MiniFF-APromiseToRevenge-MG-ImpNtPg56(21/04/12)

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Very sad part.I got confuse while reading this part as there was some mishap between the names of the characters as when if geet saying something maan's name was added instead of geet. contiue soon dear.

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

loved the part..

b4 she cud tell the truth...maan's mom spat out..

i m not geeting any positive vibes frm ananya..

i think names r messed up,rt..?

u hav written geet instead of maan and vice versa..

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Its lovely update dear...Loved it...

Plz be careful about the names...they r not in proper places...

Plz don't mind ...Love u dear...

Waiting for the next part...

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

oh wow...

liked it...

sorry i didn't know abt that so wishing you now...

umrah mubarak to you😊

thnx for pm

continue soon

love rose😉

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Nice update..

awww hope no MU...poor maneet

plzz continue soon

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roopali

@rsroopali

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Ok am confused ... mmm .. lady the placement of their names is kinda messed up .. and its getting confusing to read ... plzz edit ker do ...

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

hey guys,
How are you?
I am sorry for the name inconvenience, I hope I corrected all the name exchange, but guys I have no net at my place so I am dadi's place yesterday I had three hours to do the last edits, to update them and then send PMs.
Once again sorry :)
Please do pray that I have internet at my home soon :)

Luv u all<333
Kashish