KriYaansh FF 'Love v/s Hatred' Part 22 on Page 139 - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

gazab rey!!!!!!!!!!

if am not wrong yeh tera fastest update hoga...


so pehle 👏⭐️

so update...

u know it kriyansh saath mein and sharon door i am the happiest person around😃

okay so loved the update... kriya drooling oover her man and rey not even realizing it... sweet...

fir realize kiya ki kya huya tha toh😳 awww...

tu bahut baar rey ko amar likh deti hai... sweets come out of the amarland jab dekho tab uske khayalon mein😍

ahhaahh😉

accha fir bike ride... bas kahin pe bhi achanak se bike aa jati hai...😆 but i don't mind boz events accompanied with it are the best...😃

kriyansh ghar mein akele...😉 hum tum ek ghar mein band ho*dhinka chika dhinka chika*

best ab toh bas tu batti gul karva de😉 rey ko rukna hi padega😛

all in all loved the update...

accha ladai kyun ki rey????



hahaha, no i have update din just 1 day earlier too !!! 😉
haha, did i again write AMAR?! Shit, I am so into him !!! can't get enough of him !!! 😆

Will update soon !!!

And ladai, coz i wanted to come online !!! That's it !! Normal khit-pitt !!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyyy!!! hope u still know me ???\
first : Im sorrryyy!!! :(
i'm commenting after vry vry vry vry looong timee !!!
soo i missed few of ur last updates ...
i'm in loveee wid all of them D:D
Awesomeee updatess yaa ...
i'm not really liking sharon in ur ff but i'm surely luving ur twist f sharon being in luv wid reyy!!! And KriYaansh:$ ii realllyy miss them noww !! :'(after reading all dizz !!aaawww!! i luvv itt realllyy!!
Thank you soo much for ur PM/s !!<3 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anyaa_012

Heyyy!!! hope u still know me ???\

first : Im sorrryyy!!! :(
i'm commenting after vry vry vry vry looong timee !!!
soo i missed few of ur last updates ...
i'm in loveee wid all of them D:D
Awesomeee updatess yaa ...
i'm not really liking sharon in ur ff but i'm surely luving ur twist f sharon being in luv wid reyy!!! And KriYaansh:$ ii realllyy miss them noww !! :'(after reading all dizz !!aaawww!! i luvv itt realllyy!!
Thank you soo much for ur PM/s !!<3 :)


Oh yes AnYa !! I remember you !!! 😃
Thank you so much for loving my updates !!! Yeah, in the beginning I went a little offtrack but now i am back...the story will bring more such surprises...i hope you like them !!! 😃
Welcome dear !! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Abhi toh vacations hai na... then y khit pit 😕 am sure tune hi kuch kiya hoga.. hai hi khurafati😛😆

Well iss baar i was a little busy u know entrance exams so never realized when the days passed hence i found it quick..

Chalo am fokat...

So update asap...

so waitng for ur next...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowiiie !!!!

It ws Amazing Rish !!!!

do update the next part sooon...

Waiting eaagerly...

Nd don frget to PM me !!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPdate karna plzzz...

am back ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so touched with all these appreciations !!
Thank you so much for loving my piece of work !!!
I love you all !!!
Updating in a few seconds 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Readers !!! 😃
So my Mom is away to pick up my sister from the Airport and so I am here to update !!
Sorry for the delay, this class 10 is not allowing me to update !! But somehow I managed !!
Enough of me , enjoy the update and will be eagerly waiting for your reviews.. 😊
Happy reading !! 😳
Update 17:

It was the mid evening when Rey and Kria reached the Ghai's residence. Everything was calm and quiet, silence and nothing else. Kria's head was still resting over Rey's back and she was smiling without any reason or maybe the only reason was that she was with Rey. Rey saw her in the rear-view glass, her innocent smile, those big twinkling eyes and her cute face. "How can someone be so cute?" was the only question going on in her mind. He jerked a little to wake her up and Kria noticed and woke up. She came off the bike and went towards the door to unlock it whilst Rey parked his bike. Kria opened the door and stepped in, raising her arms and happy to be back. She fled her arms up in air and took a deep breath. She always felt like she was in heaven when she steps in her house.

She turned back and saw rey standing at the entrance with his hands in his pockets, starring at her. She moved towards him and kept her elbow over his shoulder matching to his height, "Chalo Reyaansh, enter the residence".,,
"Kria , I have already come here, a million times." Rey replied with a surprise of the over whelming treatment. "Ya, you have been here, but never as my official boyfriend and personal driver"' She said this and turned the other way around recalling what she said and grinning over her silly gesture. Rey was shocked,surprised, anxious and all feelings were roaming in his mind, was it true that kria just call him his Boyfriend. His jaw dropped and he held Kria's hand, as he was about to tease his baatcutter , he stumbled and fell over the sofa alongwith Kria beneath him.

His hand was around Kria's back waist. A blush of first love blew from there. They could feel the ticklings in their tummy, feel the cencuous of love, the essence of being near somebody, this close that even air can't pass out. "So, what were you saying?" Rey whispered in her ears. Kria went totally numb, she didn't know what to say and what not too' She always put up a brave face over her innocent one but the reality was hidden long from Rey. He knew that Kria isn't that brave as she shows herself to be, she is a very calm and a shy girl. "I '.erm..Nothing" kria whispered or rather mummered. Rey tightened his grip at her waist and pulled her more towards himself. "So, you won't tell?" Rey rubbed his cheek against Kria's and whispered in her ears. Her ears felt the wave of his voice vibrating through her ear drums and making her feel more than ever censuous. She whispered back to him ' "You are my personal driver, what else?" She gave him a smirk and pushed him back and went off to the kitchen.

