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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
interestin update n teaser...😊...lukin frward to d update...
missd Kunwar in update bt understand hw its imp. fr course of story...

n thanx fr takin up my suggestion😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Firstly about update
gud part 👏
Shakti is trying her best to be busy with her classes so that she wouldn't be able to miss anyone n baby it won't work if ur working someone very special.😉
Even wen Mukti talked about her she was fine but wen D3 came into discussion she suddnely behaved frustration, it proves kuch kuch hota hai.😛
Poor Mukti she dropped the idea to talk her more but she told her to check her fb account. 😔
Wow so finally saw the pic of that gal wid Kunwar n obviously that's true that he wil flirt with her . 😆
Wat a reflex action! 😲
First she was refusing to go wid ne1 those who met her last n8 but after seeing Kunwar with her she got ready.😆
Jealousy jealousy all d way hope u realize ur true feelings just the way Mukti understood that she is in love. 😍
I think u wil update it 2morrow na?
UPDATE ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Coming to teaser
interesting 😛
I wil roast that brad if he tried to do anything wrong wid Shakti. 😡
Can't wait more, update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
😲😲 cant wait for the next part please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
The teaser is amazing and hope somehow amar comes to the rescue in NY thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
i'm sorry for late update... i had to make some last minute additions... here's part 4... enjoy😊
Part 4

Shakti was feeling uneasy. What the hell am I trying to prove here? Why am I with this firang in his car going to some random person's party who I have never met in my life. I should just ask him to drop me back home.

Brad- Hey, You ok? Seem kinda lost… Nervous?... Coz I know how it is for you Indian girls. Should I drop you back?

And he laughs. Now Shakti's pride was at stake.

Shakti- No thanks, I'm fine.

Brad- Cool… you look great btw.

She was wearing a short, black, off shoulder dress. She just happen to wear it in the spur of the moment… but now she regretted choosing this outfit… his eyes roaming all over her body... she was very uncomfortable.

Shakti- Thanks

They reached the friend's house… the drive was long and she had no idea where they were… they got off the car and walked up the front porch… Brad had his hand placed lightly on her bare back guiding her towards the door… she wanted to flinch.

As soon as they entered the house she wanted to turn back and run home… she thought almost half of New York had gathered at the house… it was stuffy in there… smoke, odor of alcohol, loud earth wracking music and ofcourse no place to move around… Brad introduced her to some of his friends… she politely shook hands with each and had plastered a permanent smile all throughout the introductions.

Brad then took her to the Backyard… and she felt the remaining half of New York was stuffed in there… this reminded her of Shivam's party in D3… she laughed out loud… Brad looked confused for a minute but concluded that she was just having a good time.

Shakti was introduced to another bunch of people… She was tired of smiling and making small talks… She politely excused herself and went around exploring the house… She just wanted to be by herself for a few minutes for her facial muscles to relax after the continuous smiling.

She was just moving around the backyard when suddenly someone grabbed her from behind, holding onto her waist… she was startled and she turned with a jolt to find Brad smiling down at her… She could smell alcohol all over him… she flinched… He handed her a drink… she smelled it and handed it back to him.

Shakti- Thanks Brad but I don't drink.

Brad- oh common Shakti… just one… have it.

And he tried to hand her the glass again.

Shakti- No thank you Brad!

She was firm enough… so he just shrugged and gulped the drink down himself.

Brad- wanna dance?

Shakti- I don't think you are in any state to dance.

Brad- Sure I am… try me, love.

He winked at her and smirked… Just then Shakti's phone rang… wow! saved by the bell literally!!

She excused herself and found a corner to hear the caller out.

Shakti- Hi Alisha… sweetheart, you're right on time.

Alisha- hahaha Shakti… why? What's so great about the timing?

Shakti- Long story Alis… so temme… what's with you girl?... long time.

Alisha- ya I knowww… miss u Shakti… how are you doing?

They had a general conversation about how Shakti was adjusting to her new life in NY…what all had she learnt so far at the academy… and some gossips about India… Alisha handed her phone to Sneha, then Shantanu, Vinti, Sam, Archie and so on and they all had a similar conversation… She felt so good to talk to her gang especially now when she missed them so much…finally Bharat handed back the phone to Alisha.

Shakti- Kunwar kahan hai?... usse baat nahi hui meri.

Alisha- Haan actually woh Anjali ko ghar drop karne gaya hai… aata hi hoga.

Shakti was confused.

Shakti- Ghar drop karne gaya hai matlab? Aaj unka shoot nahi hai kya?

Alisha- No aaj Palki maam ne Anjali ko off diya hai… Amar and her were practicing for a dance performance all night… so maam asked Anjali to rest as she is not used to such hectic schedules… Amar bus aata hi hoga.

Shakti was distracted…all she could think of was Amar and Anjali practicing "all night"…and it's morning, couldn't that girl go home by herself? I'm sure our hero only must have volunteered... he's such a kid at times…he wouldn't even think the shoot would be affected due to his absence… she remembered the time when Amar had come to drop her home after a night's rehearsal…

Flashback-

She was practicing for her last and final dance of D3…. She had just returned from Macau and was already lagging behind with her shoot…. She was suppose to shoot for the footloose eliminations dance sequence with her weakling group…. The entire cast had left the set…. She was practicing alone…. She had already told her mom that she wouldn't be coming home tonight…. She was so caught up dancing she dint realize someone was standing at the door…. After she practiced her entire routine she went to get her water bottle…. But it was empty…. She heard someone clear his throat behind…. Startled she turned around to hit the person with her bottle…. But she banged into him…. He was carrying a glass of water and it spilled over both of them…. She moved back reflexly and looked up to see who it was…. (Yes guys as u must have guessed by now ;))

Shakti- Kunwar? Dude, wat the hell!

