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congo yaar so there is bharatnatiyam even there thats cool
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TODAYZ UPDATE

All of them head towards Trisha's house, when she breaks the silence...

T:angad...

A:ya

T:who was that girl who was ****tishly dancing w/ u

A:um...

K:ya..batao...kaun thi..

A:well, actually, I don't know..I think her name was Prakriti...

T:oh...oh-kay

An:at the party...did I hear kripa say that she was your girlfriend...

A:um...

J:anitah..i think tum pure thara se paagal ho gayi ho

Ma:ya..till now i thought she was only half paagal'

T:me alwayz thought she was mental

Everybody startz cracking up!

A:anitah, sadly, but ur rite

Josh spitz out the water on Anitahz face...

J:crap..r u saying that Anitah was rite...

A:ya..

J:are u saying that kripa is your girlfriend...

A:no...

J:then...

K:its just tht he was scared of Prakriti(don't kill me for tht) and tht he needed a savior..
And then there I was...

Ma:oh kay sure..

A:whatever...

Aa:lets go see a movie...

M:kaunsi picture?!?

T:um...u have a choice...
A)Taxi 9211...
B)Rang De Basanti...
C)Bluffmaster (I know itz old but...)

K:um...how about...

A:not dosti..its too dramatic...

M:ya he's rite..what about Rang De Basanti?!?

K:too patriotic...

An:what about Bluffmaster...

A:wow! Ur lightbulbs working today!

Ma:its a christmas miracle

An:its march..

M:omg she knowz wht month it is..

K:w/e...lets just go see Bluffmaster...

Aa:ya...abhishek is so cute...

K:ya..he is dashing..

A:omg...priyanka is hot!..

J:hotter than ur girlfriend...

A:wht girlfriend...

J:kripa...

A:omg...

J:fine forget it!

Angad sitting next to Kripa
Kripa next to Manek
Manek next to Josh
Josh next to Mishti
Mishti next to Karthik
Karthik next to Prithvi
Prithvi next to Simone
Simone next to Anitah
Anitah next to Manek
Manek next Aaliya
and me on the other side of Angad...

There...the movie beginz...everybodyz lovin it...

*srry that was a short part..bt it was either this or nothing...gtg to school*

*anywayz...*

LOVE

***~Trisha~***

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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#83
awesum πŸ‘ πŸ‘
cont soon!!!
luv himani
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part
but i was wondering how can manek sit next to josh and then next aaliya
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GREAT FANFIC!!!! πŸ‘

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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#86
hey when r u gonna cont next part ???
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RECAP:::

An:what about Bluffmaster...

A:wow! Ur lightbulbs working today!

Ma:its a christmas miracle

An:its march..

M:omg she knowz wht month it is..

K:w/e...lets just go see Bluffmaster...

Aa:ya...abhishek is so cute...

K:ya..he is dashing..

A:omg...priyanka is hot!..

J:hotter than ur girlfriend...

A:wht girlfriend...

J:kripa...

A:omg...

J:fine forget it!

Angad sitting next to Kripa
Kripa next to Manek
Manek next to Josh
Josh next to Mishti
Mishti next to Karthik
Karthik next to Prithvi
Prithvi next to Simone
Simone next to Anitah
Anitah next to Manek
Manek next Aaliya
and me on the other side of Angad...

There...the movie beginz...everybodyz lovin it...



TODAYZ UPDATE

During the movie Angad looks at Kripa

A:(thinking_) damn she lookz cute and hot...

K:kuch bola...

A:um..nope

A:(thinking_)she is so pretty...hold on..y am I thinking of kripa like this?!??!

KRIPA BREAKS THE SILENCE

K:that was an awesome song..."say na say naa" was the best

A:ya...I liked tht rap song better....

J:ya...

Just everyone starts singing...

A: i wanna say heya to my playa reitish d big props to piggy chops and chuck masta sippy my crew the bluffmaster movie and those hip hop fakers vishal and shekhar here we go!

K:come to me bhool jaaye sara jahaan come to me hum banale apni nayi jagah

Aa:come to me bhool jaaye sara jahaan come to me hum banale apni nayi jagah

Ma:listen up girl

A:ek main aur ek tu hai aur hawa mein jaadu hai aarzoo bekabu hai samjho saare baat baaki waqt ka kya bharosa banke paani beh jaaye kal agar na mil paaye reh na jaaye baat baaki right here right now hain khushi ka samaa wind your body one time right here right now hum hai is pal jaha wind your body two time bhool jaao muskurao reh na jaaye baat baaki ek main aur ek tu hai aur hawa mein jaadu hai aarzoo bekabu hai samjho saare baat baaki waqt ka kya bharosa banke paani beh jaaye kal agar na mil paaye reh na jaaye baat baaki

A:b l u to the double f masta let's take it slow girl im a long lasta yeah im a bad boy but im a good girl out in the club or on your bed or un your rug girl my rides a maybach so lay back while i drop the play back get to my crib and then u'll ask if you can stay back u fine so fine i'm gonna keep you smiling nice eyes fine fur p*** styling

Audience=Au

Au:shut up!!!

