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Posted: 13 years ago

Intezaar

"I think there is I.C.U'"Samrat pointed towards the corner room and Mayank moved his eyes, "ok lets go.." Mayank nodded his head following him and about to take step when a familiar voice hit with his ear drums and his feet got froze at its place, "Mayank!!!"

He swung around and found someone standing at his back "Ramesh uncle"a whispered escaped from Mayank's lips in shocked looking at with widened eyes, all the events ,memories of past flashed in front of his eyes,those voices which always haunted him again started echoed in his mind..

"you have killed our daughter Mayank"

"you are killer"

He got jerk and placed his hand on wall for support, gasping air he tried to composed himself but suddenly he felt his body lifeless, so weak to even take a step, "un.cle..i'did'not'."Mayank startled trying to say something in his favor which proofed he was innocent but then his words fade away in his mouth as Ramesh raising his hand stopped him to say further, "how many time you will say Mayank,you did not kill Piya?but truth is that you have killed her, your harsh words had took her life, how much she loved you, she always supported you, she always gave you her shoulder whenever you needed her, she cried with you, she smiled with you but what you have done with her, you broke her all dreams, you shattered her like that she lost her life..She is no more Mayank"

His voice raised and tears of fluid slipped down on her cheeks and Mayank stood their like a lifeless creature feeling himself a culprit who had taken an innocent life, "but'uncle'i'"Mayank tried to hold him when he held Mayank's shoulder and looked into his eyes..

"can you give my daughter??Can you bring her back?trust me Mayank if you will bring her back,we will forgive you until you have to live in regret for taking my daughter life,you can never get your love,Never'."he jerked him away

Ramesh words echoed in his mind and he shivered and placing his hand on bench for support as his body shivering and he was feeling as he was going to fell down at any time, "you are killer Mayank Sharma, killer'we will never forgive you, I want to give you punish but No'God will give you punish for your deed"

"Thank GOD,Raveena did not see you, if she met you, don't know how she reacted.." Saying this he stepped towards in other side leaving Mayank lifeless..He tightly clutched the handle of bench in his hand to stable his falling body, he closed his eyes trying to stop his tears those were threatening in his eyes to came out..Again he considered to be Killer, this tag, regret which always took his happiness had shaken his world once again. When he thought to start his life with Nupur,with his unborn baby again that past came in front of him like Nightmare taking his dreams with it..

"Mayank!!! Where were you I was waiting for you outside the'.."Samrat voice came from behind and trying to compose himself he wiped off his face with his palm and swung around to face him,Samrat stopped in mid way to see his face pale,his red eyes as he cried which indicated him there was something happened in his absence because when they were together Mayank was completely fine then what happened suddenly? he came closer to him looking at him with questioning eyes but before he could ask anything ,Mayank spoke up almost in shaking voice, ignoring his questioning gaze, "Samrat I am not feeling well, I want to go back home, I will meet him later"

Samrat gave him shocking look at his sudden change behavior but then he did not insist him or ask any question as he knew there was something wrong happened in these few minutes which had shaken him badly.

"ok..but if you feel to talk to me you can call me'"

Mayank's mouth drew back a little, as if he tried to speak and then could not. He looked away from him and just could nod his head and walked towards the door without giving him last glance leaving him shocked and confused at sudden change in him and he thought to ask him later..

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It was almost Mid-night when Mayank entered in house,after leaving the hospital he had no courage to face anyone and he himself did not want to face anyone at that time, so he went to his favourite place,On Beach,without telling anyone about where he was?Nupur was hell worried when he did not come back home at time, she called Samrat and he told her about his sudden change behavior but he himself did not know what actually had happened there..He was clueless about his meeting with Ramesh uncle.

Mayank came into room to find Nupur sitting on couch crawling her legs and he could see her tense face even in dim light but ignoring the fact she was worried for him he straight moved towards his cupboard.Nupur got up immediately to see Mayank and rushed close to him to hug him,

"oh Thank God ap aa gaye"

she crawled her arms around his neck and hid her face in his chest.

"Mayank ap kahan the?Samrat ne bataya ap kuch pareshan the?kya hua?sab theek'."she stopped in mid way to feel his stiffened body and lifted her eyes at him,who even did not respond to her hug and waited for her to remove her arms around his neck..

"Mayank kya hua?Ap'"

"I am not child Nupur I can take care of myself why are you behaving like I am an infant and can forget the address of my house'"she shivered at his rude,stiffen tone and looked at him with widened eyes in shock but then she tried to remind herself he was disturbed due to something, something wrong had happened which had disturbed him..

She swung around and took step towards door to fetch something for him to eat from kitchen when Mayank held her hand and the next thing he did leave her in shock, pulling her closed to him he gathered her in his arms tightly and hid his face in her neck,

"I am sorry Nupur'I am really sorry"his broken voice hit with her ear drums and she elt something wet on her shoulders,it meant he was crying she crawled her arms around him and pulled him more closer to her but before she could ask anything his low voice fell into her ears and made her feet froze at it place..

" Nupur They still think I killed Piya,I killed my friend,I am killer"

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here is next update...i hope u ll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE..

THIS REACTION OF PIYA'S FATHER WAS SO EXPECTED..
BUT STILL THERE WAS A HOPE THAT HE NAY HAVE FORGIVE HIM..
BUT NO.. AND THERE SEEMS NO CHANCE...

LOVELY UPDATE..
MARIA SIS..
IT WAS INDEED.. FULL OF PAIN..
YOU HAVE BEAUTIFULLY DESCRIBED MAYANK'S PAIN..
THAT WAS FABOLOUS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow *SPEECHLESS* It was amazing update,you have written it exceptionally
hatts of to you..
please do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabolous update Maria
you wrote it beautifully that i can feel Mayank's pain
Great Job!!!!
please do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant update

i have less words to say how much you have written it beautifully
amazing update dear
i loved it
plz do continue soom
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
just beautiful
loved it
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...
it was sooo Awesome update only bcoz of its Ending...
i loved d ending sooo very much...
uff!!!!!!! hw can dey talk to him like dat...
der is a limit...
he didn't killed der daughter...
he jst couldn't marry her coz he nve loved her damn it...
n agar woh usse pyar nhi karta toh kyun shadi karta usse...huh
n isse agar woh mar gayi toh wht can he do...
usko bhi toh bura laga na akhir woh frnd thi uski...
Thank god He hugged her...
orelse mujhe bhttt bura lagta...
i loved it sooo much jab usne usko hug kiya n bina puche hi apne dil ka haal keh diya...
loved it lodsss
waiting for d next part...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt maria
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
omg they still think mayank killed piya..
ufff n y mayank is feelling himself killer..
i hope nupur make him understand everything
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sigh!!! Poor Mayank..he is feeling guilt of something that had happened and he could not change it , although he was'nt responsible for that too..still Piya's father's reaction was so expected...anyone would have reacted like that..but he should understand that it was all destiny..no one could ever change it...!

continue soon.

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