She stood there numb reminisceing those moments which she lived before a few seconds. That touch, that grip, that pull, that whisper and his essence, she could not forget any single second of that precious moment.

And there, near the sofa stood Rey, thinking about the moments he spent with her just a minute ago. That BOYFRIEND call, that closeliness, which whisper in her ears and the heat of the situation. He looked here and there smiling, searching for his Kria , when he noticed her in the kitchen. He stood at the entrance of the kitchen in a tilted Rey-style position starring Kria and her mood swings. He did not wanted to tease Kria anymore, he very well understood what was she going through. He moved towards her, when she tuened and they together spoke, "Coffee?" ' There was a giggle of laughter and then Kria made the arrangements to prepare the coffee'

Whilst, Rey stood there starring at every little move of Kria'looking confused with the quantity of milk,coffee and sugar' Everything made her fall more in love with her' But, finally the coffee was ready' She handed the cup to him and said, " Lets go up to the terrace".. "Right now?!" ..Rey replied.. "Yes, its just 8 Pm..Cmon".. Kria insisted and this was the point, Rey just couldn't say a no'
They moved upstairs and Kria like a possessive girlfriend held the hands of his man tightly and climbed up the stairs like a little' whereas Rey, well he was simply smiling.

They reached the terrace, Kria unlocked the door and they both went to sit on the floor. Kria sat just next to him, her bare arm was touching his muscles, her hairs were flying and tickling his ears, every little move of hers was felt by Rey. The cold breeze of the mid eve tickled their faces' They were in the bliss of the beauty of love. Rey took the first sip of his coffee.. "Its bitter".. he whispered..
"What?! It is not good? You didn't like it? Oh no, I am such a fool'I should have been careful with the quantities'" The hyper-active Kria was on. She grabed his cup of coffee and took a sip' "It is perfect, Rey".. She grinned at him' Rey took back the cup and took another sip just from the same place from Kria took her sip.. "Now its perfect".. Rey replied. Kria could not help but hugged Rey..

As her body touched Rey's body, a drop of water fell over them. They both looked up together and oh, almighty'the god was now showering his love. It was raining. Rain in Mumbai, in the month of May was an exception but for KriYaansh, it can well, actually happen'and it happened..!


Rey stood up with no delay and went towards the door to go down but Kria wasn't with him. Where was she, was the only question going on in his mind. He turned around and saw her completely drenched in water, enjoying every drop of the rain , raising her arms and trying to grab that atmosphere, breathing every breath and smelling the smell of the wet mud. She was enjoying the first monsoon shower in Mumbai and ehat could be better when she was with Rey. She saw Rey standing near the door, she walked up to him and grabbed his hand and pulled him into the rain. Rey was with her. He lifted his hand up and held Kria by her waist and pulled her towards himself. He removed the strands of wet hair from her face and gently placed a kiss on her cheeks.

Kria was enjoying every bit of this. Neither did she stop him nor did she force him. She just let it go. Rey lifted up his other hand and grabbed Kria with that hand too. She was now in his grip, a tight grip. Kria moved her face towards his face and kissed him on his cheek. He could feel the kiss of her wet lips placing on his cheeks' He was in the bliss of love. The love which personified to be them, KriYaansh. Kria closed her eyes, feeling the essence of love. Rey placed another kiss on her closed eyelids and all that Kria did, was to smile. Every gesture of that night was a treat to her.

They were now completely drenched in rain. Their ribs were filled with the coldness of that rain but they paied no heed to it, because they were with each other.

Hot... Isn't it?
Give your reviews !!! Waiting for them !!
Love you all... 😳
-Your Rishita !!! 😆


Edited by Kriyaansh0311 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww wala update...

so kriya smiling aise hi... we know she is cutely weird or weirdly cute ( i always get confused😕) but anyways u told the reason... and obviously rey is so in love with this feature of kriya...

the scene was lovely to imagine yaar...😍

i know the feel kriya got when she reached home i always get that feeling even if i go to my nani's house but apna ghar toh apna haina...😳

and that bf call.. A! writing yaar⭐️ ( but he entered as bf b4 also u know the day of the confession)

and falling on the sofa and how the true kriya u used and then scenes that followed they were so lovely..

again
the scene was lovely to imagine yaar...😍

and coffee making process i thot u'll write like ki she didn't know how to make one but u didn't.. it was so awww moment...

and then terrace.. seriously kriyansh ke saath tu kuch bhi karvadegi😆.. mumbai mein may mein baarish ( well iss saal vahan chodke bahut si jagah huyi yaar), college mein bike... pata nhi kya-2... bas unko tu toh hava mein udva bh degi i wudn't be surprised😛

the rains they were so beautiful and the moments that were the not hot but sensuous... i think this is the right word...

and once more

the scene was lovely to imagine yaar...😍 ( i know i used this lines many but u wrote so beautifully. main kya karun)

thumbs up and an A1 update...⭐️



Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay since i was the first one to comment so i thot to do one more res... as i normally do res boz it takes a lot of time to load...

but net yahan is fast so i did it...

hawww😲

tune aunty se chupke update kiya... main unhe bataungi😛

well pehle yeh bata when ur vacations starting yaar??

and what r u planning??

waiting for ur update...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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