Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: ..Ananya-kmh..
This was really beautiful 😃 Loved every bit of it 😊 I just wish we get some sort of scene like this in actual 😉 The way Uday took care of Manyata was heart-warming 😳 The idea of filming a DVD of lessons was truly unique and something that only Udayveer could do Awwie..I loved the budding closeness between Manveer 😳 Uday is truly incomparible 😃 Loved this OS to the core 😉 Continue soon 😊

hehe, thank you!! i really wanted to have a scene where M accepted SOMETHING UVeer gave her, at least. lol, so the DVD was what i came up with. lol. I hope DEK gives us some joy by showing some budding closeness, in reality, too!!! thank you for reading & your feedback :)

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
Yellow!! Amazing update!! I loved how you portrayed UV and Manyata's relationship.. If they do something like that on the show, they might actually fall in love a little faster..LOL

thank youu! i am so happy you enjoyed this OS. I hope we start progressing in the story a little more as wellbut i guess what the CVs say is a little true... if we have them together so quickly the timespan of the show might decrease as well. CVs- they're so crafty. lol

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
nice..please pm me when you update..😊

I am so happy that you enjoyed reading!! & of course, i shall pm you when i update :) thank youuu!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Peda
Really nice
Wished this really happened in DEK

thank you!! i also hope we see some love shuv in DEK, maybe during the course of this training 😉

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: -Mais-
oh WOW! That was an adorable comeback after so many weeks girl! Loved it. When Uday was thinking to himself as to WHY she loves a guy like Aakash, I was thinking the same thing. The points you put were seriously to the point. Sheesh! What does she see in him?!

Uday's gift was so cute and thoughtful. Sigh...! Wish she realizes his true love soon <3

Mais 🤗you're truly flattering me! i know i was away for a while 😳 but im glad i came back with a strong OS. Honestly, when i wanted to sit down and write i felt a little rusty at first. and then the ideas came flowing & of course i took a stab at Mall-Kumar. lol. oopsies. oh well, it is a legit thought, nah? even i wonder, how strong is this relationship between MonAsh? when will it break and how? lol.

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Bhavya8
Great OS!! Love the bandaging bit!
Thanks for pm!

thank you, bhavya! i'm glad you liked the bandaging part. honestly, i know i made it a little unromantic by her saying it was an even exchange for him helping her, & it wasn't a pain free moment for UVeer, but it was just too tempting to write 😆

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: -princess-
Pm me for this post!!!

most definitely, thank you for reading :)

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Loved it realy i wish ye sb h0jata in da sh0w:(

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Hi Ridds!

🤗 for penning down such a cute and beautiful OS. I knew the wait would be worth it and it was. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I must say it was very innovative of you to think of 'the gift' UV brought for M. Manna padega your thought process is miles ahead.😆 Very creative.

Thanks for writing.

Love.