SwaRon FF - WHEN CUPID STRIKES - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

@Pooh...I'm glad u liked d update...d Shantanu smile part was written by Sundus!!!

she killed me..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I jus imagined him like tis...tis exact smile...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hahaha abi..!!!super cute smile..!
i m imagining shy wali smile..
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Posted: 13 years ago
So Sorry i havent been able to comment... Been so busy with Exams! 🥱
Amazing Update as always! Aww what Swayam gave Sharon was amazing... S diamond locket... "S stands for Sharon or simmi or Swayam" 😆 I say it stands for Swaron 😉 What say??
Shantanu's smile... I was absolutely lost there... ☺️ Killer smile!!! All i could think was his smile after that! 😍
Loved the Update... You guys have done a fab job 👏 Please update soon and Thanks for the PM! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update! Luvd it! Amazing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omgg!!! Abi!!! Super cutee!! I totally luvd it ❤️
shantanu's smile ❤️
haha nd sharey scenes wre awsum 😆
nd jst waiting fr ur nxt updatee..swayam vil do sumthin fr sharon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 9

Sharon was at d canteen wit d whole gang...but all she could think of was Swayam...*I wonder wat work he has...Maybe he actually followed my advice n accepted tat gal...God,y couldnt i jus keep my mouth shut tat day...But y do I care???...He wants to accept her as his GF...tats his choice...I dnt care*...But still Sharon's fingers went to d locket he gave her...

Sim: Hei Sharon...u're wearin d locket tat u got yesterday...

Sh: Huh???...Yeah,it went well wit d outfit...

Kr: Did u find out hu it was frm???

Sh: Umm...no,not yet...

Rey: U sure its not frm Swayam???

Kr: Yeah...wat did Swayam get u???

Jus then Swayam walked into d canteen...

Sw: Wats goin on guys???
Rey: V were jus talkin bout u dude...BTW,wat did u get Sharon for her bday???

Sw: Woh...woh...

Kr: Swayam...*smiles at him*...were u d one hu gave Sharon d "S" locket???

D whole gang look at Sharon n then Swayam...every1 was waitin for Swayam's answer...Swayam jus stared at Sharon...not knowing wat to say...

Nil: Dude...tel us...

He cud see the tensed look on sharon's face

Sw: ummm... No its not me...

Re: den wat did u give her...???

Sw: mene usko tum logo ke liye 2 din jhela.. Wasn't dat enuf... I think u guys dun

remember... Dat we aren't frnds... Actually we were the biggest foes... And leaves angrily...

I hope she doesn't feel bad...

Kr: sab kuch thik toh h na...

Sh: haa finally ab sab thik lag rha h...

Every1 shocked with such a reply...

Ri: uski himmat kaise hui... Sharon ke b'dae pe bhi itna rude..

Sh: its ok rinni...

Guys i'll just be back... And she walks towards the washroom..

But suddenly sum1 snatches her to the store room...

It was dark.. Sharon could not see who it was...

Sh: kaun ho tum.. How dare u tum...

Suddenly that person lights the lighter...

Sw: its me...

Sh: tum...??? Yeh sab kya hai...

Sw: actually i wanted to say sorry... I dint wanted to be rude to u in the canteen.. Par vo

log aise quest puch rahe the... Soo m really sorry...

Sh: i think mene tumhe aaj tak bahot misunderstand kia hai... Jab tak hum inn sab ko

milate hai.. Frnd...???

Sw: smirks.. Yeah frnds...

Sh: toh ab toh apni gf ka naam bata do...

Sw: laughs lightly...

Swayam goes near her face... Their faces just inches apart.. Sharon closes her eyes...

Swayam whisper...

Sw: my dear new frnd... I have no gf...

And before sharon could open her eyes.. Swayam had already left...

For some reason...tat felt like d best bday gift she got...Otha than d locket...to hear frm Swayam tat he doesnt hav a GF made Sharon so happy...She came bac to d canteen wit a smile on her face...

Rey: Wat happened Sharon???...Suddenly itna bada smile...

Sh: Ntg Rey...its my bday...i'm meant to b happy rite...

Rey: Yeah...n then whispers to Kria...*Kuch toh hua*

Kr: Yup,i agree...

Sh: Guys,i gotta go nw...hav 2 go show RDX sir d final presentation for d dance fest...

Sim: Alrite Sharon...c u later...

Sharon walks out of d canteen n calls Swayam...

Sh: Where did u go???

Sw: Y??...Do u miss me already???

Sh: Idiot...v're supose to meet RDX sir nw...to show him our presentation...

Sw: Owh ya...Okay,i'll meet u at his office wit all d stuff for d presentation...

Sh: Fine...

Sw: Sharon...

Sh: Yeah...*she was waitin for him to say sumthin nice again*

Sw: Ntg...jus wtd to say Bye, Jungli billi...

Sh: Ahhh...SWAYAM!!!

Sh: y cant u stop calling me wid that name... Always u call me wid sum or the oder weird

names... Junli billi chudail shona baby princess.. Cant u simply call me sharon...

