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Posted: 13 years ago
so sweet of arnav and aksh they belived payal and khushi shaym freaky gunda needs to be killed :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love how Arnav's so protective & loving towards Khushi.. finally, he comes to know about Shyam.. to my surprise but a happy one.. he & Akash both believes Khushi!! Love u for this... *hugsss*
Also, loved how in the previous chapter, u made Khushi aware that she can depend & trust Arnav completely in the time of her distress & asked him to stay close to her & to my surprise, Arnav did that & completely protected her even from shyam & his encounters!! Love Arnav! 😳 hmm.. trip to malaysia.. that sounds awesome!! just Arnav & Khushi.. waiting to see if u get that trip into play!!
The story's gotten very interesting & lovable too with Arnav completely trusting khushi & also, confessing that he loves her!! cuteee...

hey!! have to add... sorry, if u don't see my comment after every chapter.. But I have to confess I do read each of ur updates from this FF as soon as u put up.. just that it's through my phone & IF is not very user friendly to comment on using phones!! But I'll try my best to comment as & when I get time to.. *pinky swear* 😉😆 Love ur FF, to add to it!!

Keep writing beautifully, keep improving!! will try to do my part by reading & commenting honestly as to whatever I'm thinking!! Ready for the next update.. update soon!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved arni's care for khushi... aawww!


awesum update !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update dear!!!!👏⭐️
Loved it!!!🤗😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just loved the update. Happy shyam was exposed to both arnav n akash. Just loved how he cared for her. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing naddyia
nicer and nicer ,,,,update soon please
i can't wait to see shyam punish 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
use headphone to enjoy

Arnav made her rest on bed

Khushi: what are you doing here?

Payal: you are not getting up i called them

Khushi: jiji why you called them? i was not dying

Akash just look at Arnav"Khushi what are you saying?"

Payal:" i will slap you i am tell you Khushi , you don't know how much everyone is worried for you"

Akash: "you come with me" he just took her out

Khushi: Aap ghar jai

Arnav: walk to the door closed it , walk back to her ,just move her aside made his place stretch his leg .

Khushi:was just waiting he will say some thing but he just silently sat there ,placed the thermometer in her mouth ,& check her pulse rate. he just taken out and checked it . didnot look at her , he just walk to washroom to wash it.

Khushi: aap hum se baat kar raha ha

Arnav: look at her ."what "

Khushi:Aap

Arnav: you request me in morning to be with you so i am full filling your request . he sat next to her .

Khushi:that was till wedding

Arnav: is wedding over yet

Khushi: just dont know what to say "La ki was wrong"she closed her eyes as he placed his hand on her forehead with a dam bandage

Arnav: sleep tomorrow you have to practice with me

Khushi: with you

Arnav: yes as i cannot risk any more , that NK is a fool he cannot take care of you.

Khushi: just squeeze her self next to him


Akash: enter " bhai and Khushi both get up and eat "

both together "we are not hungry"

Akash: Ok then we are not getting married as we have to cancel our shadi because if you both will not eat you both will be sick.

Khushi: look at him"why you didnot had ? it is must for you to eat"

Arnav: are you both black mailing us ?

Payal: yes as we dont have any choice

Arnav: just pull her up with next to him" give me "

Payal passed cereal bowl to him

Arnav: was about to put sugar in it

Khushi: i dont want to eat sweet

Arnav: look at her he got she want to share the bowl with him .

Akash: bhai we are going in guest room you can sleep here, as buaji had call and told the will be back by after noon .she was worried that she had left them alone i told her we both are here.

Arnav: thx. he was look at Khushi face who was shocked with the thought he will sleep there ."open your mouth Khushi"

Khushi:just open a bit

Arnav: "cannot we be friends ?"

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: "i know i don't deserved to be your friend but if you dont mind "

Khushi:"do i deserve to be your friend "change the spoon direction towards him .

Arnav: "take few spoon more"

Khushi: you eat first

Arnav: just had ."so what are your plans for Malaysia"

Khushi: how can we go?

Arnav: why we cannot go? i will gift Payal and Akash ticket for their honey moon and then you can follow them"

Khushi: sach she just sat

Arnav: yes

Khushi: i will be kabab mein haadi just clap her hands

Arnav:you can be now too smirk?

Khushi: smiled at him . hmmm let me see what they are doing ?

Arnav: but you have to finish this first

Khushi: took eat the spoon which he brought next to her lips . "bus now you finish "

Arnav: just didnot force her .

Khushi: "lets go "

Arnav: i am not coming

Khushi: made sad face

Arnav: acha chalo she just get down . her head was spinning . she just hold his arm"what happen ?'

Khushi: kuch nahi

Arnav: picked her up " you are still not well" walk out made her stand near the room she just open the door to peep in she pull him by his sweater to see .

Khushi: boring couple they will reach next year till bed ... till then we can sleep. look at him and said

Arnav: smiled

Khushi:if babuji was not there na i would have thrown a cracker in their room she turn back to walk to the room .

Arnav just picked her up again " why you are so naughty?"

Khushi: haven't you seen them they are standing like statue , koi aur woh tou

Arnav: kya made her rest.

