Maaneet OS - |Intezaar|

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ho gayi shaam kisi ke intezaar me,

dhal gayi raat kisi ke intezaar me,

phir houa savera kisi ke intezaar me,
intzaar ki aadat pad gayi kisi ke intezaar me.
Clad in a heavy maroon and silver wedding dress, with khandani jewellery all together weighing 25 Kgs, she herself was not sure was it the the weight or anxiety giving her trouble.How her heart was pumping at erratic beats and palms sweaty out of anxiety.Geet was really anxious as she was geeting married to the man she loved.she was waiting for this day since she was 18 and now it was happening after 6 long years.
There was hungama going on around she could see everyone was running around doing there bit.It was geet's wedding the youngest and most beloved of the family,the house was buzzing with activities all were waiting for the barat and geet thinking this was her last day at her parents house was sad,but at the same time she was excited to be his wife the man she loved.
She remembered how they became friends and that friendship turned into love,she was so scared when he suggested they talk to their parents about their relationship.The Khurana's and Handa's were family friends and she was scared if they told them about their love it would affect the families.She laughed off at her insecurities,she was more shocked then surprised when the families were deligthed with this particular news and in no time the wedding was being planned.
As she was lost in her own world remembering those moments of life with him she heard some noise outside,as she peeped out she was him standing there with with his hands folded and his eye downcast.He brother was standing infront of him and he did not seem pleased,everyone was present there his family her family and him but the atmosphere was heavy and tense.
She walked down as slowly as possible her heart was not at peace she was fearing the worst and she did not knew why seeing his head downcast hurt her deep down."Kya geet" you are just being unreasonable and thinking negative she said to herself as she walked down the stairs.
"Mein yeh shaddi nahin kar sakta,"I am sorry
She stood there as she heard those words coming from him, he was saying this on their wedding day she was left numbed.She wanted to ask tell him he should quit joking around as this was no joke.At first she thought he was playing pranks on her but when she saw him eye she knew it was no joke and her heart sank with that leaving her empty soul.He stood there infront of her with his face downcast,he was guity and that was visible from his eye,eventhough they did not met hers.She knew him this much infact she only knew him all these years her world revolves around him.
He repeated his words which were barely audible,She heard people gasp in shock but that did not matter all that matter was him and seeing him this dejected was not what she want.People were talking no they were gosipping and feeling bad for the girl who was rejected on her wedding day."Bechari" she saw some women commented it stings but more then that seeing his dejected was piercing her heart.
He was being dragged out by her brother and their families were just standing there without any emotions,she wanted to stop her veerji but she was was not sure if she had any right over him now.Slowly eveyone left the place feeling bad for her and cursing the man who left her on her wedding day but she was not worried about that she was worried about him.
His mom walked up to her as she surrender to her emotions and falls down crying her heart out,not in her worst of nighhtmares she has thought of this him walking out on her and their relationship."Geet" she hugged her and said she was sorry,she did not remember who took her to her bedroom and she lay there thinking about the way things too U-turn.
She saw her parents sad and dejected and so were his, she thought she was the reason behind this."Humay maaf kardo" his parents were folding their hands infront of her's and she did not find that a pretty site.His parents were were like her own she has grown up with them and respected them like her parents."He is no more our son" i am disowning him his father said and she saw them in tears.
She had to talk to him and now,as much as she need her answers she cannot see this happening to hin and his parents,she knows how much his parents and his family means to him especially him mom.She picked up her phone and dailed his number she has to set this right and no time to morn.
He picked his phone after some rings and she did not knew how to talk to him,as she has lost that right over him."Maan" mein I...I actually want to talk to you it is important,he was shocked that she called but he did not want to give her any hopes so he said what was the safest."Look Geet' what ever I said was true and I don't want to discuss that anymore there is no way we can go back.
"Maan" it is not about us but we have to talk please, she said sincerely and that was when he could not refuse and they decided to meet at cafe.It was not easy task to walk out of her home but she had too.She reached here and saw him sitting with someone at his side,walking up to them she stood there."I am sorry late hogaye".
Their eye met and it was the first time when he refused her and walked out of her life saying he cannot marry her.There was guilt and pain and she could very much see it,she saw a women sitting next to him.As her questioning eye went to the women he got the hint,"Sameera" my wife and her whole world came crashing down.
She was dead her heart was just breathing but her soul went missing at that instant,she wanted to cry shout at him for ditching her like this but then she saw his eye and she promised she saw tears.She put up brave face she has always been practical more then him it was him who was driven by emotions."Hi sameera" mein geet she forwarded her hand as the women greeted one another maan he walked out as if not being able to take.
She sat at the floor all disoriented she was coming up with terms as what had happened in two days.It was just few days ago she was the most happiest of human but now she sat there helpless.He was married and kicked out on the verge of being disowned by his family and that pricked her.



She knew what his family means to him and having met sameera yesterday she was sure the girl was nice and had all the qualities of being khurana khandan bahu.The problem here was no one will accept her as one,geet knew she had to do something even if it ment breaking her heart all over again.She stood up with a determined look she has to get all the happiness for both the families.


As much as she love her family his was also very important to her and very evidential part if her life seeing them in this state was not bearable and when she was indirect reason to their miseries.



She walked up to her father hesitantly and stood by his side, her father looked up as he saw her standing at exact same spot for quite a time.'Geet' Kuch chahiye beta he asked her indicating her to come and sit by his side."Papa" aap apni beti seh bohot pyar karte hona.Her father patted her head and said she was the most precious.


It was not the easiest of decisions but for his daughters sake he would do it and that too when she was in such a Vulnerable state emotionally broken.If this was something that could bring back the smile that reaches her eye he would put a side this ego.



Standing at the door of his house with her father by her side,they were welcomed with full heart but the problem was all hearts were not at content.



Mohinder Kuch kaam tha kya was the first question as they were seated,each and every gaze was on them Mohinder tried to say what he wanted to be words were not being formed.


"uncle aap please maan ko maaf karde jiye" geet blurted out with out lifting her eye.She was sure everyone was shocked even without looking at them.Geet beta we are sorry about all this his dad was apologetic,geet was fast enough so assure him and the entire family she was fine and have no complains.



She stood up and sat at dadima's feet taking her hand and asking her to forgive her grandson."please dadima aap toh is ghar mein sab se barai hona".Tears were threatening to escape but she hold it,dadima placed her hand on her cheeks trying to soothe away the pain the old eye can see.

She went to each and every member of his family and convinced them into having maan back in their lives and accept sameera as the daughter in law of the house.


Everyone but one person she knew it would not be the easiest of task,her best friend will not buy this of moving on and forgiving drama.Vicky has always been there for her,younger brother of Maan Singh Khurana the same attitude as his brother not easy to convince.


She loved maan with all her heart but it was Vicky who she confined in similar in age same school,college, same group of friends.she knew it was not the easiest of tasks making him believe it was better for everyone.


Vicky sun toh sahi na,she went and
placed her hand on his shoulder trying to get his attention but the shrugged it off.She tried talking again but not paying any heed he walked out of hall.


She follow him out of the house Vicky please baat ko samajh ne ki Koshish to karo she pleaded.She was in tears never did she realize this would be do difficult as masked it in front of the family but with Vicky she could not hold it back.


Seeing her breaking down his anger shot up more for himself then maan veerji,he had seen their love brewing and never in his wildest nightmares has he imagined his brother leaving her all alone on their wedding day and getting married with someone else.


He had decided never to see his brothers face leave alone forgiving and here geet was making it difficult for hi,he cannot say no to her but what she is asking is her death.What other might not see he does.Taking her in his arms trying to sooth away the pain that was permeant now."geet" tu roh maat haan please tu jo kahaygi wahi hoga.


One half of the battle was done but the second half was not easy task,yes her father was by her side and others on her family did not has much of a say when her father speak but brij veerji was not going to take this lightly.


Maan sat stood by the window looking at the dark pitch night,never had he wished things turn this way but he was helpless he never got hold of the situation.Her face kept surfacing those chocolate brown eye haunted him,he love her beyond words and knowing that he will not be able to feel the same for any other women.


Sameera was sound sleep he looked at her knowing that he wont be able to love her but he will make sure he performs all his duties as husband he has been unfair to geet but will make sure that does not happen to sameera.


He knew geet would understand his situation but never confine in her,she still came to meet them why do she has to be so practical.He wanted her to hate him,shout at
him,abuse him or better kill him but not being indifferent it hurts beyond.


Geet sat on floor with all her memories of them,from cards to letters,pictures and all the gifts he has given her.She had to let this go but her heart was not being obedient it was refusing to follow orders."Babaji meri madat karo" she said looking towards the top,scanning through the items brought back memories which made it more difficult.

Her hand reached a anklet she looked at with affection but she knew there was no right she has on this items so it moved it aside.


A hello kitty watch was next in order,his words echo and she gave a bitter smile.she remembered how he chided her when she told him she wanted that watch."geet" tum kya choti bachi ho that you want hello kitty watch.She was not pleased with his words and walked away saying something under breath cursing for sure.



Clearing up everything deciding what to do with the items that lay in front of her.Hugging his picture placing it close to her heart she cried her heart out as if it was better to let go of what was being a burden.clutching on to his pic as if it was the last time she felt a sleep in the floor.

Another day and new challenges should begin,hoping everything should be fine or at least praying with new hopes there was wait for new day...Naya din ka intezaar shayad bas intezaar hi rahgaya.

He was standing there infront of his family all of them seem fine and welcoming and not only them her family was there too,he was lost he never wanted this he wanted them to hate him to never forgive him he deserve their hatred. Mom's mother came forward and did the arti of the couple and welcome them with a hug and lot of blessing,one by one everyone came forward and show their love.
He was glad and happy for Sameera but for himself he was not sure, his eye wander around trying to locate her but she was not insight.He saw Sameera interacting with his family and he was at peace that they have acceptet her and he knew that at who's instance it was done and for that he hate himself more.He knew he was a loser her he has lost on what he depend a life which he desired but the promise was what binded him into a relationship with sameera and he was sure he will give her "her share of happiness".
Geet he heard Vicky shouted her name as if he was annoyed, turning around he saw them in their childish way of annoying on another and today it was geet who was making life difficult for vicky with her antics and a smile touch his face.As he was lost in he there he collided with Vicky "Sorry" he was instant with his apology and then he saw his brother giving him bitter smile and said Yes veerji you have to be sorry and I am sure you know what I mean here,with that said he walked away leaving maan with his miseries.
She was standing a distance witnessing the exchange between brother and she was sure not happy with vicky being bitter towards his brother.Following him she block him way and gave him not so pleasant look " WHAT" vicky barked. Yes, What the hell is this vicky displeasure evident in her voice. "Dekh" vicky i am not happy with you being this harsh on your brother, Geet mein tu nahin hoon samjhi aur yeh sab emotional talk na tu apne pass rakh. Geet placed her head on his shoulder and with her most adorable voice and cute pout said Vicky please mere liye and how could Vicky deny this and both of them hugged.While still hugging her best friends geet said Vicky tu itna upset kyun ho raha hai abhi tere chances badgaye na... tu meri back up option tha na so I will marry you now.KYA meine kyon sa paap kiya hai with that said he ran away leaving the gigling geet by herself.
Oblivous to her surrounding she stood there laughing away,once done with her antics she turn around and hit something solid frustrated she look up about to abuse.He was staring at her with pain in his eye and he could see the same she was trying to hide."Hate me geet" his voice laced with self-hatred and she look up staring in his eye and he knew it was not possible.Why are you not saying anything shout at me... hate me but please don't be indifferent as if it doesn't matter or I don't matter. I can live with your hatred but not with the fact I don't matter.
Maan she hugged him a friendly one and with a beautiful smile on her face she forward her hand and said will you be my friend, confusing him with her behaviour she went on saying let's start for the best relationship "Friends" and gave his a quick hug before walking away she turned back and said Maan I will be fine you don't worry.
He knew nothing will be fine and he was scared for that.
P.S - I know this is old stuff but The last portion is new 😳😳 ... I know I know it was suppose to be a SS but I turned it to OS cuz I thought I will not be able to finish that 😆😆...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hey continue it yaar
it was nice piece
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSgayatri

hey continue it yaar

it was nice piece

That was the ending 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..its Awesome 👏
loved it...
I hope u'll update d nxt part soon..
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nooo every story has to be happily ever after... Yyy... Y did maan marry sameera...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesume really nyc...but plzzz end thora aur update kardo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ansaaahhh ... mujhay Maaneet union chahiye .. kill Sameera ... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yar
waiting for next part
thanks a lot for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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if he loved her so much,den y he married sam?
its paining yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I shall comment later.. :)

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