IPKKND FF: Perfection (Chap 19 Pg 146) UPDATE 3/26 - Page 6

your writing style is fantastic! please pm me updates =]

amazing one do continue soon nd do pm me

nycc part ..i love her dis way..hope she stays lyd dis in d show too

part 2 was awesome too..plz add me to ur pm list

Read the 3 parts!! Fabulous!! I love love love. Update soon!!!😃

kitna awesome tha yeh!!

Great job looking fwd to next pt

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Oshobbho!! You write a fan fiction and you don't PM until you have 3 whole parts up!!! remind me not to PM you for the next 3 updates!!😡

(Banglay jhari dite pere mojai laglo...lol!)

Now that the scoldings over let's come down to the ficlet -

I love how you've had the courage to take the bull by the horns and make Arnav an asshole. As much as certain readers may dislike the fact, Arnav is just made that way he doesn't trust easily and he will always be waiting for condemnation from the god's he will always expect the worst. At least that's what I believe, his issues are too deep-rooted to be so easily eradicated. Contrary to popular opinion love does not fix all woes...time is always a prerequisite.

Secondly, Khushi having the guts to talk back to Arnav and not cower. Very well done. Very in keeping with the canon character. And I'm glad to see the impact of the situation on her thought pattern, she's beginning to think more like ASR now...like this strange osmosis thing is going one between them.

All in all a beautiful piece of work, I remember I used to read your comments and wish you would take up writing, and am just SO glad you have. I will follow this, and I demand a scrap at least on updates...😳

Your Behaya-ness,

Nameera😆

keep going.