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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
AWesome 👏 PM me the next 1 too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
nice story... i hav added u in my buddy list so whn u gonna update it plz pm me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi dr Manasi... 😊
😳am the new reader of ur FF dr...
awesome intro of ur new FF👍🏼... congrates dr.👏.
n thanks a lot for giving like this new concept of SWARON dr..🤗
especially am the big fan of SWAYAM i really love him so much...😳
so u gave a big n amazing concept yaar.👍🏼..
pls continue dr.. update soon n pls PM me when u update the next part dr.. am excite to read ur next part dr...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6:

They cum out of RDX sir's office…

Sw: dekho Sharon I know ki ur not interested in accompanying but please just do this for ur college…

Sh: ab tum muje sikhaoge muje kya karna hai aur kya nahi…

Sw: me toh sirf tumhe bata raha hu…

Sh: dekho tum apne kaam se kaam rakho samje na…

Pointing her finger towards him…

Sw: vahi toh kar raha hu… * he mumbles*

Sh: kya? Kuch kaha tumne…

Sw: nahi voo kuch nahi… Aur vaise bhi tumhe meri baat sunne me kabse interest aa gaya…?

Sh: whatever… and left from der..!

Sh: samaj ta kya hai khud… muje Sharon raiprakash ko ab ek weakling batayega ki usko kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi… huh..!

Meanwhile swayam: ghosh man..! I love her so much… pata nai vo meri kabb bannegi..!

Re: aise hi chalta raha toh kabhi nahi

Swayam turns around to see whose it..

Sw: huh..! tu yaha..!

Re: haa me yaha…!! Yaad hai.. me aur kria bhi andar the…!!!

Sw: tut oh dost ke naam pe dhabba hai..! tu aisa kaise bol sakta hai..!! ki vo meri kabhi nai ban sakti…!!!

Re: aare mere bhai mera matlab tha… agar tum dono ka aise hi chalta raha na toh tera kuch nai ho sakta

Sw: tu kehna kya chahta hai rey??

Re: aare tere paas solid chance hai…!!! Tu uske saath akele pune jaa raha hai…

Sw: aare akele kaha jaa rahe hai… nil aur simmi bhi toh hai…!

Re: aaree… *facepalms*

Sw: kya hau…!! Kabhi kabhi toh sach me samaj nai aata kit u bolta kya hai..!!

Re: kaan la…

Sw: kya?

Re: aare baba kaan paas la ears me batata hu…

Rey whispers something into his ears….

Sw: oohh..!! aise! Nai nai… lekin vo bura mann gayi toh…

Re: aare try toh try..!!

Sw: nai baba gussa ho gayi toh lene ke dene pad jayenge…!

Re: tu Sharon se pyaar karta hai na… toh me jaisa bolta hu vaisa kar..! chup chap…

Suddenly they hear a feminine voice…

Si: hey guys wassup…?

Re: simmi tum yaha..!!

Si: haa kyu..

Re: vo hum vo…!

Sw: vo rey kehna chahta hai… ki tumhe aur nil ko mere aur Sharon ke saath pune aana padega for some dance comp…

Si: kya.. kyu… lekin… kab?

Re: chill simmi.. vo actually yaha prom ki taiyyari dekhni hai… iss liye me and kria cant go… so its decided ki u nil swayam and Sharon are gonna go…!!!

Just then RDX sir cums out…

Rdx: swayam… ek baat batana bhul gaya..! Mumbai ki colgs ke liye bus arrange ki gayi hai…! The bus will pick u all tomorrow at 7 am sharp….. worli…

Sw: ok sir…!

And rdx sir leaves..!

Si: thik hai me nil ko batake aati hu…! And she also leaves…

Re: chal me bhi ab jata hu… kria mera wait kar rahi hogi..!

Sw: aare waah kya baat hai… toh tum apni setting karne me bhi lage ho…!

Re: aisa kuch nai yaar..! vo ab hume sab preparations karni hai toh uska kuch discussion karna… hope tumlog prom ke liye time pe vaapis aa jao…!

Sw: kya fayda ill be widout date…!

Re: aare tu tension mat le me saari taiyaari karke rakhunga jisse ki Sharon ko tere saath hi aana pade..!

Sw: thanks yaar rey

Re: anytime buddy… and hugs him and leaves…!

Sw: so miss Sharon raiprakash be ready for ur adventurous trip to pune…!!!


sorry for the late update guys...!! please hit the like button... and ur valuable comments are always welcomed..!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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haye swayam ka last sentence..! adventurous trip..!
super excited...updated soon..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

haye swayam ka lastsentence..!adventuroustrip..!

super excited...updated soon..!



ab swayam ka plan kya hai vo toh next part me hi pata chalega...! LOL mujpe cv's ka asar ho raha hai... Trying to create suspense...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasie



ab swayam ka plan kya hai vo toh next part me hi pata chalega...! LOL mujpe cv's ka asar ho raha hai... Trying to create suspense...

hahaha v all becum suspense story writer...jo dekho apne FF suspense pr laa kr end kr deta hai..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Another amazing update! Wohooo!!!!! :D
suspence bana ke rakh diya! Ab batao me Kya karu?! I want to read aage Abhi! Give me a solution now! :/ :P
awesum! Luvd it!
Update ASAP! nd thnks fr d pm! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dude its awesome...want 2 know ki rey ne kya kaha swayam se...plzz update the nxt part soon...n thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cant wait to read bout d trip to Pune...gud job,Manu!!!

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