Kya yeh wohi hai??? NOTE - Page 8

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Hey Esha...

kaisi ho dear...

sorry...first part se comment nahi karr payi...!!! par kehte hain na ke...'first part ka bhula third part me wapas aa jaye toh use bhula nahi kehte'...😆...toh yehi sohte hue iss baat ko bhul jayo...aur apna dil saaf karr lo...!!! agar saaf nahi hota toh main main surf xcel bhej deti hoon...par meri taraf se dil saaf hona mangta...😆....tension not...i got it!!!🤣

ab fic par aate hain...!!! thoda comedy...thoda masti-mazak...!!! ek dam superb fic hai dear...thank u thank u

Raj ko flirt bhi karrna aata hai...!!! par sach me Naina kafi bhadki hui hai uss par...!!! vaise raj ne sahi kaha ki uss ne kafi bura image bana rakha hai naina par...!!! ab use bhi Naina ka dil saaf karrna padega...its not that she is mad at him,...well she is but just put ur self in her condition a guy who u don't even know comes from no where and start callin u sweety and hunney n all that... obviously u'll be mad at that person!!!!...and about raj i really don't know what m writing😭😔🤢...i mean in the first part he is so mean and arrogant, in second he is not himself at all...and in the 3rd part he is flirting with her already m not sure if my readers are even getting what m writing!!!! to be precise i really don't know where is this story going but still I'll try to do my level best as this is for ria not for me!!!!

chalo abhi next part jaldi se post karo...😃...hmmm trying

aur haan rahi baat tumhare NOTE ki toh...dear...tum as a writer nayi ho...aur jaise hi tumhari story aage badhegi...toh dhire dhire readers bhi jyada honge...isiliye udaash matt ho...aur likhti raho...😃....m upset not bcz of readers silly ...its something related to my personal life!!!

hamara ashrivaad tumhare sath hai baalike...😆...thanks apna ashirvad aise he jahaadti rehna...🤣...ur sweet comment really made me smile!!!!...thank u

Love

Priya😃

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good...thanks

so naina morning started as usall with the fighting of her siblings

she did her routine work and goes to her office as it was her first day of work

here raj who had met naina and falls in love with her forgot everything

his life is changing he is feeling nice and the most imp thing he is smiling wow

anyways he hired a detective to find that misterious girl and the detective found her out

raj is now happy he got every info about his dream girl

he calls her and offers her a job but naina she refuse him

but raj is raj is warns her

wow what a up...once again thank u

and nowing coming to ur note

esha let me remind u that this ff for me so u have to cont it any how

and if u wont then u know me...baap re!!!!... dhamki de rahe hai kya???🤣...don't worry i won't dis-cont it!!!!!!

plz cont soon and pm me...add eshapmlist in your buddy list only if want update...i won't pm anyone else!!!!

Originally posted by: raheelu

hey Esha thanks 4 pm
nice part abhi half read kiya complete kaney k baad comment karon gi
luv u🤗

Originally posted by: prerna1

awesome part dear
and plz do continue its really good story
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

thanks for the pm...

loved the update...

raj is superb...

waiting to see wat happens next...