IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

I kinda get where u are going but am not too sure.Its gripping and also very intense.Arnav can be that monster in her dreams,may be not also.U have given us quite a lot to imagine,but u are still holding the reins,that's awesome.Please continue.Iam looking forward to this intense track.I guess I am not here in ur buddy list.Please add me .

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Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

thanks for the PM. Please continue, don't ask, (neki aur pooch pooch")

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Ria

@Arshi-licious01

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Loved the beginning! Pls continue <3 Pls add me to your pm list :) Eagerly waiting for the next update :)

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

yes yes yes please continue, what a intriguing start :))))

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow, that's intense.

I liked it.

I can't wait to know what happened to her. was she tortured by Arnav or something? Or is she hallucinating 🤔

Please continue.👍🏼

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smileystar-123

@smileystar-123

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Ohhh my gosh, that was a really intense start, so well done 😃

But please please please tell me he didnt rape her because she hid the truth about Shyam from Arnav and he did it to get revenge!!!!😲

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invalid

@invalid

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Very well written story, of course I want you to continue, hope to hear from you soon with another update !

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700983

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

very nyc
pls do continue cause im really liking it so far
pm me with the link of the next part if u do it
xxx

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ruby123

@ruby123

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey your story is so interesting, I'm so curious to see what will happen next. Please keep writing it, totally loving it! Please Add me to your PM list!!