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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Some of u r thinking that Maan might get jealous because of Prem sorry to disappoint u guys this story is different Maan won't get jealous as he does not have any feelings for Geet. There r many unexpected elements that r hidden in this story Prem has a very crucial role in this FF.
Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it
love-Piya
PART 7
Maan: Aisi kya khaas baat hai Geet ki aakhon mein; kitni saadaran hai iski aakhein [There is nothing special in her eyes they look so ordinary]
Geet felt hurt by his words; Maan had once again rejected her and that too in front of a stranger
Prem looks at Maan for a second and then moves his gaze back to the magical eyes of Geet
Prem: Main batatha hoon k mujhe inki aakhon mein kya nazar aa raha hai [Let me tell u what can I read in her eyes]
Prem: Hasseno ki kami nahi hai iss duniya mein par unn karodo haseeno k paas bhi aisi ruhani aakhein nahi hongi [There r many beauties in this world but none of them r blessed with the such divine and soulful eyes]
Prem: Jee toh karta hai k bina palke jhapkaye inn pyari nighahon ka deedar main karta rahu kyunki inki aakhein bina kisi swarth k har anjaan ya jaanepechane insaan par bus pyar hi barsathi hai [My heart wishes to keep looking at these magical eyes as they are so selfless that they go on spilling love on everyone be it a stranger or a known person]
Geet raised her eyes; as this simple statement of Prem healed some wounds of her heart
Prem smiled as he could see a blend of emotions in her eyes
Prem: Haan ratthi bhar bhi swarth nahi hai inki nighahon mein bhale hi koi inka dil tod de ye aakhein uss shaks k liye phir bhi dua hi maangengi[There is not even a small place of selfishness in her eyes; it doesn't matter if asomeone has stabbed her heart these eyes will always pray for the wellbeing of that person]
Geet was surprised Prem understood her heart's condition just by looking at her eyes
Prem: Maasyumiyat se bhari inki aakhon ko kudrat ne kuch iss tarah tarasha hai k sajawat ki har ek cheez inki saadgi k saamne pheeki pad jaaye [Nature has decorated these innocent eyes so beautifully that every artificial means of beauty fails to mark its place in front of her simplicity]
Prem: Hoor bhi inki matbhari nighayon ko dekhar sharma jaaye kyunki shayad hoor mein koi milawat ko sakthi hai par Geet ki aakhon mein uske sacche dil ki parchayi nazar aathi hai aur saccha dil khuda ki tasveer ko jhalatha hai; duniya mein koi aisa shaks nahi jo khuda ki aakhon mein aakhein daalkar khada reh sake [The fairies shy away from her angelic eyes as there r chances that there might be some default in those fairies but Geet's eyes reflect the beauty of her true heart and each reflection depicts the face of God in it; there is no one in this world who has the courage to look directly into the eyes of the almighty]
Prem immediately lowered his gaze as if trying to make her understand the depth of his words
Prem: Aaakhein hai k dariyaan ye main nahi jaanta par itna samaj chuka hoon k inn jheel si gehri aakhon mein ek sapna chupa hua hai; ye sapna chand taro ko chune ka nahi balki kisi apne ka saath paane ki tamanna ko jhalka raha hai [Her eyes r like a river and I can see a hidden dream in the deep waters of her eyes, they r not dreaming to touch the moon and the stars they r dreaming to find someone who would be belong to her by all means]
Prem:
" Teri dil ki kahani bayan kar rahi hai teri aakhein
Zubaan par aa na saki wo daastan bayan kar rahi hai teri aakhein
Khuda ki parchayi hai tu tere ankhahe dard ko chupne na degi teri ye aakhein
Khoobsurati ka aaiyna hai tu suraj ki chamak se bhi chamkeli hai teri ye aakhein
Falak se vishal hai tu kudrat ka karishma hai teri ye aakhein"
[Your eyes are reading out the story of your heart
Words which failed to reach your lips are getting communicated through your eyes
U r the shadow of the almighty your eyes won't allow u to hide your sorrows
U r a beautiful mirror the glow of your eyes are more radiant than the sunbeams
Ur folds r much wider than the sky your eyes are the most magical blessing of this nature]
Prem: Inke aakhon ki khoobsurati ko koi kaise jhutla saktha hai? [How can someone fail to notice the beauty of her eyes?]
Prem looked at Maan
Prem: SACH KAHU TOH JIS SHAKS KO GEET KI AAKHEIN SAADHARAN NAZAR AA RAHI HAI MUJHE TOH LAGTA HAI K WO SHAKS HI NAHI BALKI USS SHAKS KI SOCH BHI SAADHARAN HAI [TO BE FRANK ENOUGH THE PERSON WHO THINKS THAT GEET'S EYES R ORDINARY MUST HIMSELF BE AN ORDINARY INDIVIDUAL WITH A VERY CHEAP MIND]
Maan felt as if someone had slapped him on his face (Piya is very happy Maan 😡 deserved this treatment)
Geet: Prem aap toh... [Prem u r ...]