Amar- what?

Shakti- aise koi darata hai kya.

Amar- sorry ya…. Dint mean to scare you…. Btw, I got this for u….

He handed her the now empty glass…. She took it from his hand, raised her eyebrow and turned the glass upside down to show him it was empty.

Amar (baby smile)- Oops! (and shrugged)

Shakti laughed at his expression.

Shakti- Pagal!... idhar kya kar rahe ho? Ghar nahi jaana?

Amar- socha thumhare saath jaaun.

Shakti (smiled)- awww Kunwar that's sweet…. But I'm gonna practice all night.

Amar- no problem…. I'l watch (big grin)

Shakti just smiled…. turned her head from side to side thinking there was no point in arguing with him…. and went back to put on the music…. She started her rehearsal once again…. Again she was engrossed in dancing…. After almost 2 hours she decided to stop and rest…. She looked around for Amar…. She saw him sitting on the floor near the wall mirror with his head resting back…. Eyes closed…. With his mouth slightly parted…. He looked so cute…. She could not help but giggle…. She went close to him…. Kneeled down before him…. Placed her hand on his jaw and tried to shut his mouth…. But just as soon she removed her hand, his jaw dropped back to the same position…. She smiled…. Her eyes were roaming all over his face…. He slept so lovingly…. Shakti frowned…. She dint know why she thought that…. She then sat beside him and rested her head back on the wall and tried to sleep.

Next morning she woke up and yawned…. She looked at her side…. She couldn't see Amar…. Then she felt something on her lap…. She looked down to see Amar's head gently placed in her lap…. She smiled again…. Brushed a few strands of hair from his forehead…. She dint realize how long she kept playing with his hair when he stirred in his sleep…. She immediately removed her hand and started to wake him up.

Shakti- Kunwar…

Amar- mmm (he mumbled)

Shakti- Kunwar wake up! My feet are numb.

Amar opened his eyes and realized he was sleeping in Shakti's lap…. He looked up at her and smiled…. Shakti pushed his head from her lap and tried to get up.

Shakti- Gosh Kunwar…. Tumhara sirr hai, ya narayal.

They both stood up and stretched out…. They both were feeling sore after such an awkward sleeping position…. Shakti decided to go home as she was not due to shoot until evening…. Amar volunteered to drop her home…. Which she tried to refuse as Amar had a full day shoot ahead of him and he would get late…. But eventually she had to agree…. Gosh! he was so stubborn…. She smiled…. Later in the evening she heard from him that Palki maam was pissed with him for being late and he got a nice big lecture from her about that…. which he funny mimicked for her…. She just moved her head from side to side and laughed…. Pagal!

Present-

She dint realize that Alisha was talking on the line.

Alisha- Hello? Shakti?

Shakti- huh? Oh sorry Alis… what were u saying?

Alisha- Maine kaha main usse call karwati hun, once he gets back.

Shakti- it's ok Alis… main usse baad main call kar lungi… actually abhi khuch kaam hai.

Alisha- ok no problem… chalo rakhti hun… u take care… miss u… love u.

Shakti- Miss u too Alis… love u… Bye.

She disconnected the call… She felt like throwing her phone away… She walked back and joined the party… she headed straight for the Bar.

Shakti- One shot of Tequila please.

Bartender- Sure ma'am.

She gulped down the entire drink as soon as it was offered to her.

Shakti- Two more please.

The bartender raised his eyebrow but quietly did as he was told… Shakti had three more shots, when Brad came looking for her.

Brad- wow!… look who's here… so finally you've opened up… I like that.

Shakti looked up with a confused expression on her face…. Why did she see 6 Brads at one time?… She put her head back down on the bar platform… Brad came close and planted a kiss on her bare shoulder…

Brad- I'm going in the house, wanna join me?

Shakti lifted her head with a jolt and stumbled off the Bar stool clumsily.… Brad came close to her to steady her coz she was swaying.

Shakti pushed him back.

Shakti- Go away Brad!!

Her head was spinning… she had to hold onto the bar platform to steady herself… Brad again tried to hold her…. She jerked his hands away.

Shakti- Brad!! Just leave me alone.

Brad- Alright honey… whenever you're ready.

And he started laughing… he turned to the bartender and ordered a drink for himself… when he turned again to face her… she was gone… he looked around but couldn't find her… he just laughed harder and ordered some more drink… it won't be long when I take her to bed… let her enjoy the party in this state.

Shakti dint know where she was going… she bumped into several people on her way… but she eventually managed to reach the house without falling on her face… she found the washroom where she threw up twice… she washed her face with cold water… but the water did not really help… her head would not stop spinning… she got out of the main door and found an empty bench on the porch... she sat down and rested her head back… looked up at the sky… a tear rolled down her cheek… I hate you Kunwar!!

PS- do leave ur comments... and dont be diappoined with the end... as i have said earlier its necessary 😉 Pms are on the way.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
nice!!!
when are u updating next part?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
nice one tish...eagerly waiting fr the nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
its awesome...n the flash back was just amazing awww kunwar resting his head on shakti's lap...n i hate brad n his intensions...update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
one word to say awesome ...loved it
its superb the flashback was really superb...kunwar sleeping on shaktis lap sooo adorable ...loved it
and the end ahhh that brad😡 really wanna kill him
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part😍

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