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sudeshna banerjee

@sweet_sudeshna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

superb n fantastic update dear

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Shreya

@sparksfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wooow... u describd evrythng in such a beautiful manner !!!!!

d pics used r sooo nice !!!! wonderful job !!

it makes me wanna live dere 2 !!!!

bcoz of ur amazing explnation i hav no doubts !!!!

waithng 4 d dance ...

n thnk u 4 another awesumic ff !!!!!

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Awesome dear
loved it
cant wait till the next part
plzzz cont soon
i hav send abuddy request tu yu so plsss dont forget
to pm me

😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awesome update...👏

the pics which u used to explain their place...is really excellent...👍🏼

n the color of the palace...blue n red...vampies blue one...n warewolf red one...these are the colors of their eyes...also...so unke eyes ke colors ke according unke palace ka color bhi hai...that's nice...😊

n swastika...is not able to remove the memory of meeting with shaleen...

n shaleen is smiling while remembering swastika...oh hooo...😳

n shilpa...shaleen be aware...she will be a strict professor...not ur di...in takshila...remember...😉

n both shaleen n swastika...are going to TAKSHILA for their studies...asli journey toh wahan se suru hogi...HATE,FR8SHIP N LOVE...😳

n their dance in get-together...aweee...waiting, waiting...😍

so swastika...is aware that shaleen is a warewolf...that's why she doesn;t want to even remember him...

n shaleen is not aware that unfortunately he met with a vampy...n that's why he is smiling on the meeting with the girl...

so he is going to know about her in get-tgether...during the dance...

well shaleen keeps a hatered towards the vampires...as u said in the first update...then what will happen when he got know that the girl with whom he met...n smiling on the memory of meeting her...is a vampy...their biggest enemy...😲

well just hope for the best...

i want to ask that is it possible that...a warewolf n a vampire can be mate...??????...😕...they are the enemies...😕

update soon...

luv u...😊

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey dear lovely update
superb..loved it
❤️luv u dear
plsss cont.soon

thanks 4 pm
🤗

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

loved both updates

awesome cs👏

first meet omg loved it😍

u really worked hard on this ff🤗

btw i loved annaya calling dolphin dolci when i was a kid our neighbours dog was of the same name it reminded me of that

p.s-

nowadays don't have time 2 sit on pc too but i love u r ff's so i read on my cell but i m not able to like or comment asit take lot of time. but i read it to refresh mymind n i love it so even if i m not able 2 commemt pls do send the pm's

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

@sweetsanyo-rashu i have a doubt again😆...

u cleared the doubt about swastika knowing shaleen is a werewolf...😎

and u said that she touched him just for a fraction of a second...

that's why he couldn't recognize her...

but no normal human being with electric blue eyes can race with a dolphin...

why didn't it clicked in his mind??😕...

was he too smitten with her beauty to think rationally??

or supernatural creatures get to know about the physical features of other species after going to takshila only?🤔...as u didn't mention whether swastika knows about crimson red eyes of wolfs...

mere sawal kabhi khatam nahi honge sayad😆...

and thnx for clearing my previous doubts dear😃

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: prahelika
@sweetsanyo-rashu i have a doubt again😆...
u cleared the doubt about swastika knowing shaleen is a werewolf...😎

and u said that she touched him just for a fraction of a second...

that's why he couldn't recognize her...

but no normal human being with electric blue eyes can race with a dolphin...

why didn't it clicked in his mind??😕...

was he too smitten with her beauty to think rationally??

or supernatural creatures get to know about the physical features of other species after going to takshila only?🤔...as u didn't mention whether swastika knows about crimson red eyes of wolfs...

mere sawal kabhi khatam nahi honge sayad😆...

and thnx for clearing my previous doubts dear😃

di very good...

ab aap lag rahe ho mere badi whould b doctor di......

pehle tho mera naam rashu rakhne ke liye thanx...🤗...i mean kitna aapna aapna aur affectionate lagta hai.😳

ab main aapko aapki choti sis ki tarah samjhati hoon...

dhanya se sunno di, oops padho-

shaleen noes ki this is only possible by supernatural being, to swim so fast.

fine,

lekin yahan tho sab log hi supernatural hai.😉

aisa thodi hai ki sirf vampyis can swim fast.😃

werewolves bhi tho change over ke liye swim kar sakte hai, 🤓hybrids bhi kar sakte hai...

