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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

amazin chapter..love d passionate arhi

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Your writing sends shivers down my spine.

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

Please write more!

Keep up the excellent work!

Regards!

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Saniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

I love how updates from this FF are long.<3

Writtened beautifully and that ArHi scene was to goood. Arnav is mean, I hope he regrets what he did! Update soon. (:

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bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

grt update dr...update soon :)

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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

An Awesome FF.Very Innovative & different and yet so Powerful.👏

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Aisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Wonderful update

Love the concept of the story...

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

MUNCHY M SPEECHLESS... totally speechless... i will not call it awesome because that will be an understatement in fact all the words will be an understatement for this one... it was that gud...👏

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

damn.
sometimes that boy really doesnt think huh

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rozina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Munchy another fabulous update! Im totally in love with this FF of yours! The concept is so different but our arhi have the same personalitys! Its fabulous! I really liked the conversation between haji saheb and arnav, atleast arnav can see a fatherly figure in him!

I loved the argument between khushi and arnav! The way arnav found out khushi is rustams sister and the way khushi found out arnav is akashs brother was cute! I really like the bonding that khushi has with her own siblings as well as arnavs. But i feel bad that arnav didnt get the time with his siblings to develop such a bond.

Khushi went totally overboard with her ranting and im not surprised her father told her off and made her apologise! Arnav didnt deserve to get such a blasting!

Ok i get arnav was angry but what he did to khushi was 🤬! It was going perfectly at the start, the way he pushed her against the wall and was kissing her neck! The way youdescribed khushis feeling definitely sounded like she wasnt getting punished! It was very hot until arnav realised what he was doing and then broke her pearl string and made her feel so cheap!

I felt so bad for khushi the way she was crying, i almost thought arnav might go and comfort her but atleast anjali came and comforted khushi!

I hope arnav realises what he did was wrong! Cant wait for the next update munchy!