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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 4 - On the fourth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me four calling birds.

awsum update.small and sweet...loved it

Enthralling eyes. Longing looks. Lovely lips. Teasing tones. Sexy smirks. Kindling kisses. Torrid touches. Sensual sighs. Blending breaths. Soothing susurrations. Heavenly hugs. Genial goodbyes.

my god!!!! dis was something which touched my heart...so sweet...

Stupid ear-ring. Just like the stupid Laad Governor. Stubborn to no end. Hmph, she irritatedly, as she gave the ear-ring one more try and ah! Done.

Really like that stupid Laad Governor. Will not listen to you until you scold him, she thought, smiling at his cuteness.

Stupid clock. Completely slow like that stupid Laad Governor, she again started mentally abusing him.

so cutee...this is something like khushi. awsome struck.sooo cute once again...khushi type...

A gush of wind. Hair swishing away upwards. Hands flying all around. Eyes closed awaiting pain. Grabbed by strong arms. Clutched onto sturdy shoulders. Familiarity of the feeling. Eyes opened slowly, shyly. Smile directed at him. Smirk directed at her.

awww...so romantic...nice idea and dere meeting is always special n cute.

"Khushiji, what a way to invite your hone-wale bhatiji," said NK smirking at the two. Khushi laughed at his pathetic attempt at trying to tease and said, "Bhatiji nahin Patiji."

oho...isse funny part ko kya naam doon...really u gave it a fab flavour...enriched each one's characyer...


"Pa, if you're done, can we get on with what we are actually here for?" asked Akashji, as he tugged Shyam and NK along with him.

wat the...is this now. shyaam. niw has he become good now or he was never bad in ur story...i m confused only of shyaam and i guess he was considered as one of the four calling birds...right!!!!

ok

i couldnt help again n had to give a datailed comment as it again touched my heart.

fab job n good going.

even i am glad to meet u dear.

bbbyeee...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparklystarstud


poor kushi...arnav's taking a toll on her...

just like u shaaaliii...tormenting me by telling abt 5th day n making me wait...

hehehe... 😳

AWE!!!! short update...bt LOVED it none the less hun...

thank you!!!

and love u sooo much for the promised looonnnggg update tomoro...

it took me BLOODY LONG to type it out. LOL. so i consider it LONG! 😆

n it btr be on time little one...

it was on time! 😆

WOW!!!! u've done it...4 days continuously ...AWESOME!!!!

i know. PHEW!

still 8 more days...WAY TO GO little miss muffet

:D LOVE YOU SAMMY!


a huge hug frm

sam...luv u

love you too!!!



Originally posted by: mademoiselle927

RES!

Am I awesome or what?!

*Thank you thank you!* 😃

That was like half an update Sha!
But I'm impressed with your keeping up with the rule of updating daily!

Coming to the update!
I loved how Khushi kept getting irritated at everything and blaming her LG for it 😆

I want to know the mystery of the chit NOW!

Now, you don't need to be mysterious in everything you write! 😉



thank you naz! 😳 and NOPE. NOT TELLING YOU! 😆

Originally posted by: Zeee

OMG ekkk! god the ending was tooo good. arnav proposing like that and khushi reacting so boldly, wow! always amazing work from you

xxx


THANKS ZEE!!! 😳 yup, khushi has the spunk in this ss! 😳

Originally posted by: nyxx

The 4th day was wonderful Shalu!

and i could completely imagine Khushi waiting like that and then, falling right into her bhatiji's arms..oh wait, patiji's arms LOOL!😆
Im in love with these twoo..and the ending was even sweet, pleasee do continue soon with the 5th day😃


THANK YOU DEE!!! hehehe... me too! esp. after today's episode, I'M ALL ARHILICIOUS! 😳

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

I was wondering why I did not receive a PM from you! And got it 😃!


Short update..! Yes but still it was cute! Funny when Kushi was thinking about Arnav as Stupid Ladd Governor again and again!!🤣

NK..! He's really a cartoon... right?? 😆

Thanks for the PM..! Expecting a long 5th day update😃

P.S: Still you are not ready to reveal the chit secret..! Very bad!🤢


hehehe... thank you! and i'm sorry for the late reply! 😭 NK is a sweetheart! 😳 and the secret shall not revealed JUST AS YET! 😆

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Nice SHORT update. Chapter 5 better be long hehe.


hehehe.. TOOK ME LONG ENOUGH TO TYPE IT. so it's long. 😆

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Very :X I Liked It :) Can't Wait For More 🤗


THANK YOU SANZZ!!! 😳

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

i was actually blushing when Khuhsi was in the shower reliving her *ahem* conversation! there is still hope for u girl! i'll corrupt you yet!


and i love the banner!

and the next one BETTER BE LONG!!!

MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEY!!


BAH! you are the woman of the world. you're like the Naniji in ur Big Bang FF! 😆 there's no way you would be blushing! 😆 the next one. SIGH. 😳 it took me long enough to type it out! LOL!😆 so it's long.

