SwaRon FF-jaise tujhko banaya hai mere liye..! - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
I am sorry for not commenting after every part...but i loved simply loved your FF...

Love the way ur write...I was visualizing swaron while reading ur FF and trust me they look so freaking cute...Love the kinda words u have used...loved every bit of it.. beautiful 👏
Dnt frget to PM me whn u update nd update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

I am sorry for not commenting after every part...but i loved simply loved your FF...


Love the way ur write...I was visualizing swaron while reading ur FF and trust me they look so freaking cute...Love the kinda words u have used...loved every bit of it.. beautiful 👏
Dnt frget to PM me whn u update nd update soon😊

di u didnt comment coz i never send u d Pm..!!😆poor me..i missed ur comments..!!
thanks for d comment di..yaa ab will for sure pm u..!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
How cuteee!!!!! <33
luvd it! Amazing!
Ur sucha gud writer!
Really adorable!
Pleasee update soon nd thnks fr d pm.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

sry guys for late update..!!


CHAPTER 10:

I ran.. Not looking back.. I reached.. The staircase.. and obviously was the first one to reach there !!

Me:"Wohhhooo.. Yeaahhh !!! I Win !!Wooo... OOO !!! Oye... Lemmme Down.. Lemme Down !! Arrgggh !!"

Someone was held me tight from the back and i lept hitting those strong hands to let me go.. but ... the hands were put around me.. TIGHTER this time !!I got shit scared !!

Me[shrieking]:"Aaa... Leave Me... Let Me Go... Swayammm... Swayammm... !!"

Swayam:"Why Are You Shrieking My Name Lady.. When I Am Right Behind Holding You.. !!Cant You Just Lower Your Few Decibels !!"

I was petrified when Swayam's voice.. came out loud enough through my ears as if he was the one who had held me all this time !!

Me:"Its YOUU !!! You Idiiiot ... I Will Kill Youuu..You Scared Me To Death.. Leave Me.. !! "I wriggled out from his embrace and stood face to face with him !!

He was smirking at me !!Me:"You Devil !! Stop Smirking !!"

Swayam:"You Look Sooo Cute When Pissed !! Awww !!Look At Your Nose Going Redd !!! Awww sweety... I Love THAT NOSE OF YOURS..Cute Red Lil Thing !"

Me:"Woteva.. How The Hell Did You Land Here Before Me !!!Aint Possible.. !!.."

Swayam:"Shortcuts Baby !!Meghna And I..."

And he stopped.. and looked at me... for some reaction may be.. as he blurted out MEGHNA's name before me..

I looked unrensponsive..

I looked at him... and smiled the best way I could without letting him what was actually going on my mind..I never liked it..When he spoke about Meghna and him to me !! I never did... Since 2 years...But he never could make that out cause I never did let hm understand what I actually felt back then !! He seemed sooo happy whenever he spoke about him and Meghna..that I dared not to miss a smile on his face...!! I loved his killer-dimpled-smiles !!I did the same today..

I smiled and asked him to continue..

Swayam:"Lets Not Have Any Intterupter Today... Lets Speak About Us.. !!! Whats Say ??"

I smiled... and blushed and nodded a YES !!


njoy d another twist in d story..!!MEGHNA..!!swayam's present Gf...!!😉😉


plzzz hit d like button n do comment..!!

n whoever want d pm plzz add me to der buddy list..!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Anotha twist???...Pooh,u're too gud...cant wait for d next part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Anotha twist???...Pooh,u're too gud...cant wait for d next part!!!

yup..!!thanks abby...!!will update d nxt chap soon..!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
naaahhhiii... Swayam ki GF sharon nai koi aur... Poo m gonna kill u for this... :p
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

naaahhhiii... Swayam ki GF sharon nai koi aur... Poo m gonna kill u for this... :p

mannu tu bhul gai hai dat in my FF swayam dont luv sharon..sharon luv swayam...sooo yaaa swayam ki Gf is d anpther twist in d story..!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Meghna 😉 So she is swayam's current gf..hmmm..! New twist in the story..cnt wait to read more..update soon purv
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi_mannu

Meghna 😉 So she is swayam's current gf..hmmm..! New twist in the story..cnt wait to read more..update soon purv

hahahaha yup mannu will update soon..!!!!😉

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