Prem: Geet main aapse tabtak baat nahi karunga jabtak aap apna vaada pura nahi karti [Geet I won't talk to u until and unless u fulfill ur promise]
Geet: Kaunsa vaada? [Which Promise?]
Prem: Yaad hai maine aapse kaha tha k agar humari dubara mulakat ho jaathi hai toh main aapke haath ki coffee zarur peeyunga [Remember I had told u that if at all we meet again then I will surely have the coffee that u would make with your hands]
Geet: Aap baithiye main bus abhi coffee lekar aathi hoon [Have a seat I will just get your coffee]
Prem: Waiting; your time starts now
Geet started laughing she didn't even realize that Prem had successfully managed to bring her out from her grief just by his sweet talks
Maan wanted to grab the attention of Prem but Prem was ignoring him completly
Geet comes out with the coffee
Adi: Chalo ab main jis kaam k liye yaha aaya hoon wo kaam kar lethe hai [Ok guys let me tell u the reason for my arrival]
Geet: Adi bhaiya aap yaha mujhse milne nahi aaye kisi kaam se aaye hai jaayiye main aapse baat nahi karti [Adi u r here for some work I thought u came to meet me go I won't talk to u]
Prem: Main bhi tumhare saath hoon Geet itne din se janab ko keh raha tha k ek baar Mumbai aa jaa mujhse milne k liye magar nahi kabhi meri baat nahi sunni [I completly agree with u Geet so many times I told him to give me a simple visit but he never agreed]
Adi: Oye hello ye tum dono mujhe emotional baato se darau mat [Hello stop blackmailing me with your emotional talks]
Geet: Aur agar bannd nahi karu toh kya karoge aap bataiye [If I continue blackmailing u then what will u do answer me]
Adi: Meri matthi maari gayi hai jo main tujhse panga lu [I am not mad to mess with u]
Maan: (thinking) Ye log kya faltu baate lekar baith gaye hai [Why r they getting involved in such stupid talks]
Maan: Adi tu kuch kaam ki baat kar raha tha [Adi I guess u were going to tell us something important regarding work]
Adi: Are haan toh suno main ek movie bana raha hoon iss movie ko Prem produce karega aur main chahtha hoon k iss movie mein leading actor... [O yes listen guys I am making a movie and Prem is going to produce it and as leading actors I would love to have...]
Maan: Bus main samaj gaya tu yahi chahtha haina k main MSK tumhare movie mein lead actor ka kaam karu toh tere khush hone ka time aa gaya hai kyunki mujhe tera ye offer manzoor hai [I got it u want me; MSK to be the lead actor of ur movie well then there is a good news for u I agree to be a part of ur movie]
Adi and Prem were somewhat surprised
Adi: Haan tu thik bol raha hai par... [Yes u r right but..]
Maan: Dekha Geet mere liye ghar tak offers aa rahe hai mujhe STRUGGLE karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai [Look Geet offers are knocking on my doorstep there is no need for me to STRUGGLE]
Geet understood the hidden meaning behind his words
Prem saw her smile fading from her face and somehow managed to understand that this statement of Maan was not as simple as it appeared it was more of a taunt
Prem: Adi Maan ko actress ka naam nahi batauge? [Adi won't u tell Maan aboutthe leading lady of the movie?]
Maan: Kahi Naintara toh nahi? [Is it Naintara?]
Adi could also sense some taunt in Maan's words so he decided to give him a taste of his own medicine indirectly
Adi: Ye story maine ek ladki ko dimag mein rakhkar likhi hai aur wahi mere movie ki actress banegi agar usne inkaar kar diya toh main movie hi nahi banaunga; main kisis aur ko hero ka role shayad de du par mere movie ki actress bus ek hi hogi aur wo hai Geet sirf Geet [I have written this story by imagining one girl in my mind and she will only be the leading actress of my film; I can change the leading actor of the movie but if the girl does not accept my offer then I will never do this film. There can be only one girl who can do justice with this role and its Geet only Geet]
Maan felt rejected with Aditya's talk
Adi: Geet apne bhai k movie mein kaam karogina? [Geet will u work with me in my movie?]
Geet: Ek sharth par [On one condition]
Adi: Kya? [What?]
Geet: Main ye movie free of cost karungi [I won't charge a single penny for this movie]
Maan: (thinking) Ye kya keh rahi hai Geet agar paise nahi mile toh kaam karke kya fayda [What is talking if we don't get money then what's teh use of working?]
