*Mayur SS/OS Gallary#4* NTL on pg 151 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
fantastic update
Mayank is gem
loved him so much
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Awesom update dear
congrats on ur 4th thrad
loved Mayank a lot
waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
congo new thread
lovely story
mayank is very nice.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
congos mari.. 4 ur new 4th thread!🥳
interestin update!
finally ria came bac 2 nupur... mayank made it happen!
luvd it!
cont soon!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
congrats for ur new thread.

very nice update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
i m updating it in an hour...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
i have added a beautiful poem "Sab Mohabbat ka ik pehr hai"sung by Pakistani singer Faisal Latif.in this update i tried show Mayank's love for Nupur.
🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Ye Kaisi Mohabbat hai

The whole day Nupur tried Mayank's cell number but it was powered off or engaged,she was hell worried for him,he went for office early in the morning without eating his breakfast and did not come back yet, "its all happened because of me,"she was feeling guilty for made him upset..her trial of thought got distracted

"Mama"Ria voice hit with her ear drums and she turned her face towards door she was standing there holding Mayank's hand. Finally Nupur smiled to see Ria and Mayank felt peace,happiness in his heart to see that smile on her face and his lips too curved into smile.. "Ria"Nupur rushed towards her and hugged her tightly "I missed you mama"Ria childish yet loved filled voice fell into her ears and Nupur could not help to control her tears which were rushing down from her cheeks, "I missed you too beta"she could barely say those words and pulled herself a bit away she cupped her tiny face in her hands and kissed lovingly all over her face "you are my jaan,my life beta,your mama cant live without you"she wiped her tiny tears with her palm while weeping, "Mama please don't cry" she wiped Nupur's tears with her tiny ,soft hands and Nupur held them in her hands and kissed them lovingly, "your mama's jaan with her so she will not cry anymore"she smiled weakly kissing her cheeks and Ria hugged her mother,Mayank who was standing near to them was awed to see this side of Nupur ,how much she loved her daughter, he smiled to see his Nupur had been changed while he felt his eyes pockets getting wet.

Yeh jo palkon pe rimjhim sitaron ka mela sa hai

Yeh jo tere bina koi itna akela sa hai

Zindagi teri yaadon se mehka howa sheher hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

"Thanks Mayank"Nupur voice brought him back to his world and he looked at her who was now standing infront of him holding Ria in her arms, she knew what he had done for her she had not even words to say him thank as she had nothing to give him, he always had helped her and was with her whenever she needed him, he had never demanded anything in returned, he raised his hand and softly removed tears from her eyes "you know Nupur I hate your tears" he said same words and her heart skipped she looked into his eyes and felt the same care or may be Love, " it can not be love" she corrected her heart, "Ms Bhushan friends main No sorry,No Thanks"he said Nupur's words which she used to say in her nautanki style and Nupur could not help but smile shrugging off weird thoughts which were still disturbing her "Mayank abhi bhi tumhain meri wo sab lines yaad hain jo main hamesha kaha kerti thi"she asked surprisingly looking at his face and Mayank smiled to see those cute expressions on her face "tum se jori har yaad mere dil pe lihki hai"he stared into her eyes and her hurt flattered to felt the same strange emotions in his words which she could not understand, whenever he had looked into her eyes she felt his eyes wanted to ask her something which she could not able to understand

Sahilon pe kharoonde banaye thay humne tumhe yaad hai

Rang barish mein kaise udhaye thay humne tumhe yaad hai

Jane kiske liye ghar sajaye they humne tumhe yaad hai

Koi khushboo ka jhonka nikalta idhar tha ik kahin

Gum hai nindon ka sehra mein khaboon ka rasta kahin

Har Khushi ate jate huwe waqt ki leher hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

mama" Ria voice distracted their moment and Mayank moved away a bit feeling embarrassed ,Nupur too came back to her senses and embarrassedly looked at Mayank who standing a bit away from them trying to ignored Nupur's gaze. She recollected herself "Beta did you eat something" she asked Ria patted her cheek and she nodded her head negatively. "Ok I make noodles for you"she kissed her cheek and she looked at Mayank who was still silently stood there but she could see immense pain in his eyes which was hurting her, "why I feel I am the reason of his pain? What is in his heart which he never told me?Why I am feeling he hid something from me but what is that?he never hid anything from me but Today whatever I felt in his eyes it was not just care, there was something more, the intensity of his eyes was disturbing her and lots of questions raised in her mind which were making her restless, disturbed and she wanted to get answers of them..

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"I should control my emotions .I should not have show her what I feel for her? I felt lots of questions in her eyes to listen my words, her face seemed disturbed and I was the reason." he sighed taking deep breath trying to inhale fresh air inside him standing on his balcony, though it was chilled outside but he was feeling suffocated, same desires, his heart still was craving for her wanted her which was not possible..

Zindagi dhoop chaayon ka ik khel , bhid chat ti nahi

Aur is khel mein din guzarta naih raat kati nahi

Pyaar karte howe admi ki kabhi umar ghati nahi

Dil ki dehleez per aks e roshan hai tere naam se

Raat -jage aainon mein kihle hain kahin shaam se

Aik dariya hai charon taraf darmiyan behar hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

He came back to his thoughts after hearing knock on door as he turned back his face he saw Nupur standing at door who was just entered in room..

"Nupur you still awake? Why did not you sleep yet,Nupur you are not at all completely well still you need rest?"Mayank went up to her asking lots of questions in just one breath and Nupur shook her head slightly 'he can never change, he still just thinks about me and don't care about himself'

"Mayank if you're questioning session has completed then can I say something?" she said raising her eye borrows saying in her typical nautanki style and Mayank had stopped himself to ask another question.she held his hand and made him sit on bed while he was giving her confuse look,

"What is this Nupur?"Mayank asked looking at tray which she placed in front of him..

"Your favourite Biryani..i know Mr.Sharma you did not eat anything the whole day and me too"she said flipping her eyes in most innocent way and for a moment he got lost in her .

Yeh jo palkon pe rimjhim sitaron ka mela sa hai

Yeh jo tere bina koi itna akela sa hai

Zindagi teri yaadon se simta howa sheher hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

Sab mohabbat ka ik pehar hai

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here is update i hope u ll liked it😳
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome update SIS...
i sooo loved it lodsss...
beautifully written...
loved it to d coreee...
so finally Nupur smiled a lil...
bt m feeling bad for Mayank...
i hope soon Nupur will understand his feelings...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
loved it lodsss...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i loved d "POEM" its awesome...😍
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
beautiful. I can feel the pain of mayank

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