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Posted: 13 years ago

This update is dedicated to Piya...my friend who is ill right now...and needs all your wishes so she can be better and it was her birthday a few days ago...so this is a lovely chocolate cake for her...


Piya...I hope you get everything you wish for...

Heey...me back with an update...which is written by me...so hope you guyzz like it! Finish my quota of 8 pages...and I will be back to update as usual! 😉


Part 56

Maan and Geet reached the head quarters and found mohit, dil and arman sitting in the common room. They went inside and joined them all.

Maan: Heyy...kya ho raha hain?

Arman: Kuch nahi yaar...bas soch rahe hain...ke itne dino se kya kya hogaya hain...

Geet: I know...yaar...we should do something...

Mohit: This calls for a party...

Dil: Tumhe party ke alawa kuch sujta hai ki nahi!!!

Arman: Come on... Even I'm with Mohit on this one... That case sure took a lot of time...

Dil: Aur meri gadi bhi mar gayyi'

Mohit : Gadi nahi'KHATARA'

Dil : Shit up Mohit'. Teri gadi se toh acchi hi hain'

Maan and Arman together : Guys'. SHUP UP!!!!

Arman: Ah Guys... This calls for a party...

Maan: Haan.. party toh banti hi hain...

Dil: Great idea...

Maan: My place... 7pm...

Everyone looked at Maan in a shock...

Dil: Maan Singh Khuraana kab se party karne laga...

Maan: Pichhle chaubees ghanto mein hum ek baar kidnap ho chukke hain, gaadi ke break fail ho chuke hain and dil aur mohit ko nearly khudkhushi kar ni paddi, Mr Sachdev ka almost murder ho gayya, public place pe atank phail gayya aur main nearly mar gayya... Tabse main party ke mood mein hoon...

The team burst out laughing...

Arman: Yeh toh hamara roz ka kaam hain...

Geet entered the office and saw them all laughing...

Geet: Kya baat hai guys... Did I miss something?

Mohit: Maan Singh Khuraana ne pehli baar ek joke maara... taalian...

Geet looked at Maan in shock...

Maan: What?

Geet: Nahi..kuch nahi...chalo phir party karte hain..and don't forget to invite everyone...aur specially riddhima warna yeh devdas...ek kone main sadta rahega...

Arman: HAHA...very funny...(he said sarcastically) ek din tumara bhi din ayega..

Geet: Waise tum usse kab bata rahe ho...

Arman: Kya?

Geet: That you love her..

Arman: Is it that obvious? (she nodded) I don't know if she even feels the same thing for me...

Geet: Maybe you will find out at the party!

Arman: Hmm...maybe!

Maan: Theek hain yaar... I have work to do... Main office jaa raha hoon... I'll meet you all at 7... Bye...

Geet: Bye... she said it in a sweet voice as if she was eager to see him again...

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In the party...

Mohit, Dil and Arman were having a little conversation of their own when...

A moment later Meera and Yash come in holding hands...

Yash: Hi guys...

Arman: Oye Hoy... Kya baat hai... Abe saale shaadi ke baad toh tu bilkul badal gayya...

Arman winked at Mohit.

Dil: How have you been Meera

Dil bent over to hug Meera. She was so glad to meet her friend after a long time...

Meera: Theek hi hoon... Ab aisa pati mila to koi kya kar sakta hai...

Yash: (Whispers into Meera ears) Kya baat hai... ladkiyon ke irrade bahot jaldi badal jaate hain... Raat mein toh bahot pyaar aa raha tha...

Meera blushed...

Mohit: Aisa kya keh diya mere bhai ne?

Meera: Umm'I'll just go get a drink'(Uff yeh Yash bhi na...sab ke samne..chi chi babaji...mujhe bachalena!)

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Maan: Kaisi ho Geet...

Geet: Theek hoon... You organised the party pretty well...

Maan: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi...

Geet: Kya Maan?

Maan: Yahan nahi...

Maan grabbed her hand and pulled her in the corner where no one could see them...

Geet; Maan...

Maan stopped her before she could say anything...

Maan: Main tumse koi baat hi nahi kar payya... Jab tumse baat karne ki koshish karta... koi na koi beech mein aa jaata...

Geet understood where Maan was going with this conversation... Maan placed his arms around Geet waist and pulled her towards him. He squeezed her waist gently letting her know of his intentions.

Geet: Maan aap kya kar rahe hain..koi dekh lega...

Maan: Koi dekhlega...toh chalo phir...

He dragged her to his room and locked the door and pushed her towards the door, trapping her between himself and the door.

Geet: Maan yeh aap kya..

Maan: Chup bilkul chup..main thak chukka hun aur pak chukka hun,,yehi sunke ki koi ajayega koi ajayega...toh main tumhe yaha le aya...ab tho koi ayega bhi nahi na...kyun mishty? (he looks at her with desire in his eyes)

He cups her face and swoops down to seal her mouth with his, taking her into world full of ecstacy. He bit her lips marking her as his, she was his and only his. His hands went beneath her blouse and were playing with her b** hook. He was gently caressing her milky skin while still kissing her. His fingers came out of her blouse and tugged at the blouse dori, he then opened the blouse hooks, while it still remained on the body. His hand was just travelling up her bare back but with the obstruction of her strap. After 1 hour they both broke apart panting for air. Geet was all sharam to pani pani types. She was looking everywhere except him. He lifted her chin and made her look into his eyes.

