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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

lovely update
maan found geet :)

i hate this vicky...

this update made me remember the rasika case of hosiyarpur in the serial where maan saved geet and told her, how he felt abt her :)
wonderful update :)

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hari21

@hari21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

lovely part dear
waiting for next part👏

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shristi1

@shristi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Awesome update.

loved it.

Atlast maan found n saved geet.

continue soon.

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Priya21

@priya_21

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Nyc update. Bt after very long time

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princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Kb next update mile gi??

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

till part 20
nice story...
cont soon...
sent the buddy invite and pm me plz...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

till part 26
nice...
glad Maan reached Geet...
that Brij is really too evil...
and Vicky hes an idiot...
Maan better make that Vicky see the truth...
cont soon...
and pm me...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

awesome ... loved them all ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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-knirwal-

@-knirwal-

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

hi her is ur new commenter...hahha me to ise keh rahi ho jase ap muje janti na ho😆...wase ya ye to sach hai its my first commen on chahat...😊

comes to ur FF not update😆...u know di is ff ka naam ki kitna sweet hai CHAHAT...jitne ajj tak mane ff or ss read kia hoge use me ye pehla ff hai jisme maaneet ki shadi pehle hi part me ho gai😳..is ff ne muje bahot attract kia hai,..jis din mane is ff ko read karne lagi thi us din me rat ke 3 waje tak me isse read karti rahi..aur read karte karte me saath me roo bi padi thi after seeing geet pain...my throad get dry...apne maaneet ke emotions ko bahot ache se likha hai...creadit goes to u di...

its all just perfect ...aur upar se meri piya di ne iska banner banaya ha..she did her great job...muje maan ki sabse harsh baat tab lagi jab usne geet ko kiss kia aur badme jab usse yaad aya ke vo kya kar aha to geet ko baki amm ladki se compare kar diya😭..aur uske baad jo geet ki condition hui mujse vo dekhi hi nahi gai thi...

baki geet ke collage friend vo vo sabi muje bahot pasand hai...me inki wjah se humesha Mile jab hum tum dekhti thi...inse yaad aya apko pata hai ab tak ka sabse funny dailogue konsa hai..jab jai ko pata chalta hai ke geet maan ki wife hai to vo geet ko kehta hai ke uski ab reputation ka kya hoga sab kahege ke ab tak tum ek married girl par line mar rahe the😆..i could not control my laughters..such mane apni hasi ko bahot mushkil se control kia...

it is such a sweet journey of maaneet...and ek aur dailogue hai jispe muje bahot hasi ayi..jab man kehta hai geet aram sirf tum karne ka haq hai kya😆...but tabi uski phone baj pada jo ki humesha wrong time pe hi bajta hai sirf...

comes to last update..dia ne jo kia usse mera para high hi hoga gaya tha muje pata tha ke me to kuch kar nahi sakti ab jo bi kargi vo humari writter hi karegi...muje itna pata tha ke maan dia ka bahot bura haal karega jab usse pata chalega but ye nahi pata tha ke agar geet ko vo news ka pata chala to vo ghar chodke hi chale jayegi😭

i dont like this vicky shiky...kasa bhai hai ye...maaneeet ka pyaar to abi isse dekhega...i hope ke vo kuch jyada negative na kare ya bane...usse is baat ka ehsaas ho jaye ki maaneet ke dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai

u make the scene very well di..all scene r just superbly discribe...maaneet ki kuch pal ki duri bi nahi dekhi gaye...kitne akele hai dono ek dusre ke binna...sabse acha muje geet ki apne bache se bate karna laga aur apne bache ko usko papa ko aur apne parivaar ko chodne ka reson bata laga...

maan ka plan bahot hi superb tha...dia ka jo haal hua hai...oo use dekh kar to jee khush ho gaya..wow ab usse pata chala ke MSK ki pari ke saath panga lena kitna barri pad sakta hai...

wase y the way ek baat sabse imp kehni bhool hi gayi ke is FF ka sabse best name pata hai konsa hai vo hai PARI...i really love alot jab maan geet ko PARI bulata hai...asa feel hota hai jase humari geet sach me pari ho😳 ..

last scene kitna beautiful tha..kase geet gurudaware utarti hai aur mahinder pehle brij se puchne jata hai...jailer ko vo tabi kadi ke bare me yaad ata hai...and geet ke pare me kach cub jata haijiski wajah se maan geet ko dund pata hai...

geet ko laga ke ab vo apne aur maan ke bache ko nahi bacha payegi but asa kabi ho sakta hai Maan ke hote hua geet ko kuch nahi ho sakta...warna maan ye sari dunia tabah kar dega apni pari ke lia,,...haina di😊

plz plz pzl cont soon

very eagerly waiting for ur update

love u

ur's gudiya

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#620

wow Appi...
Wht an update meri jaan...
Dil khush kar ditta...

I so loved the way u wrote both Maan's n Geet's emotions...
Hw Maan felt hollow widout d presence of his Pari... N hw Geet felt hollow not having Maan beside her to cocoon her in his arms..
Geet's talk with her baby ws vry cute..

Geet ka gurudwara jaana ws a symbol ki babaji Maan aur Geet ko milwa hi denge...

Would thank Raka hea.. Cz uski wajah se hi police walon ko Geet ka location pta laga...

Wo poora sequence wherein Maan followed d blood trail n saved Geet n den their baby was amazingly written...

Beautiful job appi...!!!!!!
Standin applause to u...

Love u ...
Muuaahhh

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