Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 12

Originally posted by: teenorchid

How rude is this aunty. Hmph

She's the aunty from hell. But she might find that her bubble will burst one of these days...😆

Hey brilliant part...though aunty was such an irritation...but honestly speaking, i feel the story should go a lil dynamic...like past three parts have involved mainly the accident...so i feel a lil development of arsh bonds is called for at this rate...its just my honest feeling on the story..lz feel free to ignore...i just felt thsi is a kind of story which needs a lil thrust, cz it involved a lot oh underlying and buried emotions(if u understand what i mean)...so they need to be uncoiled , else they get too entangled to each other...so i just feel the story needs a lil thrust...

wow!

hey dear
it was an awesome part...loved it.
except those heartless relatives of shona,really how can someone be so hard with such an angel.
but i m glad that she has got a caring n sweet friend sapna,she is a sweet heart.moreover now her'GUARDIAN ANGEL' is there so i m sure she will be fine.
will be waiting to see how armaan confronts that egiostic lady n ya ofcourse arsh meeting:))
i love d way u describe each n every bit of characters thier persona n emotions.
cont soon n thnx for the pm.

amazing update

awww poor shona!i hope ammy teaches them a good lesson and takes her with him,far away!
amazing update,especially d last part!
i want arsh scenes :D
plz update soon !!

Hey guys, thank you all so much for your comments! 🤗 I'm in a lil bit of a rush right now, but I promise I will reply to all of you individually later today. And yes, for all of you who are eagerly waiting for ArSh scenes, I promise you will definitely be getting them from next part onwards. 😳

Originally posted by: fri42911

superb part!!!!!!!

can't believe her own maasi can do/say such cruel things to shilpa.

she is such a mean lady.

liked her uncle's character.

please continue soon.

Thank you! It's great to know you enjoyed it. 😳 Yup, her aunt is truly mean spirited. She has a huge chip on her shoulder. I'm glad you liked her uncle better, though the problem with him is that he is not strong enough to properly stand up to his wife. But, his conscience gets him over the treatment of Shilpa and he tries to be nice to her. I'll update as soon as I can. I know I have kept you all waiting too long for the next ArSh moment!

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

Hey brilliant part...though aunty was such an irritation...but honestly speaking, i feel the story should go a lil dynamic...like past three parts have involved mainly the accident...so i feel a lil development of arsh bonds is called for at this rate...its just my honest feeling on the story..lz feel free to ignore...i just felt thsi is a kind of story which needs a lil thrust, cz it involved a lot oh underlying and buried emotions(if u understand what i mean)...so they need to be uncoiled , else they get too entangled to each other...so i just feel the story needs a lil thrust...

once again..i am sorry if i have offended u

Hey, thanks for giving me your honest opinion, and no, I'm not offended. I take all your comments on board and what you're saying will hopefully help me to improve. I'm sorry you feel the story is dragging a bit. I do recognise and agree that there has been a lot of focus on the accident over the development of ArSh's bond. Originally I had planned to put the ArSh scene in this update, but I didn't have time to write a lengthy update this time round, that is why it is not there. I focused so much on the accident and on the repercutions because it is going to drive the rest of the story forward. I had to show Armaan wishing on the star so that I could reference the title and then I felt I had to have a scene with Shilpa's aunt to highlight her situation and also so Armaan could overhear and thus pave the way for the next ArSh encounter. But I promise, their bond will be explored in the next part and there will be much more interaction between them from now on. I hope that my next parts will move the story along better and that you will enjoy them more.