Prem: Par iski kya zarurat hai Geet? [But what's the need of this?]
Geet: Prem main chahthi hoon k jo bhi amount aap apni leading actress ko denewale the wo amount aap ek old age house ko donate kar dijiye mere liye ye sabse badi baat hogi k meri pehli kamayi kisi nek kaam mein utilize ho [Prem whatever amount u had decided to pay to ur leading lady I would request u to donate that amount to an old age home it would be a very big thing for me that my first salary is been utilized for a good cause]
Prem: Aapka chehra jitna khoobsurat hai usse kayi zyada khoobsurat aapka dil hai [Ur heart is more beautiful than ur face]
Adi: Wo toh hai aakhir behen kiski hai waise Maan kya tum ye movie karne mein interested ho agar tumhe manzoor nahi hai toh main kisi aur se baat karta hoon [Yes u r right, by the way Maan r u interested to do the movie if u r not free then I will consider someone else for the role]
This was one of the biggest insult of Maan but since Adi was Prem Singhania's friend a rich and powerful man he decided to keep his mouth shut
Maan: Teri movie hai yaar off course karunga [It's ur movie dude count me in]
Adi: Okay guys baaki ki baate kal Prem k office mein milkar karte hai abhi mujhe kuch aur logo se bhi milna hai [ Okay guys we will discuss the other details tomorrow in Prem's office I need to go now as I have to meet some other people as well]
Prem and Adi get up. Geet hugs Aditya and Maan was just about to take him in his embrace when Aditya forwarded his hand
Adi: Bye Maan
Maan: Bye
Geet: Chaliye main aap dono ko neeche tak chod aathi hoon [I will come with u downstairs to see u off]
3 off them walk out of the apartment
PRECAP 1: Naintara: "Prem Singhania ki pehli movie aur usmein Naintara ka naam shamil nahi hai aisa kaise ho gaya?" [Prem Singhania's first movie and it does not include Naintara's name in it how is this possible?]
PRECAP 2: Prem: "Kitni ajeeb baat hai Maan jo tumhare paas hai uski tumhare nazro mein koi kadar nahi aur jo tumhare paas nahi hai tum usse sar ka taz banaye baithe ho" [It's quite strange Maan u don't care about the precious thing that is within your reach but u do care for someone who is not even a part of ur life]
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hehe here im first to comment wow...lets a party tonight..😆...isse pehle ke meri bak bak shuru ho hum update pe ate hai...
ajj ki update ka naam hona chahia.''.Tere naina'' kasa hai acha laga ke nahi...i give this name to this update bc i love it so much...me to prem ki bato me kho hi gaye thi...how he narrate geet eyes...hae koi bi uski pyaari baato me kho jaye...prem read her heart from her eyes..haina...ap ek kaam kijea prem ki shadi geet se karwa deji😆...lol agar kisi aur ne pad lia to muje juteo se pitege ke me uske maaneet ko dur karne ki baat kar rahi ho...😆..wase sahi hai is maan se to acha hai ke geet ko prem se prem hota😳...kyuki jo bate maan ko kehni chahia thi vo prem ne kahi...
wase ajj ka sabse best scene pata hai konsa tha jab adi geet ki tareef aur maan ki insult karta hai...wow..i really enjoy this scene so much...thanx adi humari geet ki tareef karne ke lia aur us gadhe ki maan ki insult karne ke lia...aur humari geet kitni sweet hai aur apne jasi sweet and pure sharat rakhi film karne ke lia...i think this maan dont deserve our gold geet..kyu di sahi keh rahi hona me..
sabse best dailogue obiously prem ke kahe gaye geet ki ankho ki tareef me chand shabad hi hai...aur vo poem...that is sooo goood...i said u ke jo bi likhogi best hoga so dekha its best shona...i rofll when maan try to hug adi but adi ne uske saath hand shake kia🤣...
precap to isse bi badia hai di...omg i dont wait...i pray ke apko ek do chuti mil jaye aur ap isse bi dubara jaldi update kare😳
cont sooon
waiting eagerly for more
love u alot
ur's gudiya
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hate this maan...he is insulting geet at every stage...u may not reach heights in carrier but geet will reach success soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx fr the pm diii
its a nice update
aur ye kya maan bechari geet ko ku aise hurt karta hy 🤔
hmmm update the nxt pat soon di 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
excellent part dear...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update love the way prem describe geet eyes and insulting maan and maan taunting geet but adi gave him dose of insult prem making geet happy that was good and geet decide to give her salary to oldage home prem impressed maan is so selfish please der se hi sahi par make maan realise the taste of insult he put on geet do next soon



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome... but maan has hurt geet so much with his talks!!!😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
all parts r awesome 👏

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