Enchanter: A Rom. Comedy **Note on Pg. 126** - Page 49

AMAZING...JZ TOO GOOD...PLZ UPDATE SOON...

umm...well i must say...dis is d best ff i hv EVER read on dis forum...best...i read ol yr chapters in 1 go...n Boy! they were just mind-blasting...hehehe...so as i say in ol my cmmnts...i m very impatient...so pls update soon...n thres sumthng rong wid d buddy button of mine...i guess its due my net connection...so wud u mind sending me a buddy request...or mayB i can send u 1 if i get it working soon...n yeah...1 more thng...u r a pro at ryting...bt i guess u shud ryt khushi's perspective...cuz u noe dat has more humour...or even bttr...y dun mix their perspectives...or mayB u can continue wid yr suspense bout arnav in khushi's view of d situation...i shall lyk it both ways...n as i sed b4...in dis ff i lyk khushi's thoughts more...not dat u rote dis part bad...bt u noe jst saying...n now dat i hv ritten such a long cmmnt...do update okay? n dat 2 ASAP n dun frget 2 PM me! Pls?

nice ff... just read it from page 1... loved it...😊

finally i get to reply!! yayyy they kiseed , and the fountain setting was so sweet 😍 can't wait to see what happens next.
great update all in all! i loved the mint sauce bit , khushi is like a trooper wen it comes to food.. and its so cute how she gets shy to eat infront of arnav 😆.. and the sweets convo..i really loved! u summed up the choice of jalebi's and arnav similarities so well! 👏


i really the khushiin this ff , n if it is based on u, u rock lol..the bubbliness and zest for life is refreshing! and you present it so well in this ff. and btw the snippets about ur family are hilarious to read too! u sound like an entertaining bunch 😆 n even when you say ur updates aren't funny, i still end up 🤣

good luck with exams etc, hope ur mums better!!

"Ahhh!" I scream as I fall off the bed and hold on to my blanket. I look around my room and don't see any site of Arnav being dressed as a clown and doing muhwaa to me. Phew!

I take a deep breath and sigh. Breathe in and breathe out. Breathe in and breathe out. My lovely handsome boss was not a clown: was not a clown. He was a business man in a suit, with a stern look, and meanie smirk on his face all the time. He does not wear yellow-red stripe suit, red tomato nose, and wild creepy eek hair. No..no.no!

I take another deep breath and look at the clock, which read 7:30am. Devi Maiya, you are a meanie! You couldn't let my stupid alarm go off, but you could give me a weird dream that was making me panic. Meanie!

Hmmm...

Hmmm...

Hmmm...

This is hard. Should I go with the yellow? Or with the red? Or with the green? Or with the blue? Man, who knew picking M&M's were. People say picking clothes are hard, I say wrong. Picking what to eat next is the most difficult job in the world. If I pick out a wrong type of food, then that adds to a horrible taste + disgusting flavor+ disappointed for Khushi Kumari Gupta + ...okay, I don't really know what's next. I look at the red M&M closely, trying to see if there were any faults to it. But it looks clear, got to eat it now. "Mmm." I moan as I lick my lips with my tongue just as an elder couple turn to look at me. WHAT?! Can't one enjoy food? I always knew or just had this feeling that Remy (he is the mouse from the movie Ratatouille) and I were long lost best friends. Nobody understands it Remy than besides us.

I take a step forward as the pedestrian light is blinking just as a black Maybach pulls up to me. I look at the car and turn away. Now where is that pepper spray? I dig through my purse just as the back window rolls down and Arnav's staring at me. I look at him as I tighten my hands as he looks back at me with wide eyes. What? Hey Devi Maiya, don't say that I have something on me. Hey Devi Maiya'..i pray as I look down but find nothing. I look back at Arnav, who's now staring at my other hand. I look at the hand and gasp.

I was pointing my pepper spray in Arnav's direction. Way to go me! I quickly hide the pepper spray in my purse and walk to Arnav.

"What the-?...Was that a pepper spray?" Arnav asks me as he keeps lasering his eyes at my poor purse, who's probably melting right now from his hotness. I look at Arnav and shake my head.

"Nnn-ooo." I lie as I stand up straighter and taller, and cross my arms as if I'm security guard with a six pack, where sadly you can't even see my two pack...Amma!, "Why would you say that?"