YEA! MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEYYY!! 😃

Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf

Would love to start off my mornings like this ☺️

Lol...seriously Shalu how much cuter n romantic can this get!!! I'm always in ASR dreamland 😍 Totally loving this SS!!!


ahahaha!!! YEA! guess what, I DO! bloody ASR won't leave me alone in my dreams too! 😆 and thank you!!! 😳

Originally posted by: littlemoi

aww...what a sweet update!! love how arnav is always ready to catch khushi when she is about to fall!! but really dying to know wht was in tht chit!!! plzz continue soon and reveal the maha mystery behind the chit!! plzz


THANK YOU GIRL! 😳 and nope. NOT YET! WONT TELL UNTIL VERYYY LONG! 😆

Originally posted by: nishi

awww ... wasnt that cute ????

the best part was "Bhatiji" comment from NK ... 😆😆
n Shyaam ??? 😕😕 u need to clarify tat dearie ...



shyam is a positive character in this SS. didn't wanna have much complication in the story so yea. 😳 and thank you nishi! for the lovely review!

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

shalu!! so sorry for late reply!!
but i've been sooo damn busy!!!

It was an awesome update love!
so sorry that i can't post a longer comment, since i'm using my cell phone!!

but i love, love, loved it!!
thanks for the pm!!! ;D

<3


it's okay love! it's you constant support that's keeping this SS up! 😳 even if you type "res" and then just type "read", I'LL BE THE HAPPIEST! heck, you could just hit the like button, so that i'd know you read this, AND I'LL BE THE HAPPIEST PERSON EVER! 😳

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res... 😆

I'm first Shaluuu!!!!

*EDITED******

It was short!!! Harshu likes longer updates. . . . . 😲 😃 😆
When is she gonna get 'em??? 😳 😉

And Khushi dressed for Arnav??!! Aww. . So cute of her!!
And Arnav quoted Byron??!! That so goes with his character!!

Absolutely loved it!!! ⭐️ 👏 👏

Longer update next time?? Pweaassseee. . . . . . Yeah??!!!
Love you, Shalu!! 😃


Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!
there...FIVE wows for the update...
nw i have to say this...
im truly madly deeply in love with this SS shaaaliii...
and the same goes for ur un-updated FF too...bt its ok coz ur giving us this perfect ss makin me forget abt ur ff...
u were on time today...AWESOME hun
nw im the one who was late to read ...
the yucky medicine n pills made me doze off...
bt i suddenly woke up remembring to read ur update somewhere in my dream...seriuosly...
u got me hooked with ur words little miss...
the update was damn cute...
KUSHI DRESSING UP FOR HER ARNAV N ARNAV BRINGING JALEBIS FOR HIS KUSHI...
AMAZING!!!!!
arnav quoting BYRON sounds just like him...
poor akash bitua...i badly wanted to hi fi anjali di wen she said this

"Arrey Aakash Bitua, just because we did not explicitly described your state when you first got engaged, does not mean you get tease my Chotey. And anyways, even after one year of marriage, you cease to be the MUSHY, GLAZY-EYED LOVE-SICK FOOL you were even before you got engaged to Payal. Plus, Chotey is no fool. If he got a girl like Khushiji here. In fact, in Chotey's language, it was the best and the smartest deal he ever made."

and at this line

Arnav's mouth had gone dry, as he stared on at her, moaning and sighing.

i was like OMG!!!!
poor poor arnav...well...kushi doesn't know wat she's doing to him...bt once he shows her the result of her innocent actions i guess she'll shut up...
sooper dooper update of the engagement ceremony princess...
n love u alot for quoting me in PINK...
BTW blue's my fav color...n i think urs too shaaaliii...
lovely bt a bit shortie update...awaiting the next

with tons of luv
~~~~~sam


Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww, This Was Very Cuteee Especially Khushi Dressing Up For Her Arnav 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
res..
will read these later...
i have to catch up on the entire thing
was a lil preoccupied and i wanted to patiently read this one..
wil get back soon

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Edited
firstly m sorry 4 not commenting regularly... so here is a feeble attempt to make up for every comment i didnt make.. sorry sorry...

.day 1: amazing... i loved the start...the whole concept of christening and khushi and Arnav who are the same n yet different.. at least they have accepted their love to themselves... nice nice and Arnav is treating her with a fond indulgence... awesome
Day 2
i think that was the best proposal ever... it was so very cute n so asrish.. lol... loved it..
day 3: awww i loved these two,,,,, always love to read when arnav is totally in love with khushi.. gud gud.. btw m curious what did mami write in that note??
day 1: amazing... i loved the start...the whole concept of christening and khushi and Arnav who are the same n yet different.. at least they have accepted their love to themselves... nice nice and Arnav is treating her with a fond indulgence... awesome
Day 2
i think that was the best proposal ever... it was so very cute n so asrish.. lol... loved it..
day 3: awww i loved these two,,,,, always love to read when arnav is totally in love with khushi.. gud gud.. btw m curious what did mami write in that note??
day 4: wow wat a word nk fnds to get stuck on patiji... lol... :) u r amazing gal truly amazing
Edited by Lyraa99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update shalu pls continue soon awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG loved the poem Shalu!!! Gosh how much more romantic can our ASR get!! Man I really wish I was KKG..would love to be Mrs. ASR!!! lol

Awesome update dear...looking forward to reading more!!:)
Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww tht ws so cuteee 😃

esp Khushi knowing everythng tht Arnie likes n wearing her dress accordingly 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow
amazing and the most beautiful update
soo cute
most i loved was khushi's jalebi as gift from him
n her hug after d engagement
sooo sweet...
i just love dem
dey r just perfect...
byeee
so dere was a ravva ve moment in ur ss tooo
loved it

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