A:hey...I sing better than abhishek..

Au:i don't give a crap!
K:excuse me! We are just singing!

J:lets go!

Then everybody walks out...

Aa:bakwas picture

T:no the movie was good just the crowd was bad...we were just having fun.

A:ya...the audience was crappy...

T:so now..what do u guyz want to do?!?!

Ma:lets go to...um...

An:the mall..

A:****...phirse...

Aa:shut up anitah!

K:Lets go to.....

A:um...

Aa:lets play antakshari....

K:oh kay! Me start!!!

Everybody::oh kay

K:Say na say na how u said it to me..soni do na do na how u did it to me dholi dhol baja rajh rajke o aisa yaar manana eh nachke...ke say naa...
Aaa...

A:me go...

An:kk

A:aksar kyun tujhe yaad karta hoon yaar...mohobhat ki guzarish ho rahi hai...tumhe pane ki koshish ho rahi...jaanabe jaaniya..janabe jaaniya..janabe jaaniya..janaabe jaaniya...Aaaa...


Ma:Aashiq banaya aashiq banaya aashiq banaya apne...tere bina sooni sooni hai bahein tere bin pyasi pyasi nigahein tere bin bin asar meri aanhen tere bin...OOOOO aashiq banaya...aashiq banaya...aashiq banaya apne....Ehhhh

Ka:Ek main aur ek tu hai aur hawa mein jadoo hai...arzoo bekaboo hai..samjho sare baat baaki...Right here right now hai khushi ka sama...Right here rite now hum hai is pal jahaan...bhool jawon muskurawon rehna jaye baat baaki....KI...

M:anybody know a song tht starts with Ki?!?

Everybody sayz no...

A:can I just start a song w/ the letter K?!?

Everybody: ya sure

A:kyon ki itna pyar tumko karte hain hum...(angad lookz at kripa_) kya jaan loge hamari sanam...(kripa notices and looks strait towards the ground) kyon ki itna pyar tumko karte hain hum...kya jaan loge hamari sanam...hamari dil ki tum thodi si kadar karlo..hum tumpe marte hain thodi si fikar kar lo..fikar kar lo...looo

E:idk...lets just sing now..duets...k!??

E:ya..good idea.!!>

An:i will spin a bottle whichever two people it lands on they have to sing a duet..the bottle spins to Angad and Kripa...

A:(thinking)kripa has such a beautiful voice..almost as pretty as her

K:(thinking_)omg...why is it alwayz me and angad...bt maybe itz nt so bad..

M:You have to sing a song from Aksar...

A-K:kkk
A:Laagi laagi laagi, laagi laagi laagi Laagi laagi laagi, laagi laagi laagi Prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi.Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi


K:Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi


A:Hawa, kali, ghata ko bhi hai teri justujoo Sili sili sili si lage teri khushboo Tera tera tera aks hai mere rubaroo Mere mere mere dil ko hai teri aarzoo Dilbar haseen mere dilnashin Main gum huwa tujh mein kahin Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi


K:Tere tere tere naam ka pyala pee liya Teri teri teri yaad ka lamha jee liya Ghari ghari ghari har ghari pagal hai jiya


A:Teri teri teri teer ne zakhmi kar diya Is ghao mein aaram hai khamosh mein to ram hai Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi


K:Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai


A-K::Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi

When they are done everybody is looking at them in shock!!!

J:crap...u guyz sing good...u guyz should make an album...

Aa:ya...u guyz are great

K:thanks then she blushed and turned to the side...

Ma:u guyz have chemistry!!!

M:ya u do!

A-K:um....oh kay..!?!(they both blushed)

T:um...(trisha noticed ke kripa was feeling uncomfortable...) Its already 12:00 am....ghar chale.?!?

A:ya oh kay!

Ma:its been a long day

P:I learned a lot of thingz today

A:wht

P:Anitah not tht stupid....Angad likes Kripa and Kripa likes Angad...

A-K:::wht?!?!

P:ya...its so obvious

A-K:::it is..I mean...I don't like him/her (they both said seperatly)

P:oh kay...hmm...sure...

M:CHALEIN?!?

A-K:ya...

*that was a long part and I hope u guyz liked it...btw_please leave comments..it really helpz a writer...*

*****I TYPED UP ALL THESE SONGS...WITHOUT USING THE INTERNET...so YA...LOLZ>..it took me a long time to write this part...I hope u guyz liked it...*****

:) :) :) love...(: (: (:

^^Trisha^^

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: kyph05

omg that was good πŸ˜ƒ loved it πŸ‘

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thank u!!!...

love,

trisha

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Propz to u on that part! It was awesome! Cont. soon!

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