OS: Khushi's Red Lehenga

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Thanx a million for your encouragement!

Hope u have as much fun reading my works as I have in writing them😆!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

very good! i liked the bit where arnav releases her hair from the braid and was very happy that we went out on the prowl 4 her

n the ending was very funny..laxmi!

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

""Maaa...Get a brain, Anju. And a new set of eyes while you are at it", said Laxmi."🤣

That line was tooo good! Laxmi is after all the only smart female Raizada around!

I can so see Arnav spreading the jasmine flowers on his bed with his heartthrob in the centre with her hair open dressed in red! 😍

I haven't read all the comments, but please could you write an update to this? Dil khushi Se Barr jayega!

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soni_md

@soni_md

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Ok, just the fact that nothing happened, and I still look like I'm about to faint is testament enough to your AMAZING writing ability, so I am NOW going to go and get a glass of ice cold water ...And throw it over myself *stalks away*

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Lovely update and thoroughly enjoyed reading it😃

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Fatuma

@Missbantu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

wow, awesome Os...Lakshmi also understands what is going on wow wake up anju.

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Loved this. Especially Arnav knowing Khushi only ever goes to his room and pool and the way he sat her on the bed and took off her flowers and opened her hair. Almost like a mini-suhagraat

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Awh you have to continue this. The bed is waiting. Sigh it's so beautiful!!

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desilover101

@desilover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

wow! just loved your take on the sangeet, lets hope it comes true ;)

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Neema

@N33MA

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

You did it yet again!
Last time it was tears and now smile
It was a pleasure to read, I actually thought they were gunna have there first night 🤣
Could you please pm me when you update any of your work. Thankyouhh... 🥳

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