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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update.
Geet dreaming about maan kissing her as punishment for lying n getting scared was awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6
so that was Geet's dream...
poor her cant tell and also cant hide also it also for long...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice story
just read ur ff...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar first i thought maan ws really kissin her nd he came 2 knw d truth...but after reading nxt i ws relaxed... luvd it...poor geet nd pinky wat will dey do nw???? plzzz cont ssoonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz pm me too when u update...

loved ur ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice. please continue and add me to ur pm list
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Heyy! So Sorry Buddy I'm Lagging Behind With The Updates!
Will Read All The Updates ASAP!😳

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PART 7


Geet ran to the canteen and pinky follows her



Pinky: geet wait...geet stop where are you going?


Geet rushed into the canteen and search adi and Vicky. Adi noticed geet


Adi: what happen? why are you running like this? is there any problem?



Geet breathed heavily...it takes some time for her to become normal


Vicky: (worriedly) bolo geet...is there any problem?


Geet nodded her head yes


Adi: what happen geet?


Geet: wo.. wo.. actually I am selected for speech in Freshers day party...


vicky:what?



Adi and Vicky are worried about geet they always treat geet as their little sister


Adi: hey geet don't worry.today evening come to the car parking area.I am wait for you with maan...you tell the truth to maan...dnt get delayed


Geet: (nod her head) adi but I feel nervous before him...you know every time I lose my words before him... I went blank...i dnt know why (innocently)


Adi and vicky smile


Adi &vicky: (St) Love is a strange to understand


At the same time in khurana mansion


Rano: raj i have one doubt


Raj: what dear?


Rano: what brought changes in maan? what brought smiles in maan's life? what brought light in my sons life? I have a lot of questions in my heart raj


Raj: why you r confusing yourself? we are always waiting for maan to change na? then y u confused at yourself


Rano: no raj... a men cant change without any sake... there is one secret hidden in his change. i don't know what? i think he fell in love


Raj: r u mad... my son msk fallen in love.. no chance


rano:u r only mad...he s my son...i m his mother..he has fell in love with some one...a girl can only able to bring these type of change in a boy...if i proved that then what u gng to do...


raj:i give whatever u ask...


rano:promise..


raj:promise


rano mind was busy..."how to prove"...suddenly she got an idea...she call vicky


rano:vicky beta where r u


vicky:aunty i m in college...what happen aunty...its everything k?


rano:s beta.vicky i hv one doubt


vicky:jee aunty


rano:vicky do u find any change in maan?


vicky:(happily)s aunty


rano:vicky how maan changed?is there any secret behind this change


vicky rolled his eyes he dnt know how to answer dis question...bcoz everyone hv the same question in their heart


rano:vicky r u there


vicky:jee aunty...wo..wo i dnt know...but


rano:be frank beta...i m not msk


vicky:aunty actually we also having the same doubt...but i think the changes r brought by geet... every time he controls his anger for her...he always take care about her...


rano:geet nice name...


vicky:aunty i think maan was in dilemma about his feeling...we should wait for maan to confess his feeling...


rano:ya ur correct beta...k beta c u later


vicky:bye aunty


rano went to raj


rano:i won...i won


raj:what?


rano:s the girl name is geet.i said na someone is behind his change...that is geet...raj how sweet her name na...


raj:has maan proposed her?


rano:(sadly)no...(happily)i m waiting for the moment..if he proposes her then i 'll go and bring my bahu here


raj smile at ranos enthusiasm


at that time raj received a phone call


raj:ya wait i come there with in 15 mins


he cut the call


rano:(worriedly)what happen?


raj:there is some problem in main branch so i want to go dear


raj went to office


IN THE COLLEGE AT 3:30PM


college get over.adi and vicky went to maan


adi:maan, geet said that she want to talk with you.so wait for some time


maan was super-duper happy


they are waiting for geet in the parking area.at the time maan mobile rang


maan:hello whose that?


voice:shall i speak to mr.khurana


maan:ya...who r u?


voice:sir mr.raj khurana meet with an accident.he was admit ted in ****hospital..plz come quickly


maan:k wait i'll cme with in five min


adi:what happen?


maan:adi i want to go immediately..my dad met with an accident.tell geet i 'll meet her afterwards


adi:he s ok na...


maan:ya dnt worry adi...u wait and tell geet...otherwise she will wait for us...plz take care about her he takes his car and went to hospital


geet came to adi


geet:adi where is maan?


adi:his father met with an accident so he went to hospital..i think he dnt come to freshers party so dnt worry geet.we'll tell the truth later


geet feel her heart went heavily..it was filled with guilty



geet:(st)hey baba jee y u always do like dis?..when i go before him my mouth went mum...if i gather my boldness and went to him...then he dnt have time to hear ...y u make everything difficult for me...


