters feeling down to every last detail, especially the part when Arnav was waiting for Khushi to come out and Khushi's thoughts in the car.

Thanks so, so, sooo much for liking! It really means a lot to me, both your appreciation and your comments after each update! thanks for liking, and I do hope you like future updates just as much:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: asumi
i caught up with 17 of your chapters now!!! and it was sooo damn beautifully put forth!!! all of them were incredible-
him watching her, Khushi not forgiving him, the fairly lights and false sky in room, bangles!

the last kiss on her cheek stole my heart!!!!
you have kept all the characters in sync with their nature and i loved it!

Arnav Khushi payal akash! and Anjali!! amaizing!
Khushi observing anjali's reaction, Arnav doing tiniest of the things for her,
Akash- Palya's honeymoon photos- giving a little of realization to arnav!!
every single thing

LOVED IT!

Aw thanks so much for taking the time to read all of those updates and also for appreciating them so much! can't begin to explain how much that means to me😃 And a huge thanks for acknowledging and appreciating all the various emotional and symbolic aspects of these chapters, its really, really flattering:) Thanks so much once again and I hope you like the coming updates just as much :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly
Just lovely! Loved how Arnav is trying to woo KKGSR!

thank you for all your comments and support throughout this FF:) It really means a lot...and if you liked Arnav's wooing of his wife- maybe you'll like the Chapter 23 and 24 too, when they're posted *hint, hint* lol, i really hope you enjoy all coming updates just as much. and thanks again:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruby-red
that was beautifully writen, such a sweet update.
well his sanka devi's sanek is deffinately rubbing off on him, loved that bit...thanx for the pm.

Thanks so much for liking! Your continuous support throughout this FF really means the world to me, and I hope you keep liking all the coming updates as well:)

And of course, Sanka Devi has that effect on everyone she meets, from Nani and Buaji down to Hari Prakash...so how could her own husband be left behind:p really glad you liked it:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: inanyregard
the story is progressing so well! In each chapter I discover a new facet of the characters. Great work!

Thanks so much for liking! All the characters of this show are in many ways multifaceted, and sometimes it becomes really difficult to stick to their personalities...so your acknowledgement of these various shades of their characters is huge source of relief and encouragement to me!!!! A BIG thanks😳 And I really hope you'll appreciate the future updates just as much:)