Arnav looks at me with now a mischievous smirk that read-I know- it- and-you-know-it-too. "Khushi, then why did it say pepper spray (my dad got me a pepper spray for going-to-college-present ...ahahaha...I cracked up and looked at my dad. But he looked at me with full seriousness and gave me a detail-to-detail detail lecture of how I should protect myself. Not even joking...but my dad even taught me some karate kicks...which I use to open doors at school when I'm really tired...seriously...I'm like kapow! And boom the door is widely open. Warning: If you don't stretch your muscles...don' do it...you will get a sprain.But it was hilarious...I keep on telling my dad that i don't need anything. all i need to do is act insane and watch how people run away or just sing...because my singing is so horrible that i swear even the glass window can break..I love my dad...but sadly I don't even know where the pepper spray is. And thinking of that...maybe I should find it...you never know...haha).

"So what?! So what if I have a pepper spray. Every girl or I should say every human need a PEPPER SPRAY!" I yell at Arnav with my hands on my hip just as few people turn around and stare at me while on their phones. I'm not fully sure but I think I just saw a taxi driver look at me and shake his head. How rude! I try to glare at Arnav but I sadly smile and say sweetly," You should have one too!"

Arnav looks at me as if I'm insane, "Khushi, no wonder a taxi can't stop for you. You're unbelievable." Arnav shakes his head but I can see his eyes twinkling with laughter. That's it, he crossed the line. How dare he speak about mine and the taxi driver's affair. Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, prepare to be hurt! I lean in and point at Arnav just my delicious betraying Starbuck's chair tea latte spills on me. Amma!

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*****
awesome...

my arshi is hillarious... jus wish sumday we are together... we will have a super blast...

waiting for d chapter...:)

omsghh!!

Originally posted by: Dark_Desire

omsghh!!

i think we r like long lost best friends!!!

i do not lie

me and my dad have crazy stories too!!

last summer my dad and i got my mom so pissed off

she kicked us outta the house

so me and my dad headed for niagara and stayed up all night at an arcade spent a couple hundred dollars there

when we come home the next dad my mom is like to my dad, instead of teaching ur daughter how to apologize for mistakes u go and have fun

and so we got kicked out for another day

LMAO!!! best summer ever

and then one day

me and my dad were teasing my mom on her cooking

we tick her off so bad that she points a knife at us and was like one more word and i swear it won't be good for u

so me and my dad both blurt out at the same time "we come in peace, spare our lives!" we laughed so hard at that and then my mom told us to cook instead and left the kitchen. so i decided to make mash potatoes and my dad rice. we put the potatoes in the pressure cooker and i guess the whistle was loose and well it blasted into the ceiling and since that day me and my dad r not allowed in the kitchen

it was my dad's birthday so i made him a cake and we were abt to cut it

and he blows out the candle and m like congrats u old man, how do feel being so old. i guess my dad was a bit sensitive abt getting old he got pissed and left the house and didn't come back

my dad is a drama queen sometimes

then at another time i wanted to go to NYC with my friends for new yrs but my mom said no and so my dad told my mom tat he and i were going to go see his goddaughter in montreal for 3 days. we went to NYC with my friends in his van and came back. it was friggin awesome but when we came back my mom found out that we never made it to my dad's goddaughter's house and on top of that one of my mom's friend saw us at a cafe in NYC and told my mom she met us. such shame, we cud have gotten away with it if it weren't for my moms spies. i swear there everywhere.

anyways m tired of typing so i'll save some for another day, i cud go on forever. lol enjoy the stories!

luv

NIKKI :D

haha...i totally understand u...i was cracking up over here...hilirious...i love my family. two yrs ago my mom and my brother went to india...leaving me and my dad alone for two weeks. sadly, they went on x-mas-meaning all stores closed.
so we decided to make tofu and rice. well-everything was going splendid except when it came to the part between choosing which one is masala and which one is haldi...
so after doing eeenie meenie minie moe...i knw i agree after doing it on that...we choose the masala accidently.
my dad pours the masala and says, "hmmm...that's not enough." well he keeps on pouring until it turns dark red-the color of blood.
and we both look at each other with wide grin and say: who said we didn't know how to cook.
welll...the next thing u knw...are faces are red, sweating heavily, and my dad is running around and squealing like a girl for something sweet.

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