ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Never heard of Padam Padam - thanks for explaining it. Look forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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niiice!!!:)..waiting for the next update!!aise ytoh ill find it but plz pm when this thread moves to the fan fic forum!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do PM me wen u update again :) i love ur story.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
i don't know, you've got a completely different feel to your writing. It's very succinct, a complete package and I'm really, really enjoying it. I like how you've explained everything, with the whole 'padam, padam'. I like how the scenes are described with just the right touch of romance, nothing's been over done or over described. It's allowing us into a moment in the characters' lives without overindulging in any particular aspect of the story. Looking forward to more 👏.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update asr softening up to khushi and la wondering but brushed it of please pm




Thanks...Will PM you next.

Originally posted by: gagsy

that was wonderful.

plz pm me whn u pdate.



Thanks...will PM you..



Thank You!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: slgirl

oh i like ur writing...Pm me when u do the next update..😊



Thank you. I will...

Originally posted by: savi-tan

Never heard of Padam Padam - thanks for explaining it. Look forward to the next update.



You are welcome...

Originally posted by: shaam91

niiice!!!:)..waiting for the next update!!aise ytoh ill find it but plz pm when this thread moves to the fan fic forum!



Thank you. I will PM you when I update next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
nice work, great writing. waiting for the next part
P.S Why do you seem familiar... anyways, ignore and add me to your PM list please
Edited by ivre - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nice story Please PM me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Fammakhan1

Do PM me wen u update again :) i love ur story.. :)



Sure, I will. Thank you!



I will :-)



Thank you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

i don't know, you've got a completely different feel to your writing. It's very succinct, a complete package and I'm really, really enjoying it. I like how you've explained everything, with the whole 'padam, padam'. I like how the scenes are described with just the right touch of romance, nothing's been over done or over described. It's allowing us into a moment in the characters' lives without overindulging in any particular aspect of the story. Looking forward to more 👏.



Thanks a lot! I am not a hardcore romantic but I do like bits and pieces of tender moments which is exclusive only to two people and not the whole world to see... am hoping that could translate in the way Arnav and Khushi interact in this story...



Thanks...

Originally posted by: ivre

nice work, great writing. waiting for the next part

P.S Why do you seem familiar... anyways, ignore and add me to your PM list please



Thanks...It does? Will PM you...

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