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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update's I read all parts in one Go .Amazing FF waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Dear! Jst found n strtd readng dis awsm FF ystrdy, though i read 'KHUMARI' bt nvr knew abt 'MILAN' til nw...
In d 1st thrd i lykd d concept u made similar 2 movie 'Mohabbatein' i mean boardng mein buddng lv story!! U also included SRK.. So story mein raunak dal di...
Cumng 2 2nd thrd, i lykd dat Maaneet nvr 4gt n jst wr w8ng 4 each odr, deir nok-jhoks, deir study k bahane passionate romance!!
Lastly cumng 2 3rd thrd... I knw agr FF ka naam 'Milan' hai toh 'Judaai' toh hogi.. Bt dez separatns vl mk dem realise hw much dey r in lv n crave 4 each odr!!
Cumng 2 latest updt it wz heart-brkng 1... Uss 'Kiya' ka toh main antim kriya-karm kar dun..!! Bt i knw iss bar Geet usse itchng-powdr se b acche tarike se sabak sikhayegi! Aur precap k accordng i really want our angry young man 'Maan' in d leap, plz plz its a rqst!! I knw tum Maaneet ko jaldi milakar humein cute, romantic, naughty aur bahut shade wale Maaneet moments dogi!!
Thnx Dear! Lv u!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear.. I read ur ff uptil nw luving it.. Cnt soon n plx do pm me Whn u update nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
poor Geet
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 57



@sg.dreamygirl
Its ok dear😊
@Diva7
Nice song dear... I will surely use it, thnx...⭐️
Sorry guys for late update but Khumaari is in its ending phase so wanted to give it more time...

They say love is magic n magic is just an illusion

A trick to fool, drowning the bewitched mind in confusion

This illusion hurts n the deep wounds bleed

But there is no real magic to get them healed

The sound of bell filled the whole house n sweet voice echoed through the large rooms of the big mansion as a girl of 26 recited the arti to the gods.

Good morning uncle. I have packed your lunch n don't forget to take your medicines once in every 2 hours. Geet said giving him the prashad.

Haan beta I will take the medicines. Rajendra said.

Hmm... Geet said n walked escorting Rajendra outside who was leaving for office.

He sat in his car n waved before leaving but got just a faint smile in response. He wanted her to wave like normal persons do but she never did what normal people did. She was a changed person now, circumstances changed her. She was not the same Geet who used to be lively n always smiling, that Geet died long time back.

She now hardly smiled n when she did it never reached her eyes. Not only she changed from inside but she was totally transformed physically also. Her hairs were longer now reaching her waist slightly her hips. Her always glowing face has now turned pale n there were remarkable dark circles below her eyes. She was sleep deprived n the little time she slept was with help of pills. Not only, she took pills for sleeping but to fight depression too. She was thinner n as much lifeless from outside as she was from very inside.
But she had no complaints. The time she had seen before was worse n moreover she was now living because she can't suicide not that she never tried but every time her efforts failed. It seemed like god was not ready to grant her single wish. So here she was Geet Handa living her life as a mere formality.

Geet di... A girl from neighbourhood came rushing to Geet who was working in kitchen preparing lunch for her own.

Kya hua Neha? Why so excited? She asked stirring the boiling curry on gas.

Wo Geet I won the skit competition. Neha said proudly. N Shubham who was playing my romeo asked me to be his girlfriend.

Geet stiffened. What did you said? She asked continuing her work.

Di ofcourse I said yes. Maine aapko bataya tha na that I have big crush on him. Neha reminded.

Neha you are just in 11th. You should be concentrating on your studies or anything else. But these things are waste. Geet stated turning towards her.

Oh ho di... This is called love n it is not waste. Neha said dreamily.

Infatuation... Its called infatuation. Love is just an imagination. These things look good in television or movies. Real life is far more different.

Di aap itna darti kyu ho? Neha asked.

