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Posted: 13 years ago
maan got her a puppy nice 😊

geet became talli after drink 😉 hmmm waiting for more, espeically pool party 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi you write very wonderful .. no doubt in that
but the font u use makes me difficult to read and also i cant read in my mobile wat u write clearly . i can only read it on PC but i mostly unse my Mobile pleaseee can u pleasee change the font and that paragraph writing style.


just said wat i feel if ur comfortable use this only 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapters 8 & 9 👏

The highlight for me is the clear depiction of Geet's POV
Geet missing Maan and realizing that she feels for him.

However, I have one question for u Rose.

Maan's feelings for G seems more like a physical desire though he has voiced out through his monologues that he likes Geet and this feeling is unlike what he felt for his previous women. Is he gonna explicitly state that he 'loves' Geet in the following chapter, considering the next one is the concluding chapter? 😳 Correct me if Im wrong

It would be interesting to see how this story is gonna culminate into a 'happily ever after' saga! 😳



Edited by Drashtigorgeous - 13 years ago
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Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...the welcome maan has got from geet...no wonder he would want to be away longer now...hehe...i loved both parts...they were just great n awesome...continue soon...i guess am being addicted to this n the sweetest part is that he brought her a puppy...so sweet of him... :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..
oh my puppy thats a sweet gift to give...
so maan did let her to enjoy herself n didnt spoil it either by taking advantage...
waiting for the pool party
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Posted: 13 years ago
great updates dear...their relationship id moving steadily forward
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Posted: 13 years ago
~Chapter 11~


I find it bore to type and kinda thinking to end this story in next 2 or 3 chapters.

"Riddhima wants you to call Geet." Armaan said after he picked Maan up from

his building. They had a practice this afternoon and a game tomorrow.

Maan looked at him but didn't say anything.

"Man, it's been over two weeks."

"Leave it alone Armaan." Maan said.

Armaan cast him a glance as he pulled out into traffic, "Have you met my

wife?"

Maan shrugged, "Tell Riddhima it's fine. I just have some things to work

out."

"Riddhima thinks that you are being complete bas***d."

"She's right." Maan agreed. He really needed some time to clear his head.

Whenever Geet was around, he just couldn't think straight, and he had some

things to figure out.

"Are we still on for Vegas?"

"As far as I know.yes"

This didn't make any sense. Maan wasn't giving anything up. "Did something

happen?"

"Yes, and no." he answered.

Armaan clenched his jaw. Maan wasn't telling him a damn thing and he had

Riddhima on his case about Geet. She'd ran into her a few days ago downtown

and she looked as though she'd been run over by a truck, so his wife said,

"Riddhima said it looked as though she'd been crying."

"Armaan, shut the f**k up." Maan said with restrained anger as turned his

attention to the scenery outside the passenger window.

His tone or blunt statement didn't affect Armaan but he knew when to stop

pushing. They had had harsher words with one another before and sometimes

they'd come to blows. With how close they were growing up together, it wasn't

a surprise to anyone to know that. It wasn't his business and he shouldn't

have started with him, but he was worried about Geet too.

If he thought he was the only one, he was wrong. When they pulled into the

parking lot of the arena, Happy was there leaning against his truck with

his arms crossed across his chest.

"Ah hell." Maan said. "This is all I need."

"do you want me to go to the underground parking?" Armaan

asked knowing there was security guarding it.

"No. Drop me off. I'll talk to him."

"Geet sent her brother?"

"Chances are less, she doesn't know he's even here." Maan admitted while Armaan

pulled up alongside of the truck. He got out, "I'll see you in a few

minutes." He said to Armaan as he shut the door.

Armaan pulled away watching Maan walk up to Happy in the rearview mirror.

Happy straightened and dropped his arms while talking to Maan.

A Half an hour later he came in the dressing room, "Everything all right?"

"Yeah." Maan said starting to get undressed.

Armaan finished changing and didn't say another word. He didn't have

anything to tell Riddhima and chances were she was going to get fed up and

talk to Maan herself. He'd already told her to leave him alone, but chances

were, she wasn't going to listen.

Armaan somehow sensed that something deep was going on inside Maan's head

and he decided to give him time before he started bugging him again.

At that moment his father walked in the dressing room as large as life. His

dad had this air about him that commanded respect even though he didn't act

like it. His eyes searched the crowd before they settled on Maan, "Mr.Khurana" He said quietly, "A word."

"f**k man." He mumbled and turned away from Armaan walking toward the room

Mr.Malik indicated to.

Once inside he told him to sit down. Maan did.

"I need to know." Mr.Malik said, once Maan seated himself on a bench.

Maan didn't have to ask what he meant because he knew. Mr.Malik was aware

that something was bothering him. He'd

actually given him time to come clean, but he hadn't. Obviously he'd

noticed his inconsistencies even though he hadn't let on. "Jesus, can't a

man have some bloody privacy?" Maan grumbled. His teammates razzed him

about her too and he really didn't want to talk about this relationship.

Maybe he screwed up by bragging about other women he'd had. Still, he

wanted privacy with Geet. He needed to figure out exactly what he wanted to

do with her now. He expected a tongue lashing for that statement but

Mr.Malik only sat down next to him and took a deep breath of patience. He

was surprised that when he finally did speak, he was firm but not angry.

"Not with your status kid. You of all people should know that. I'll

pull you from the first line if you don't start acting like the athlete you

are. You have an image to uphold. I never tolerated this bullshit from my

son, so don't expect better treatment."

Maan raised his eyes to his mentor, "I met someone."

"I figured." Mr.Malik said if it were no surprise.

"Really? Is there anything you don't know?"

"Yeah, you and Armaan are different in a lot of ways, but you're also a lot

alike." Mr.Malik admitted. Then he gave him one of his rare smiles. "So

tell me about her."


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Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
shalini_s thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updates.. Maan and Geet.. poolside party.. i'll make it worth while..
waiting for the next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my my what happened btwn geet's brother and maan 😲

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