Arhi SS: Snowy Adventures (COMPLETED!) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

WHOA! You have seriously left me speechless.

That was amazing. I cannot wait for the next part to up.

Please do it soon Asma di. It's so beautiful.

Originally posted by: loveydovey

wow!!! really really good!!! 😃 i am eagerly waiting for the next part!! loved it how he just picked her up in the snow😆

brilliant updates!! loved them!! thank you so much for the pm!

Originally posted by: karisma

ahhh love love love!

the snow is a new setting which is very refreshing

i absolutely loved what you wrote from arnav's point of view (well i loved everything u wrote, but especially getting an insight into arnav's thoughts as he got more and more jealous has been a delicious treat!)

seriously, my heart plummeted to the bottom, then back up, again and again as each of his thoughts betrayed the jealousy that gripped him...and which he followed by his action(following her, picking her up awww khushi was so cute!arnavji hum gir gaye..LOL.. of course you did!bless her for stating the obvious.. the underlying meaning is another matter..just like when arnav had said khushi ulajh gayi ..)

i also liked this hint of madness, which i read as a hint of his youthfulness:

She stared up at him in confusion, breathing fast, trembling under his touch and Arnav felt something inside him snap.

He simply stopped thinking as he tangled his fingers into her hair and tilted her face up to his. He didn't think about the madness of his actions as he leaned forward and placed light kisses across her cheekbones, down her face, stopping only for a second before he gave in ...

madness in love of course!

n i also liked the breeze and the hair going across his face.been a while since we've seen khushi's dupatta on his face and somehow that reminded me of those moments (his expression in the storeroom esp)