Pehla Pyar-- Angad+Kripa & Dk+Disha - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
that was really good,kajal 👏 can't wait to read whats coming up 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
heya kajal!!...

i jus started reading ur fanfic!!

its brilliant!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
tomorrow there will be def. an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Wow Kaju, awesome!!

Hope ur feeling better!!! 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
awsome part!!
cont soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

Wow Kaju, awesome!!

Hope ur feeling better!!! 🤗

after so many hugs i am feeling much better! thank you jaanu!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...........what a mindblowing part that was.......continue yur fan-fic soon..................cant wait for the next part..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i jus read the whole thing it is amzing plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Dk, Angad, Josh, and their crew reach the party.

So do Kripa, Aliya, and Disha.

Dk and Angad go and find cute girls to flirt with and Josh goes to buy drinks.

Josh is looking around for girls and bumps into someone.

It's none other than Aliya who looks gorgeous.

Josh: tum? What are you doing here?

Aliya: to party! You?

Josh: same. So wanna grab and drink and talk.

Aliya: sure but soda for me.

Josh: sure.

He grabs his drink and Aliya's soda.

>They sit on the side and talk....like usual flirt!!!!!!

Dk: he should be here by now with our drinks!!!!!

Angad: let me go check! He's probably flirting with some hot chick.

Dk: true.

Angad walks over to the bar and is looking around at the same time like Josh.....come on, they are brothers!!!!!

Kripa is walking towards his direction too so she can find Aliya but she bumps into Angad instead.

Her foot slips and she falls into Angad's strong arms. They both look into each other's eyes and are speachless. Not that they love each other or anything!!!

Kripa recognizes him instantly and so does Angad.

Angad/Kripa: Tum?????

Kripa: what are you doing here?

Angad: partying if you must know

Kripa: I guess they let anyone in now a days.

Angad: no wonder you got in.

Kripa: are you sure you aren't related to Hitler or Stalin?

Angad: bad joke!!

Kripa is like whatever!

Angad: you should be thankful I saved you otherwise you would have fell on the hard floor!

Kripa: don't try to say you did some favor on me! Has anyone ever taught you any manners!!!!!!

Angad: yeah they did! If they taught you, you would be saying thank-you right now.

Kripa just rolls her eyes and is like I could care less!!!!!

Disha is just talking to some of her friends and is a bit bored.

Dk is looking around for someone to talk to but no luck until he spots disha!!!!!!!!

Dk is like she is hot!!! but is too chicken to go up to her and say hi.

Josh and Aliya are still flirting but Aliya gets a phone call and excuses herself.

Aliya: you can walk around....I'll be right back.

Josh walks around and spots Dk. He can see where he is staring at.

Josh: ohh....so brother is a bit scared! No problem!!!!!!!

He goes behind Dk and pushes him into disha!

Disha: ouch!

Dk: I am so sorry! Are you okay?

Disha: oh it's okay! I am fine.

Dk: I don't know who pushed me.

Disha: it's perfectly okay. I'm disha!

DK: I'm Dk.

They shake hands.

They have a nice convo!

Disha is like w/e and Dk can't get his eyes off her.

Aliya comes back and they go back to talking.

So Dk and Disha are talking....Aliya and Josh are flirting....Angad and Kripa are fighting.

Angad goes behind her as she is so fun to annoy.

Angad: hello...ms. Gusse wali...why are you so angry all the time?

Kripa: I am not angry all the the time!

Angad: then how are talking to me now!

Kripa: I only talk to you like that becuz you are annoying!!!!!!

Angad: acha? Ms. Gusse wali app ka naam kya hai?

Kripa: my name is not Ms. Gusse wali!!!!!!! it's Kripa!!!

They go back and fourth for the whole party.

It's not like Angad likes or anything but for him it's a fun pasttime!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey no comments?!!!!!!! where is everyone???????/ 😕

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