..wizards ke pass bhi tho yeh power ho sakti hai.

and di , when they don't use their power, their eyes are normal black- brown.

so , wen they were talking to each other, they had their eyes normal.😊

aur agar aapko koi just fraction of second ke liye touch karega, voh bhi accident ke samay , tho kisko intna yaad rahega......aur accident ke baad thande paani main ghir jao tho shayad bilkul yaad nahi rahega...

ab batao hi, main ek acchi EXPLAINER hoon naah???😉

mere concepts kitne claer hai, i wonder...😍

i m simply amazing...😳...

okay di ab aapko meri itni tareef karne ki jarurat nahi hai...

mujhe naah hi kudh aapni tareef karna pasand hai, nahi hi sunana...

DI, LOVE U.

KEEP ASKING FOR MORE...

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

RASHMI dear,😊

superb ud ...👏

ur story is like our indian vamp academy...

awesome pics...

i want to ask u something dear tat when will swastika come to know tat shaleen is her mate? only when she smells his blood ... or there is any other way also.?

loved todays ud...and eagerly waiting for get together party...

luv u...

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
di very good...
ab aap lag rahe ho mere badi whould b doctor di...

pehle tho mera naam rashu rakhne ke liye thanx...i mean kitna aapna aapna aur affectionate lagta hai.

ab main aapko aapki choti sis ki tarah samjhati hoon...
dhanya se sunno di, oops padho-

shaleen noes ki this is only possible by supernatural being, to swim so fast.
fine,
lekin yahan tho sab log hi supernatural hai.

aisa thodi hai ki sirf vampyis can swim fast.

werewolves bhi tho change over ke liye swim kar sakte hai, hybrids bhi kar sakte hai...wizards ke pass bhi tho yeh power ho sakti hai.

and di , when they don't use their power, their eyes are normal black- brown.

so , wen they were talking to each other, they had their eyes normal.
aur agar aapko koi just fraction of second ke liye touch karega, voh bhi accident ke samay , tho kisko intna yaad rahega...aur accident ke baad thande paani main ghir jao tho shayad bilkul yaad nahi rahega...

ab batao hi, main ek acchi EXPLAINER hoon naah???

mere concepts kitne claer hai, i wonder...
i m simply amazing...

okay di ab aapko meri itni tareef karne ki jarurat nahi hai...
mujhe naah hi kudh aapni tareef karna pasand hai, nahi hi sunana...

DI, LOVE U.

KEEP ASKING FOR MORE...

yeah...i love to call u rashu dear...😊 kitna apna sa lagta hai na😳...

kitna bada explanation by god👍🏼...

ab lag rahi hai na ek would be doctor ki chhoti sis who has the confidence and guts to crack med entrance⭐️

toh in normal condition unke eyes ke colour black brown hote hai *wise prazi di is now satisfied* 😆

but kya yeh CS mein tha aur main bhul gayi?😲 now i have to check the supernatural facts before reading every update...

baki saare facts toh samajh gayi thi...only this eye colour fact was bothering me😕...and now it's crystal clear😎

i can't stop loving this complicated magical world😳...

waise to main kisiko itni asaani se praise karti nahi😆...but kyun tu itni request kar rahi hai to bol hi deti hoon😆😆...u r simply amazing in explanation👏...

don't worry aj raat ko hi sayad phir se koi nayi confusion a jayegi😆

abhi se ready ho ja use solve karne ke liye😉...

luv u sis...🤗

Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago