ArHi FF: The tears I've cried/ ALTERNATE Ending.

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sanj1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMG that was really good!!! I really cant believe this is the first time ur writing an FF! Great story but really feel sorry for Khushi! Hope she gets her love back soon!
Please update soon! And dont forget to PM me! 😊

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

great start.. please add me to the pm list... would love to read more...

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day_lily

@day_lily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Interesting plot...

realli loved it...

Pls add me to ur PM list

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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Great story! feel sorry for Khushi. add me to your PM list⭐️

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Roopa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Great start and well written..pls continue soon

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nisaa sarin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Author's note:

First of all, I want to thank each and every one of you for your responses. Honestly, I didn't think I would be able to write a part 2, let alone get started on part 3. You guys are the best kind of encouragement a person needs.

That said, I want to make something clear.

I haven't thought of an ending for this story. And mostly probably, it won't be a happily ever after. We already have too many of those. The world doesn't actually have any happily ever afters. Most stories in life end in a compromise or a gamble or if you're really unlucky… they remain unfinished.

A little reality, once in a while, in the land of fairy tales is not necessarily a bad thing.

-Thank you

Nisaa

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

poor khushi. how ruthless anrav. hope she does runaway so arnav fels guilty.

xxx

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Nisa dont do this yaar.. they are so cute together.. i agree he is a bit ruthless and cruel at times, make him suffer but pls try to give a happy ending.. :)

btw i loved ur story.. it started very well.. would like to read further :)

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

This is a great start and I think khushi could go through her entire life loving Arnav without him giving her any love back... but wouldn't that just make her go mental? please give them a nice ending... but it doesn't have to happen right away :) Please PM me when you write the next part... thanks

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

plz plz not a sad ending...coz as u said we already have lot of drama in real life...we are looking for some respite thru these stories...

u can make it a bit melancholic...but sad ending makes me feel depressed😭

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