FF-OUR JOURNEY BEGINS...PART 4 UPDATED PG 30 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HiIh

Ur Imagination is excellent .. i 've seen many imaginations... But a imagination like this FF... Peheli baar dekh raha hoon...👏

When will you update next part?
jaldi Update karna...😃


WELL THANKS...WILL UPDATE DIS SAT OR SUN
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Posted: 13 years ago
i find ur ff nice,different n refreshing... u r a very talented writer.👍🏼.. i have added u to my buddy list..wil u plz notify me of the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 3:
Now b4 i start further let me introduce u ppl to the palace and d arrangements...so all d relatives of swaron r staying in d same palace and all the ceremonies will also take place in this palace only...the palace is a beautiful one...with a beatiful lawn outside.i tried 2 find a pic to suit my imagination n 1 pic that was very near 2 my imagination was this...




ok nw i start with d story...
Rey reached d palace.he had already informed swayam that he has reached shinghad...
sharon and swayam both stood at d entrance 2 welcome rey..
as rey came, he n swayam both hugged each other...
sw-welcome dude kaisa hai??
rey-i m fyn...bhabhi se introduce nahi karvayega?
sw-arey ha sure!!!!!sharon meet my best buddy rey...
sharon-heya rey...nice 2 meet you...
rey-same here...
n sharon gets a call...she excuses herself 2 receive d call...
swayam-u must b happy na 2 cum here...YOUR...
rey-swayam ye baat kisi ko pata nahi chalni chahiye...i dun want any1 to know...
swayam-ok between me n you...top secret!!!!!!!
rey-i m going to freshen up...see ya afterwards...

ON THE OTHER SIDE:
kria hd reached sum temple...she thought she will find d way to the palace
...but she didn't...
she called vicky(as i hv said vicky is sharon's younger brother...n he and kria also share d same brother sisterwala bond)...
kria-hey vicks(pet name)...i lost my way...can u cum to pick me up!!!!!
vicky-sure ...bt tell me wer u r?
kria-i m here at a big temple ...hmm its much crowded
vicky-ok i got it, i m cuming in a jiffy...
vicky reached der...with a car ofcourse...
vicky-hop in!!!!!!
kria sits in d car n vicky starts d car...
kria-yaar..vicks its so nyc to meet you...i m eager 2 meet sharon...n yaar kitne dino baad yeh khuli hawa...i m so relieved...
vicky-me also very happy 2 meet u!!!!btw hw was ur journey?????
kria got lost...thought abt her journey...hw ws it...she met a stranger boy...travelled 2gether wid him...thought hw he made her feel secure...and a smile came 2 her face...
vicky-hass kyu rhi ho????maine pucha hw ws ur journey???
kria-mmm...nice!!!!!!!

they 2 reached d palace...
as soon as they came out a girl passed by...she smiled at vicky...and said hi...vicky blushed and said hi back to her...
(no guesses fr d girl...it ws neha)
kria-hmmm...mere pyaare vicks wo ladki kaun thi!!!!!!
vicky-wo swayam ki sister...meri coll. frnd neha!!!!!!!
kria-mujhe puri story bata...just frnds i don think so!!!!
vicky-ok batata hoon!!!!!

VIHA FLASHBACK:
VENUE-SHARONS HOUSE...
1st meeting:
swayam ke parents pehli baar sharon ke ghar aaye the...sharon ke parents ko milne ke liye...swaron wer at their respective works...all wer sitting in d hall...swaron parents and vicky...
n then d doorbell rang...
vicky mom(2 vicky)-jao beta darwaza kholo!!!!!
he opened d door...a girl ws standing outside wid her back 2wards him...
vicky-excuse me...aap!!!!!
and d girl turned...der in frnt of vicky stood a beautiful girl..in a beautiful salwaar kameez...vicky just stood there staring her!!!!!
neha-can i cum in!!!!!
vicky-ya sure!!!!!
piche se swayam mom-arey beta neha tu aa gayi!!!!!!
both viha reached in d hall...
swayams mom introduced her to every1-ye hamari beti neha...swayam ki ladli bahen!!!!!!neha said namastey to everyone...
sharons mom-vicky beta, neha ko hamara ghar dikhao...yaha bado ke bich main beth ke bore ho jayegi!!!!!
vicky-thik hai mom!!!!!!
vicky showed neha d whole house n at last...his own room
neha-wow ur room hs a balcony...neha luving balcony...
vicky-well its a seafacing balcony.!!!!1
neha-wow can we stand there
vicky-o ya ofcourse
they both stood in d balcony n started talking!!!!
neha-so u study in college???
vicky-yes st. louis college...
neha-neha studying in same college...hw cum v never met????
vicky-maybe coz our college is famous n many ppl study there...n v cant know every1...rite????
neha-rite saying u r!!!!!par ab hum mil gaye!!!!!!!
and they started laughing...

