MG FF:Love Start With Lie and fear #1

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

O GOD Geet ko dumb banadiya

shuruwat hi jhooth se ho gayi wonder maan ko jab pata chalega then hw would he react

lovely concept

love-Piya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Hey I am sending buddy request...

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hepzi

@honey_doll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

PART:3

Here maan is feeling restlessness to see geet.His heart is dieing to have a single glimpse of her innocent eyes... but his brain stoping him"maan no its wrong,MAAN SINGH KHURANA thinking about a girl no way"

that day was very odd .geet is trying her level best to adjust in the new environment(bcoz she comes from village tat lil bit different in her circumstance )

AT 9.30PM KHURANA MANSION:

maan is in his room lying on the bed and staring at the ceiling & fully lost in his thought😳😳(awwee MSK kabhi kissi soch mai dubha😳)

maan(selfthought):what magic dis girl is having,y iam thinking about her,y iam feeling to take her in my arms,to hug her,to feel her soft touch...??????

he dnt respect others feeling,he has no feeling for others,but now he has some feeling for her.what is dis...???? is thz love...???? or attraction...????

Atlast maan comes to conclusion

maan you dnt know anything about her so it just attraction... there is nothing there other than thz...(areey maan babu hey tum kya kheha rahi hu😲)

AT PINKY HOME:

geet and pinky in there room

geet:pinky i m thinking 2 tell the truth

pinky:geet even i am thing the same bcz he is a dangerous person...

geet:u know tat he is a dangerous person... then y u lied to them...😡

pinky:at the time i dnt think about future.but now i think if they found truth i have no future

geet:k k dnt make me scared tmr i m gng 2 tell the truth and ask apologize to them

NEXT DAY MORNING:

in the college campus maan and their gangs are sit in the same place.vicky and adi notices maan restless face

vicky:maan what happen?r u ok...

maan:ya i m ok vicky

adi:no man u r lying

maan:(angrly)i told na i m k then y u irritate me

sameera:cool dear

vicky:maan we want to tell one important matter to you

raj lying to you maan.he brought 3 lakhs from you na for his mother operation,but yesterday i meet his mother in mall she s well

adi:then y did he borrowed money?

vicky:i think he das joined with some bad gang... may be he misused tat

maan angrly tight his fists...

maan:hw dare he lied to me...where is he...??????/

vicky:he's in playground

maan went to ground and grabed raj collar

maan:u lying to MSK...u think am i fool...whole college well known i cant digest any kind of lie...then how you lying to me😡

maan angly started punching him,no one can dared to prevent him

at time geet and pinky enter in to the college.

pinky:geet r u sure u want to tell the truth

geet :s pinky

pinky and geet saw all the student are running towards ground...

pinky asks to one of the student in tat crowd...

pinky:what happen?

stdent:maan is hitting raj

pinky:waaattt...???why...????😕😕

he says full story to pinky

pinky and geet run towards the ground and both are shock to see maan like dis

he beating him mercilessly

geet and pinky exchange worried look

geet:(selfthrought)hey baba jee what is happening... ???i dnt now if he founds truth abt me.(she think her in the place of raj)

maan watchs geet and pinky and he notice geet eyes are filled with fear.suddenly he loosen his grip from raj

maan:in future you cant say even the word "lie"

maan started moving toward geet

pinky:geet i think we have to move from dis place

geet and pinky start run from the place

maan:ek min geet

geet and pinky turn towards maan.geet was start shivering

maan to geet

maan:What are you two doing here(now she shivering badly)

pinky:ohhh hmmm we we

geet pressed pinky fists(geet:(st)plz pinky dont tell the truth)

pinky:ohhh...hmmm shhheee wanttt yourrr Management Concepts & Processes notes

maan:what??????

pinky:ya she want your management concepts and processes notes

adi,vicky and sameera start laugh

adi:he he he he he...notes from MSK he he he he

maan give him a deadly glare

sameera:(smile sarcastically)u dont know anyother seniors

maan:sameera wait r u sure pinky u both come here to ask notes

pinky and geet node their head yes

hai frnds how s it?

frnds when you finsh read this part what ever come to ur mind

negative or positive plz commend frnd

dont forget press like button😊

PART 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2208947/mg-ff-love-start-with-lie-and-fear-1?pn=20

Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

hi...
thank u for the update..
awesome part...
so maan can't bear with lies...
now i am praying for geet...
bechari geet , how will she face his anger...
let see ..what happens????..
anyways awesome update...

i hate waiting for next parts...😡
continue soon...
eagerly waiting to read many more parts...

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

dear it'll be better Maan knws the truth soon...

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hepzi

@honey_doll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

PART 2

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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Geet and Pinky don't have the courage to tell truth to Maan now after watching him punching Raj...

Geet is not dumb but dumbo...to hide one lie they will create a web of lies and that will be more dangerous...

awesome update...thanx for pm