Khushi" kuch nahi, just wait and see what i will do with them on their wedding day?"

Arnav: just look around

Khushi just move as side "you sleep here i will sleep on Jiji side"

Arnav:lay down " you will be caught if you will do mischief "

Khushi: we will do and name Nana ji

Arnav: had a laughter you are really

Khushi" unbelievable"

Arnav: nahi cute poor NK

Khushi: just look at him , she knocked at his shoulder "don't change your party you said you are my friend "

Arnav: i will not sleep now .placed his hand on her

Khushi: felt strange but she liked it she closed her eyes .placed her hand on his .


next morning

Arnav: woke up with a call " hello"

Anajli: :chota you are still asleep it is 10

Arnav: look at her she was resting her head on his chest holding him tight" Di pata nahi chala "

Anjali: how is khushi ji?

Arnav: check her fore head " she is not having temperature now "

Anjali: can i talk to her?

Arnav: yes wait " khushi ,Khushi"

Khushi: sona da hum Malaysia mein ha teasing jiji

Arnav: "di sorry "

Anjali : smiled ok you bring her with you i am sending Op to take care of Babuji

Arnav: i will i will di

Khushi: open her eyes she look at herself just seek out of his arms.

Arnav:chalo aunty nauntaki get up

Khushi: kya bola

Arnav: kal se nauntaki kar rahi ho ,i know you just wanted my attention , and wanted to sleep the new year night in my arms.

Khushi: oh ...

Arnav: kya oh

Khushi: " who asked you to come here then ?"

Arnav: Khushi Kuamri Gupta is back form...go and see where they have reached .?

Khushi: oh jiji and jiju give him a big smile , she just pull her duppata and jump out of bed .. she walk to the living room saw them sitting in front of each other on dinning table,she waited for 10 mins for them to realized that she is there, when they didnot "hello hello"

Payal: khushi

Khushi: where you have reached ?

Akash: look at her "khushi how are you?"

Khushi: warp her arm around her "i am fine perfectly fine "

Payal: but how

Khushi: my new friend ka jaharo giggle.. she placed her head on his shoulder as she could sense he next to her.

Akash: you both became friends

Khushi: yes problem ha kya

Akash: no no

Khushi: jiji make breakfast for my friend ..

Arnav: look at her as she walk back to the room .,he heard she walk to washroom

Payal: thx

Arnav; why you are saying thanks to me ? to kill her scare i have to do this , and only i can do this as i know her the most.

Payal:" your breakfast "

Arnav: let her come ,

they have a break fast in a nice atmosphere .

Arnav: i am taking Khushi with me as Nani want's to meet her ,Di said she will send OP to stay with babuji then you both can come

Payal: you go Akash ji i am fine buaji must be coming .

Arnav:"ok"


they all reached RM

Arnav: was not comfortable,as now he has to face Shyam .as they enter NK reached to welcome them.

NK: khushi ji how are you?

Khushi: i am fine

Nk: today is my our final lesson madam is waiting

Arnav: NK i am free today so i will dance with her..

NK: what

Shyam : also look at him as he hold her hand in his and walk to the hall.

MB: you both accompany each other she said to Akash and NK

Akash: but

MB: you both learn steps for your partners

NK: made face and hold his hand

Khushi: anjali ji do you know we both won ticket to Malaysia, she said while dancing with him , he was looking at her face she was not at all scared as she knew he is with him .

Anjali:really

Khushi: yes we both are going ...

Shyam look at her

Anjali:look at Arnav as she wanted to say how you can go with her like that ?

Arnav:just ignore his Di question he just look at Shyam who was looking at her he turn and bring Akash and NK in between them.


Nk: khushi ji you are doing nice with Naanv with me you were not having connection or any feelings .

Khushi: look at him music started

Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Usko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na

sorry if boring part
Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lostlove

amazing naddyia

nicer and nicer ,,,,update soon please
i can't wait to see shyam punish 😡

you said i added 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love_kuki

Love how Arnav's so protective & loving towards Khushi.. finally, he comes to know about Shyam.. to my surprise but a happy one.. he & Akash both believes Khushi!! Love u for this... *hugsss*
Also, loved how in the previous chapter, u made Khushi aware that she can depend & trust Arnav completely in the time of her distress & asked him to stay close to her & to my surprise, Arnav did that & completely protected her even from shyam & his encounters!! Love Arnav! 😳 hmm.. trip to malaysia.. that sounds awesome!! just Arnav & Khushi.. waiting to see if u get that trip into play!!
The story's gotten very interesting & lovable too with Arnav completely trusting khushi & also, confessing that he loves her!! cuteee...

hey!! have to add... sorry, if u don't see my comment after every chapter.. But I have to confess I do read each of ur updates from this FF as soon as u put up.. just that it's through my phone & IF is not very user friendly to comment on using phones!! But I'll try my best to comment as & when I get time to.. *pinky swear* 😉😆 Love ur FF, to add to it!!

Keep writing beautifully, keep improving!! will try to do my part by reading & commenting honestly as to whatever I'm thinking!! Ready for the next update.. update soon!! 🤗

keep your pinky swear😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW amazing update!

aww they became friends

They both will go to Malaysia!

Can't wait to read more

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