Mai.. mai darti nai hu. Geet retorted than calmed herself. I just know. I have seen life more than you n what I am saying is the bitter truth. The sooner you understand the better.

Geet resumed her work n Neha understood there was no point arguing with her.

The sickening feel of love

Making you weak, getting you drugged

Lovely at start but what remains at last? The shreds of scarred soul,

n the weeping heart

A man, 27, stepped out of his car walking over the tiled floor, his shoes shinning spotless as if just pulled out of the box. Charcoal fannel suit draped elegantly around his, what was clearly a sculpted body. Broad shoulders, no waist. His profile had perfect slope of a roman god.

Girls gasped as Maan passed them. But not too loud, no matter how gorgeous he looked from outside but they were all well aware of the fact that he was burning lava from inside. Nobody knew the reason for his high temper, he was a mystery. A puzzle unsolved. Everyone feared him n that was his success, an achievement he had attained after changing himself completely.

Into my cabin, now. Maan said to Adi, before entering his cabin.

It seems MK is not in good mood. Tasha commented.

Tell me something new. Shasha replyed.

Y...yes Sir. Adi stammered standing before Maan. He knew he was dead now.

Adi If I am not wrong I had asked you to send the designs to Nanda's. Maan asked raising his head from behind the file, his voice strong n clear.

Yes I had asked Tasha to send it.

She had send him the old designs n not the rectified one. Maan shouted n his voice reached outside the cabin making everyone jump.

S...s..sir

Shut up I don't pay you guys to make mistakes. If someone is inefficient then fire them. Maan ordered. Now get out.

Sir your sister is here to meet you. Pinky informed on the intercom.

Then what are you waiting for? Send her in. Maan though was an extremely busy man but he always took out time for his family, at least to hear them out.

Yes sir.

Bhai wo I had something important to tell you. But by the time I came downstairs you had already left. Ani said entering Maan's cabin.
You are saying its my fault that I left on time.

No bhai.. I didn't mean that. Ani stated hurriedly. I should have woken up earlier.

Hmm now that you have realised your mistake, shall we come to the point.

Bhai wo... umm... Ani knew he would blast over her the moment she will utter what she desired but then she had to tell him, its now or never. Bhai, Arjun...

Maan kept his file aside n his glaring eyes scared her.

Arjun aur mai

I know Dadimaa told me.

So... She asked with loads of expectations in her eyes.

NO... He said flat on her face without caring about the heart break he was giving his sister.

Par bhai I love him.

Its again not my fault. I didn't asked you to love any freak. Maan said, her pleads doing nothing to change his decisions.

Tears spilled out of her eyes. Bhai please I won't be able to live without him. We want to get married. What's the problem?

Ani I told you my decision. You are not getting married to that guy. Now go back I have work to do n you have college to attend.

She looked at him from behind tear. It was proved now her brother was a heartless man. She was angry why he couldn't understand her.

Okay, enjoy your so called work but I am never talking to you again because I hate you. She screamed n ran out.

Maan banged his fist on the table. He didn't want to hear from his sister mouth that she hates him. He was just doing his damn job to protect her. She was naive n he knew how much it pains when dreams shatters.

I just did what was best for her. She will realise it later. Maan thought to himself, immersing into work again. Files n blueprints were his world now n his work his breath.

Both were incomplete, both were damaged

But one decided to fight the brutal reality with anger,

While the other with silence.

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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭feeling really sad for both of them
grhhh its all bcz of maan's dad that all this is happening and not to forget that kiya 😡but where r the too demons and where is meera ?
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update osheen...

So much of pain... because of their immense love for each other...

They are incomplete without each other... Separation has changed their personalities... Geet from a lively person to a silent and sad person... And Maan to an angry aggressive business man...

Emotions were beautiful sweets... loved the way u have exhibited the changes in them... their life style...

glad you updated... and am waiting for the next... but before that am waiting for Khumaari... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u update this one.
but that too a sad one.
both r suffering.
now update next part soon yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
leap ... Oh babaji ... Poor Maaneet ...

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