in the hospital


maan run to the reception and ask for his father they show the way.he went to the room


rano saw maan.She ran to him and hugged him


maan:(worried)mom what happened to papa?...he is well na..


rano:now only doctor checked him


doctor came out from room...rano and maan went to him


maan:what happen to my father...he is well na... Doctor plz tell


doc:dnt worry mr.khurana..there is slight fracture in left hand...with in one month it will get cure


maan:doc i want to see my papa


doc:ya sure


maan and rano went into the room .He saw his father. tears are gathered in maan eyes.maan go and sit near raj and caressed his hand softly


raj feels bad to see his son likes dis so he try to lighten his mood


raj:maan i feel bored. plz play geet in ur iphone


maan was shock to hear geet name from his papa mouth


maan:geet...


raj:ya geet...song


maan smile himself...raj notices maan's smile and he started to tease maan


raj:maan u thought geet is girl na...


maan:no papa (maan was embarrassed he dnt know how to hide dis from his parents)


maan was restless he dnt know what happen to him..maan try to avoid further question


maan:wo..papa i 'll wait outside .If you need anything call me papa


raj & rano:(st)he need some time to confess his love


rano:maan beta u go home...i will take care of papa...u go and take rest


maan:but ma


rano:maan u go...see papa he is fine na...if we need anything then will call you maan


maan:k ma...mom take care of papa...bye papa


rano and raj feel happy to see maan like dis...they silently praise geet


maan went to mansion


maan lying in his bed and stare the ceiling


Maan: (St) geet u made my life upside down...u know my ego makes fun about me...till now i m unable to understand what is this ?love or affection?... if it is affection ,then why i try to remove her fears... y i hate tears in her eyes...



i know she is dumb but her eyes are very talkative... what a magic she has in her eyes...


maan what s dis?... i know she is my angel...i always want my angel with me... she brings light to my dark life... i always want that light in my life... maan control yourself...otherwise you r gng to become mad


maans ego and his unconditional love start to fight .at last his unconditional love won his heart


maan:(st)s i love her...i'm gng to take her in my arm...i will not put her down...i will not allow her to shed tears. bcoz those eyes only belong to me...each and every part of her body is functioning only for me...i will not allow any one to touch or harm her


After getting into a conclusion, maans heart filled with some unknown joy there s no word to explain his feeling


NEXT DAY MORNING:


maan went to hospital to see his father


rano:beta do u have any important work in college


maan:no mom y?


rano: Doctor said there s one last check up for papa...after that we can take him to home...


after the check up maan take raj and rano to home... maan sat with them and chatted with them...dis is the first time he spends some time with his family...maan totally forget the freshers party


IN THE COLLEGE CAMPUS 7.30PM


adi,vicky and sameera feels bore without maan...but adi and vicky didn try to call maan to college bcoz they want to save geet...but sameera was restless...at the time sameera received the program list paper she just go through the list...she was shocked


25.thanking note's by geet handa 1st MBA


sameera:(st)geet is dumb na...then how?sameera went to pinky and geet


sameera:what is dis?


sameera show the program list...pinky and geet roll their eyes


geet:sry sameera...actually ...


adi and vicky watched everything from the distance and came to them and convinced sameera and they made geet escape



geet feel guilty...tears gather in her eyes


geet:thanks bhai


adi and vicky was shocked to hear geet calling them bhai and next second they felt happy


vicky:dis is our duty sister


they all laughed and enjoyed...but,sameeras stomach burned


sameera:(st)geet after this ur life will be full of sorrows...i willnot allow you to smile...dis s the right time to push geet from maans life


sameera called maan



sameera:hello maan


maan:bolo sameera


sameera:have u forgot,today we have freshers day party


maan:sameera u know na...dad is not well...so i decided to spend some time with dad


sameera:ya its correct maan...but i hv one surprise for you...any guess


maan:(irritate)no sameera you tell


sameera:your lovely friend geet is taking part in one program


maans heart jumped in joy to hear geets name...


maan:which program?


sameera:suspense...come and see her performance


Maan cuts her call and takes a quick shower and went downstairs


Reno: beta where are you going?


Maan: mom I have some important work in college... I want to go mom Maan takes his car and went to college At the same time in the college The party comes to conclusion. at last geet went to the stage to give thanks note... Sameera eagerly waited for maan


At the same time maan enters the auditorium... he hears some melody voice... he raises his eyes to the stage...



he was shocked...


PRECAP-maan:geet i luv u😊...



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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago

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