Sw: ok fine aajse me tumhe sirf sharon bulaunga.. Lekin mark my words.. Ur gona miss all

these words.. Aur tumhi muje kahogi inn names se bulane...

Sh: in ur dreams... Ab chale..

For the next hour... They were discussing the presentation RDX sir...

Rdx: ok guys.. Its done... Thnks to u 2 for all ur hard work..

Both: thnk u sir and they leave..

Sw: uumm sharon.. Kya tum mere saath aaj dinner pe chalogi.. If u dun mind.. Please

sandals mat marna...

Sh: hahahahaha... Ur too cute.. Pulls his cheeks... Y shud i hit u wid my sandals... Sure... I'l cum..

Sw: 8 then..

Sh: k...!

Sharon goes back to the canteen...

Vi: hey sharon we were thinking lets go for a group dinner tonite..

Sh: ya.. Wat no wait...! Y??

Ne: ur b'dae it is na... Dats y...

Sh: par par... *ab me kya karu... Shud i go and tell swayam no ya phir tell them no but i

want to go wid him*

si: ya it will be so much fun...

Suddenly swayam enters..

Sw: kya ho raha h..?

Re: we all r planning for a group dinner...

Sw: ya ya dat will be so much fun...

He smirks at sharon...

Sh: i think ye bhool gaya hai..dat he asked me for dinner... Or shayad he is trying to irritate me...

Sh: guys m not feeling well...i'll leave u guys continue widout me... Please dun cancel the

plan cuz of me... And leaves...

Kr: tum toh aa rahe ho na swayam...

Sw: nai kria vo actually dad ka kuch kaam hai.. So i wun be able to cum... U guys

continue...

Sharon goes home and thinks..

Sh: maine sabko chodke uske saat jaane ko kyun maana? Wats wrong with me?! Sharon abhi abhi dost banaye isliye.. haan...

She decides to get ready and go checks her wadrobe...

Sh: Kya pehnoon? He said i looked like an angel today... kya main phir se white pehnoon?! Nahi usko kuch alag sa dikhathe hain...

She wears out a read dress with the S chain... after getting ready she looks in the mirror and suddenly her phone rings...

Sh: Hello..

Sw: hello sharon... Main neeche tumhara intzaar kar raha hoon...

Sh: main abhi nikli...

Sharon goes down... wind blows her hair and swayam is just dumbstruck...

Sh: Hellooo?!

Sw: WOW!! Sharon u look amazing.. itni amazing maine kisi bhi ladki ko nahi dekha hai...

Sh: Thanks a lot swayam... u look rather dashing urself...

Swayam is wearing jeans and a white shirt with a red tie...

Sw: toh chale?

Sh: Haan.. par kahaan ja rahe hain...

Sw you'll see... Actually u wont...

Swayam takes a piece of cloth and blindfolds her...

Sh: yehtum kya kar rahe ho?

Sw: surprise!

Swayam takes her to an orchid meadow where all the trees are decorated with lights... in the middle there is a blanket with candles surrounding it... he slowly takes sharon and opens the blindfold...

Sharon is too shocked to speak... Swayam smiles...

Sh: Its beautiful,Swayam...

Sw: Not as beautiful as u Sharon...

Sharon luks at Swayam...n her eyes filled wit tears...no one had done tis much for her be4 tis...she felt so special when she was wit him...She jus looked at Swayam...n he smiled at her...She hugged him n started cryin...

Sw: Sharon...Sharon...wat happened???

Sh: Thanx Swayam...for doin all tis...for makin me feel so special...

Sw: U r special...nw,stop cryin n lets enjoy d rest of d evening...

Swayam lifted Sharon's face frm his chest n wiped away her tears...then led her to d blanket...They both sat down n Swayam took out two champagne glasses n a bottle...

Sh: Swayam...u noe i dnt drink...

Sw: I noe...tis is jus sparkling juice...

Sharon n Swayam spent d rest of d evening jus talkin n being happy tat they were wit each otha...Both of them didnt understand y they felt tis way...They each thought tat maybe it was cus they hav finally become frens...but sumhow...tat reason wasnt convincing enough...Finally,Sharon decided it was time to leave as it was gettin dark...Swayam drove her home n got down frm d car to send her all d way to her doorstep...But when Sharon opened her hse door...she was shocked...Rey,Kria,n d otha dazzlings n weaklings were there waitin for her...She looked at them n then bac at Swayam...

Sh: Tum sab??...Yahan???

Rey: Haan...par tum Swayam ke saath???...i thought u werent feelin well...

Kr: Swayam...tum toh tumhare dad ke kaam se busy tha nah???

Sw: Woh...woh...

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Posted: 13 years ago
aawww!!soo romantic!!was waiting fr D update!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part..!
SwaRon together spending whole evening..!!ideal date..!
n i just luved d last part...shocker for both of dem..!update soon..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey update it soon plz and pm me 👏

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