KriYaansh FF 'Love v/s Hatred' Part 22 on Page 139

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Saumya-SOMETHING SPECIAL... is definitely VERY SPECIAL but will be revealed only during the next update!!

@MAhi- Thank you.. =) and i agree they luk awesome wen they fight...!!! so imagine the same.!😊

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NICE PART PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT PART

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Rishita Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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if u want PM...like the promo,part 1 or part 2... it makes my work easier!!!

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PART III:😊

Scene starts where everyone is enjoying EXCEPT REYAANSH..

Swayam: Hey rey..

Rey: Hello'

Swayam: Kya hua tu itna depressed..??

Rey: Han'nahi vo kuch nhi..!!

Swayam: Don't worry..Sharon is on her way..main janta hun u r missing her!

Rey: No its nt abt her'its abt K..

Swayam: K WHAT??!?!

Rey: oh! No one..

Swayam: Hmmm .. (gets an idea of what is going on in rey's mind)..

[Sharon and Kria enter together]

Kria was looking exceptionally hot'she was wearing a black dress..which made her look more sexy! Her straight hair was simply flowing over her eyes..which made her look more beautiful'and same was with Sharon!!!

And reyaansh for the first time could not take his eyes off KRIA'

Neha: Hey kria..u r luking nice!

Kria: thanks..!!!

Vishaka: Yes man, u luk awesome!!

Kria: Thanks..and u both are luking good too..!!!

Announcement by DJ TAZZ..

DJ: Hello ppl'.ENJOYING?

ALL: Yes'!! *HOOTING*

DJ: Okay ..so now I hav smething interesting for you all'.A GAME bt a DANCE GAME!!!

All: CLAPPING!!

DJ: So all the members who have knowledge on dance may come forward!

(Swayam,Sharon,Kria,Reyaansh,Neha,Vishaka,Vicky,Nilesh,Amar,Bharat,Rinni and Simmi comes forward)

DJ: Okay'so the game goes like this'

Everyone will be given a chit with a number inside but only 2 chits will be having the lucky numbers in them..

The COUPLE getting the lucky chits have to perform a DO-IT in front of everyone!!!!

(everyone was super excited for this game)

Nilesh: yar agar mera and tera same lucky number nikla toh? O.o

Vicky: hat saala..GAYish mat ban'

Nilesh: Bolna bolna ??

Vicky: Hatt..!!

[The chits are circulated and everybody now has a chit]

DJ: Now u can open ur chits and speak out ur number loud!!

Sharon: 1

Swayam: 3

Nilesh: 5

Vicky: 2

Neha: 4

Vishaka: 6

Bharat: 8

Amar: 9

Rinni: 7

Simmi: 10

Reyaansh: 13

Kria: WHAT?!?!?!?! THIRTEEN?!?!??!!

DJ: Okay! So we hav the couple right here'Kria and Reyaansh! So ppl get ready for their dance!!!

Kria: Kisse pala padh gaya'iske saath aur dance?! L vo bhi duet' OH NO!!

Rey walks upto Kria and put his hand forward...She accepts but regretfully as she has no interest in dancing with REYAANSH.

Rey pull her closer to him with only millimeters the difference between them. Kria is shocked by this move of Reys' but deep down is happy as she gets to be closer to him...*OMG kria what are you thinking!! You hate him. HATE!*.

They begin dancing. Glaring into eachothers eyes without an argument for the first time. Rey truely realises how amazing beautiful Kria really is. He twirls her around a few times and in the process they come so close that its almost certain that their lips are going to touch.

Looking deep into Krias eyes rey feels a rush though him and is tempted to make Kria his right there and then. He brings her even close, sementing her into his body. Rey senses Kria breathing even more faster and can hear her heartbeat. He firms his hand around her waist and they become ONE. Rey thinks to himself *how did I not realise this before that she is the one??*

Chemistry, passion and intensity are all truely realised for the first time by Rey and Kria.

Just then Kria comes back to her sense. *What was that Kria?, are you MAD!! for that REYAANSH...NO WAY!!* she backs off suddenly and dashes from the room. Leaving rey shocked and confused.Rey thinks to himself...I don't know about her but i am in LOVE!

Yes, He was in LOVE with Kria..!!!

Rey smiles to himself and says .. "Kria Ghai..Interesting..!!! Is mein kuch toh hain'Something special'Attitude hain'but there is something else too".. 😳😳

PROMO: REYAANSH CONFESSING HIS LOVE[ABOUT KRIA] TO *SWAYAM* ... (NOT KRIA 😆 AS FAR AS NOW)

<<REVIEWS>> ..

PS- The credit for this FF goes to ME (RISHITA) and my dear SISTER "YUKTI" ... THANKS YUKTI FOR HELPING ME!!! 😊

Edited by Kriyaansh0311 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AWWW! RISH! you are welcome my dear. Anything for you my behna <333 Love you! AMAZING work once again! =D

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Rishita Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kyriareyD3
AWWW! RISH! you are welcome my dear. Anything for you my behna <333 Love you! AMAZING work once again! =D

thanks...bt it was incomplete without you...!!! love you too... <33333 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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it was awesome. finally rey realized his love waooo its too much fun. loved reading your ff. loved it please continue and update next part soon. eagerly waiting for the next part😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

thanks...bt it was incomplete without you...!!! love you too... <33333 😊

Awww! Thats the nicest and sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me 😳 Thank YOU! I could go on forever and ever about this BUT you are one talented writer!!!. Loves you forever!

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Rishita Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kyriareyD3

Awww! Thats the nicest and sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me 😳 Thank YOU! I could go on forever and ever about this BUT you are one talented writer!!!. Loves you forever!

Awww...!! U deserve it dear...!!! and u r not less talented... ur words have magic..!!! Love you too... 🤗

AND @cherrySOOD... thanks...next update will be by Tuesday *MAYBE* coz i am beginning with my TESTS... 😡