2nd meeting:
neha was going to college...walking... 2day her damn scooty was nt working!!!!!she was cursing her scooty...coz she ws really getting late!!!...n she even didnt noticed wen tym flew by!!!!!!
n as she ws walking a bike came by!!!!!!!the rider removed his helmet...it ws vicky
vicky-do u need lift????
neha-ohh ya badly!!!!!rite tym pe cuming u r!!!!!neha really needing lift!!!!i m getting late for college...
she sat on d bike behind vicky...
neha-but dont drive too fast!!!!!neha fearing speed!!!
vicky-ok!!!!!agar daarr lage to mujhe pakad lena!!!!!
neha ws sitting trying 2 make a distance between her n vicky...
but as soon as vicky started d bike...she caught him tightly...or in other wrds hugging vicky tightly frm behind...
this almost send chills in vicky...he felt as if his blood ws running too fast in his veins...as if his heart had started pounding loudly...as if...yaar wht m i thinking..he thought to himself n smiled...
vicky-neha chill...coll bas thodi der main aa jayega!!!!
and they reached coll on tym...

BACK TO PRESENT
kria-phir kya hua????
vicky-kuch nhi...v bcam gud frnds...v meet in college...bas !!!!
kria-just good frnds ha!!!!!!!...
she just wanted to tease him more but sharon came...
sharon-heya late latif...finally u r here ha!!!!!!!mujhe to laga aaj tum meri engagement miss hi kar dogi...(nw sharon ws angry on kria)...she turned her back 2wards kria n stood there wid a gussawala expressions...
kria-arey tu to meri jaan hain...tune soch bhi kaise liye ki main...tujhe...aaj ke din akela chodungi???????chal ab nautanki band kar aur gale mil mujhe...
sharon smiled n hugged
her...
vicky-tum dono mujhe aise akela nhi chod sakti...
kria-aaja mere vicks bam...n they hd a group hug!!!!
kria-arey jijaji se to milwa!!!!
sharon-ha !!!!!she calls out swayam...
sharon-swayam meet my bestie kria...
swayam-heya kria nice to meet u!!!!!
kria-me tooo JI...JA...JI!!!!!

PRECAP-KRIYAANSH DHAMAKEDAR 2nd MEET!!!!!

HEYA FRNDS HERE ENDS MY 3rd PART...I HV LUVED UR ALL RESPONSE TO THIS FF...THANK U!!!!!
N PLZ CONTINUE LIKING N COMMENTING...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for kriyansh meet.
plz update quickly next time.
bahut wait krvaya
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Posted: 13 years ago
arey wah what a ff ,plz join the cvs ,what a imagination for a palace ,plz update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

waiting for kriyansh meet.
plz update quickly next time.
bahut wait krvaya


YAAR I M BUSY FRM MON-SAT...I RETURN HOME TIRED SO MY DIMAG IS ALSO SLOW...ISLIYE I UPDATE DIS FF MOSTLY ON SUNDAYS...EK HI HOLIDAY MILTI HAI MUJHE...BUT I PROMISE EACH PART WUD BE DHAMAKEDAR
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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next meeting...update soon...!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome part
i loived the pic its very beautiful and rey calling sharon bhabhi its really very funny
abd the viha flash back was awesome
continue soon cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!
thanks for d pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

wooww...jija ji n stuff...loving it...n woh secret kya tha???

waiting fr the dhamakedaar meet of kriyansh...

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