Maan: Mishty...jab tum Sharma thi ho tho aur bhi khoobsoorat lagti ho...

He gently turns her around and and does the hook of her blouse and ties the dori neatly. He places a kiss at her nape and then turns her around. He then leads her out, when he thinks that her breathing has become normal.

-

On the other hand Mohit and Arman were talking when Mohit saw riddhima enter the hall.

Mohit: Yaar... teri wali aa gayi

Arman: Kya bakwass kar raha hai yaar tu... Riddhima yahan kaise hi sakti hain...

Mohit: She's there look...mujhe pata hain ki you like her...but don't make it that obvious dude...

Arman: how do you know?

Mohit: Everyone knows...just by the way you look at her and the way she looks at you!

Arman: Kya karu..woh hain hi itni khoobsoorat...

Mohit: Aaj tak kitni dates pe legaya hain tu isse?

Arman: 5...phir bhi kam lagti hain! It was just love at first sight...I just hopes she loves me too...

Mohit: Hmm..chal..main chalta hun..woh yaha hi aa rahi hain! (Mohit leaves as he sees Arman lost in her)

Riddhima came near Arman and stands next to him.

Riddhima: Hi...kya kar rahe ho?

Arman: hi...kuch bhi toh nahi...(they have an eye-lock)

Riddhima: Aap..theek tho hain na..

Arman: Haan..mujhe kya hona hain?

Riddhima: Nahi woh Geet bata rahi thi ki...aap kidnap hue the...aur aapko chot lagi tho nahi na? she said out of concern)

Arman: Riddhima..main bilkul theek hun...tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain aur waise bhi mujhe kuch hojayega...tho tum ho na...mera ilajh karne wali...

Riddhima: Shh..(she places her hand on his mouth) Bagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hain...ki aapko kuch nahi hua hain..aur aap...yeh sab...(she removed her hand)

Arman: heyy...I am fine...aur tumhe kyun faraq padega ki main jiyu ya maru? (he said with intensity in his yes) bolo riddhima...tumhe itni taqleef kyun ho rahi hain...jab mujhe chot pohonchti hain toh...bolo...tumhe inta kyun faraq padta tha hain?

Riddhima: KYUNKI I LOVE YOU! (she shouted while everyone just looked at her amused)

Maan and Geet were amused by looking at them and burst out laughing when Arman just sealed her lips with his. There was a huge applause by looking at them. They broke apart and riddhima was flushed. He pulled her in a side hug and said "I love you too riddhima" and said to everyone else... "stop looking at us and get on with the party now guys!" and everyone else returned to what they were doing

Arman: May I have a dance with the beautiful lady?

Riddhima: (she nodded meakly and they went towards the dance floor)


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Edited by -maankimishty- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishty-


Oh sorry...mujhe pata nahi tha ki u don't read this one...
let me update this one...and if i have time I will update unwantedly tied...tomorrow morning??
How about that?


koi baat nahi
will wait for the update dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1

Haha yup i have updated 😃😆
Pastaa Yummmyyy Hmmm 😉😆
Don't worry next time i will let you win 😉
aab dosti ki hai tou dost ka farz tou nibhana he hai na 😛


Acha ji?...dosti ka farz nibana padega...😆
chal ab maine bhi apna farz nibhaya..update dehke...
i havn't read only mine yet...but I have reserved my space for me...so will give a long comment when I have read it dear...
Oh how sweeettt...
I actually wanted to be the first one to comment to your update...but next time!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wah re wah !

dil khush kar dita 😃
Very cute moment rather romantic moment between maan and geet 😳
It's so amazing how maan fits in her group 😃
Awww ritzy and armaan were great 😃
Loved it yaar😊
Thank you 😊
Naima !😊
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsomeupdate


want too see everyone reaction when dey will cumto knw abt maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1

Wah re wah !

dil khush kar dita 😃
Very cute moment rather romantic moment between maan and geet 😳
It's so amazing how maan fits in her group 😃
Awww ritzy and armaan were great 😃
Loved it yaar😊
Thank you 😊
Naima !😊


Aww...thanks dear...😊
glad you liked it 😃
yh...I thought to add that in as not many of you saw maan and geet together...😛
so this was a perfect chance..😆
yh I liked ritzy and arman scene myself...
it was like a dream come true...
but heyy...maan and geet's proposal will bhi hatke...
MaankiMishty
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Posted: 13 years ago
hot hot but not too much hot waiting for the too too too much hot update. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yaar😊
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishty-


Aww...thanks dear...😊
glad you liked it 😃
yh...I thought to add that in as not many of you saw maan and geet together...😛
so this was a perfect chance..😆
yh I liked ritzy and arman scene myself...
it was like a dream come true...
but heyy...maan and geet's proposal will bhi hatke...
MaankiMishty

I am sure it will be and me waiting for that 😃
I know you will make it very different 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1

I am sure it will be and me waiting for that 😃

I know you will make it very different 😉


Hmm...I already have the ideas...just need to pen it down!
and im sure you will love it...

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