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Posted: 19 years ago
*AHEM AMEM* SOMEBODY is forgeting they told me friday... which was 4 days ago 😆 u kno im waiting just with very low patience 😉 😆
himani kahan ho? 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 10

angad grabbed the letter from kripas hand and started reading it....

Dear angad and kripa,

Yes I know itz you reading this letter and no one else! It cant be anyone else! No one else has the power to open these gates…I know you two are very confused right now..but after this letter everything will be good. I hope…..i mean u two have been living with the khannas and sharmas rite? Tose b**** must have told you they are you parents! Parents my foot.! They are nothing but pure evil. I hope you two have not been totally absorbed by the powers otherwise this world is doomed!!!!..ok now listen carefully to the story im about to tell you! You may not believe it at first but im telling you this is the truth I swear apon the might power iself!just listen carefully and youll understand everything slowly one by one

So long long time ago whe your so called grandparents were little children they weren't the king of thieves..this crap only started with your grandparents time..they just say its from beginig of time to convince you. Well anyays so these two beggars didn't have any name, they were orphans. But one day a devil came into their life only as an angel. He came as a big tornado and changed their already sad lives forever

"mumphali la lo ek ka 10 ek ka 10"

" ek lado beta"

" ji saab"

" tumhara naam kya hai?" asked the man with a small white goti and black Armani suite obviously a rich man

" mera naam nahi hai"

the boy looked kind of sad buT smiled again as another boy came up and said " aapse matlab?"

" sorry I was just trying to be nice!"

" hume English nahi aati! Jo bhi bolna hai hindi mein bolo!!"

" sorry beta! Mein bus soch raha tha ki tumlog Mere liye kaam karoge? Mein tumlogo ko 2000 rs. Dunga per/month. Aur ek mansion aur gadi or school or jobhi tum logo ko chaiyae!"

" wow saab humlog aapke liye Zaroor kaam karenge!"

these two boys were very simple as was their lifestyle but this day changed everything from that day on they werE in the so called " high" society mingled and associated with only those who had enough money to just throw it in the trash! They never spoke hindi and detested hindi as a language of the lower classs. In 9 years theY forgot the simple life of the penut sellars and became the 17 year old associates of RAJ SINGH. They were JAY KHANNA and RAHUL SHARMA.

" uncle can we come in?"

" aah jay and rahul! Yes come in!!"

" uncle we want to go out with our friends on a tour to America..may we?"

" affcource beta this is the age to live go enjoy yourselves! You guyz did very well in your grades this yesr like always! You deserve this"

" thaankyou uncle!" they yell on their way out the door banging into SHILPA SINGH the wife of raj singh

" Sorry aunty!"

" itz .." before that they were gone..she laughed and came into the room " where are those two off to?"

" some tour to America!"

she handed him his tea and sat down beside him

" they've really grown up sinceyou picked them up and got them.. when do you plan to tell them wht theyre realy here for?"

" I told them im paying them for a job….they no they have to work"

" but they don't know what"

" that's gonna be the fun part!"

" you are soo evil hun" she kissed his cheek

' I kno" he replied putting his arm around her and snuggling up to her..

><

" jay you know when uncle got us he told us we had to do something..but we never did anything but he still gave us everything he promised!" rahul looked back in the rearview mirror of his lambragini convertible to check for traffic before replying" maybe he wanted us to grow up first! Hell probably tell us soon"

" yeah I guess"

" forget that man think about USA…were gonna have soo much FUN!"………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

><

" uncle!Aunty!Were home!!" jay and rahul rushed into through the doors and hugged both raj and shilpa

" heyy how was ur trip?"

" it was fab uncle! And guess wht else?"

" wht?"

"nothing uncle" jay yelled as he dragged a laughing rahul with him

" ok you two fresh up and come to my study I wanna talk to yall"

" ok"…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

><

" ok jay.. rahul….. remember that day when I got you home from the penut stand I told you that you had to do some work..well it is time to execute that! Before you were too young noy you both are 17 and young adults and able to handle this kind of stuff"

" yes uncle what do you want us to do?"

" I want you to become the KING OF THIEVES"

" wht!!!" they both yelled together

" ok I want you to go around stealing valuables…. stuff like the kahinnor diamond "

" so you want us to become thieves!"

" no I want you to become THE KING OF THIEVES! The biggest most progficient most advanced thieves in history.. I don't want you to be history I want you to CREATE history"

hey pplz

sooooo sorry about the delay..plz forgive me😭my computer was having some issues..well anyways there was more to this part but i wasnt able to post it so ill try again tommorow

ENJOY

coming up- more of the letter maybe 2 more parts😉

himani😛

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Himani sis that was SO WONDERFUL SO UNEXPECTED! and hey hey hey cant wait to read more of the letter and hte secret YAY 👏 👏 great job!
luv ya
ur sis 😛
Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

Himani sis that was SO WONDERFUL SO UNEXPECTED! and hey hey hey cant wait to read more of the letter and hte secret YAY 👏 👏 great job!
luv ya
ur sis 😛
Ruby

thx ruby sis😛 i think ill finish the letter by friday😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!! nice twist. continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
thx shaharamba 🤗
thx mehandikhan🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i just read the whole story and it was relay good you have to continue soon it is a realy good story and relay diffrent i realy like it (continue soon) 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

part 11

" uncle you brought us up to turn us into thieves? That's ridiculous!"

raj sat on the couch with a sigh and motion for both of them to sit beside him

" long ago when I was a little youngr than you about 11-12 we had just about enough food to feed me and my 2 brothers..my parents often went to sleep on an empty stomach. Well anyways so all the children in our little colony had big dreams.someone wanted to go abroad.someone wanted to become a pilot.some a doctor.but I..i wanted to become rich. I wanted to create a new world in which I was ruler. I held all the powers of the world. MONEY. So when I turned 18 I ran away from home and came to MUMBAI.there I met your aunty.she was very rich and got this house a lot of cash,clothes etc. when she came. Then I started my plan. I would need two young people to do my work. I would need a big underground secret place to hide the goods. I would need power. So for the last 10 years while youb two have been growing up I have been setting up a full fledged company for you. Now you will do this for this uncle of yourz wont you?"

jay and rahul looked at each other as if their uncle had suddenlygone mad but they knew they owed him their everythin so without thinking they agreed to do whatever raj wanted them to do

coming up- ruby😆 who is she? is she a gem? or a person?keep guessing

luv

himani😛

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aawww wonderful part sis 👏 👏 👏 as i recall "ruby" was suppose to be told about in this part 😳 😆 but i guess we'll have to wait for good stuff for later 😉
and heyyy sis wednesday coming up too soon 😛 😆 ur gna loose jst admit it! 😆
lotsa luv
cant wait for "ruby"
-Ruby 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

aawww wonderful part sis 👏 👏 👏 as i recall "ruby" was suppose to be told about in this part 😳 😆 but i guess we'll have to wait for good stuff for later 😉
and heyyy sis wednesday coming up too soon 😛 😆 ur gna loose jst admit it! 😆
lotsa luv
cant wait for "ruby"
-Ruby 😆

lol sorry sis...i promise ruby will be ther on wednesday no matter if i loose or win..but we all know kashish and me are gonna win😉😆

luv

himani😛

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