^THE JADED PRINCE^{II}-sk (ch-194,pg-148) - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
oohhh my god...ye Jeet kia cheez hai...sujal ur too good...superb part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
nice part..oh jeet n gayatri, how can someone be so low..they r so cheap...good that sujal bashed him...i think aur marna chahiya tha...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Sujal aur kashish ki life normal ho hi nahi paati
Hope that Jeet has learnt his lesson
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
oh teri 😲😲 ...Jeet u really deserve a solid kick & bashing for being such a 🤬...

sujal my hero 😳😳👏 ...perfect way to reply jeet 👏👏...u shud have given him more ....

& i guess SK doesn't have peaceful dinner date in their destiny 😆😆😆 its always some eventful outing for them 😆😆😆...

as 4 gayatri 😡 when u will know what jeet had done u urself will kick him out 😆😆...

continue soon 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
awesome update... i know that jeet is upto something... i hope sujal dono ko thkine laga de.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
hi
the up is good
kashish is liking to be with jeet and gayatri and this thing is understood by sujal who wants kashsih to go with him
he almost drags kashish with him when gayatri stop her and seeks her help
kashish being a nice person agrees to help her
whereas jeet shows a mms to sujal and wants to make adeal
sujal who doesnt tolerrate all this hits him
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

PART 88


k-Sujal kya kar rahe ho??? Stop it !!!!!!!! Why are you... ???? Just stop it

Gayatri slaps Sujal

Sujal looks contempously at Gayatri as he looked at all his mistresses as if they were something that crawled out of the gutter.. worst than any animal dumping his gaze is enough to wither and frighten any woman..

k-Sujal chalo. Ye kya kar rahe ho tum? Kya ho gaya hai tumhe?

Kashish's face is full of anxiety

s- I don't have scruples hitting women.

He says in a very low voice to Gayatri and gives Kashish a reassuring smile and pats her arm

He leans towards Jeet and says to him...

s-I gave up whoring a long time ago... you are years late to hurt me...

Turn , grabs Kashish and walks out


Kashish is dazed seeing this Sujal

k-Sujal ye...? Why did you...? Maara kyun tumne? You don't violent...kya hua tha?

Kashish is concerned and shocked by sudden change in Sujal's behavior

k-Sujal kya hua hai? Ye sab kyun? He is so badly hurt. Kya zarurat thi ye sab...?

s- I found out hi full name was Ranjeet... so I was giving you a gift..

Her eyes flare and widen

k-How..did you...? Did he say anything to you?

s-He said you had known each other long...and the way you were behaving... I had a feeling..

She looks down

k-I wanted to tell you..

s-Tell me who he was, when I got you in the morning?

k-Tell you when I saw him yesterday night

s-Yesterday... chocolates?

k- Yes...chocolates [she nods]. But I thought ignoring him would be best. He is married now..I have no right to ruin his life, atleast for his wife's

s-Ruin his life?! Why would telling me ruin hi bl**dy life which is already a piece of sh*t by the way

k-I didn't know how would you react. I decided to ignore and leave them alone

s-I would have gotten you out of that place.. like I was trying to today.

k-Khair, leave it. Wanna take a walk in the beach?

s- What did his wife say to you?

k-Nothing. Walk?

s-We'll take the walk and you are going to tell me. No more secrets. This guy has caused enough problems between us

k-She just said that he always loved her and was playing around with me all the while

She looks away with a sigh

Sujal takes her hand as they start walking on the beach

s- And why was she telling you all this?

k-She wanted to tell the truth so she feels lighter

Kashish sighs

k-I am such an idiot

s-No, that girl is. She let him play and believes he has feeling for he.. what a load of crap! Atleast you would never believe that

k-I financed him...actually them. Now I know that

She says with a sad smirk

s-So what??!! You made mistakes, you've learned. If you hadn't, you would never had known and perhaps have gotten in even bigger trouble

k-You only said I never learn

She looks at him with her...as Sujal puts it..."cute" pout


Sujal looks at her and couldn't help a small grin

k-It seems I am not a good teacher.. the only things you don't learn are what I teach..

She smiles a little but her eyes again become lost as she looks at the deep rumbling waves and sighs

k-I ruined everything because of my stupidity

He stops and faces her

s-What is ruined??!! Look at you, look around you, look at us. What part of this is ruin?

k-Before that [She murmurs in a low voice]

s-No. Right now. The present. Tell me about now. Is it so bad?

k-No Sujal, but my family..there respect..there love

Both are silent for some moments

k-My family is important for me. I really love them but I have lost them because of me. They hate me, society hates them. They have difficult time because of my stigma. How can I live comfortably when they are suffering

She is misty eyed as her voice slowly breaks as she speaks and she sits on the beach

He also sits beside her but he is silent...he doesn't care about anyone other than her..even as a child it was only his mother.. he has no idea how to care about multiple people

k-My sister, you saw her naa. She hates me now. She is married now. She must be having difficult time with her in laws. She couldn't marry her boyfriend because of me

s-Is her husband a bad man?

k-I don't know [confused]. But he is just a compromise. She doesn't love him. Atul must be cursing me

s-Who is he?

k-Her boyfriend

s-So if they loved each other this much why didn't they run away from home?

k- And cause more stigma? I ruined their respect completely. If they would have eloped my family would have died

s-Coudn't your family move to new place

k-They hate me so much that..they don't even care if I am alive or dead

Her eyes are swimming in tears

s-You know they kinda sound awfully selfish to me

k-Don't say that...I know how difficult it must have been. You know...they don't even know I am married. Maa would have been happy seeing me happy, but she doesn't know

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
part 87
disgusting Jeet...
hope Sujal makes him rot...
and Gayathri she slapped Sujal...
the Jeet will face hell on Earth now...
poor Kashish...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
part 88
nice part...
poor Kashish...
Sujal is getting to know her and her problems and feelings now...
only her parents married her to Sujal right...
then how come she says that dunno about her marriage?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sujal is not the kind of guy who will be blackmailed by someone.
Jeet aur Gayatri ko pata nahi ki unhone kisse panga liya hai.
Hope that sujal will teach them a perfect lesson.
continue soon

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