KriYaansh FF 'Love v/s Hatred' Part 22 on Page 139 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
THE UPDATE IS ON ITS WAY...
WILL TAKE JUST A LITTLE MORE TIME...!😊
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PART V:

Kria is still confused about what exactly happened and why she felt so much when REY touched her. She decided that she was going MAD and thought it was a good idea to just go home. So she headed off. On the other hand REY saw Kria leaving and went behind her. He HAD to give her bracelet back to her THEN and THERE!. He still could feel Kria body beneath him and was LOST in Kria completly.

Swaron:

Sharon thinking to herself: HAYYE kitnaa hawt hai yeh! Oi sharon WAKE UP!. Nahin liken seriously how HAWT is SWAYAM! ( Thats right! Sharon is FIDA on Swayam HERE ). I wish kii he asks me on a date or sumthing. Oi! Sharon paagal mat baan! He will never ask you out on a date! Keep dreaming. He is probably FIDA over Kria like EVERY other boy at ST LOUIS. Sharon quickly brushes off the thoughts racing through her mind and walks up to Simmi and Rinni.

Swayam: She actually looks super cute today. Untill she opens that mouth of her then its just blah blah blah blah (Actually Sharon and a speaking problem. She just can't stop saying something in EVERYTHING. she is a chatterbox ) SWAYAM! kya yaar aise ladki kii bare mai baath nahi kar the!. RESPECT kar!. Nahin likin seriously she is looke super HAWT and CUTE today. Maybe i should go talk to her??

Swayam walks upto Simmi, Rinni and Sharon. (Here everyone is friends with eachother. Everyon EXCEPT rey and kria. Well they were not friends...now...Lets wait and see )

Swayam: Hey girls. You all look BEAUTIFUL today! He said that specially look at sharon. Rinni and Simmi blushed as they thought that Swayam was very good looking and Sharon was BURINING with jealousy!.

Rinni: Thank you Swayam. Waise you are looking very good today yourself..

Simmi: Actually swayam you look HAWT

After hearing that Sharon was red like a TOMATO! jealously was getting the best of her and she needed to get out of there soon before swayam noticed anything.

Swayam: HAHA thank you so much girls. Aur Sharon tum?? Tum compliment nahi do gi??

Sharon looked at swayam...Why did he care if she gave him a compliment or not?? I know! HE IS TEASING ME! arghh now she HAD to get out of there!.

Sharon runs out and Swayam follows her.

KriYaansh:

Kria doesn't realise that Rey is behind her just keeps walking. Just then she realises that she should get freshed in the girls locker room as if she goes home like this her parent will ask her MANY questions and she is just not ready for that. So she detours into the girls locker room and Rey like the Majnu he has become just follows her.

Kria goes into the washroom and washes her face. Rey STILL standing behind her just admires her beauty. When Kria is done she turns around and suddenly bumps into rey and they are left standing just mm's away. Kria is surprised to see rey in the GIRLS washroom but because she is too lost in reys HAWTNESS she doesn't say anything. (OHOOOHOO is playing in the background). Rey lost in Kria pulls her even closer by pulling her around her waist with one hand. Kria is shocked by Rey's move but secretly she LOVES his touch and being so close to him. He is every girls dream she thinks to herself.

Mean while the party is finally called over by RDX and everyone has left to go home. RDX locks up (YESHH YOU ALL KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN LOL) the college and without realising he locks KriYaansh in the locker room. Kria hears the sound and pushes her self away from rey and runs to see what it was only to find that the door is lock!!! NOOO! SHE SCREAMS! Rey runs out and says KYA HUA?

KRIA: the door is LOCKED! (crying) I'm scared of the dark REY!.

REY: AWWW!! So cute! Its okay Kria i am here. I will try to get us out of here DW. =)

Rey calls swayam but he is not answering his phone (I wonder why? LOL. =P)

ARGH swayam kyun nahi pick up kar ra! Kria starts crying even harder. Rey feels bad and walks up to her.

REY: HEY! The diva KRIA GHAI is crying? Please mat ro. YESHH you look very pretty when you cry par you look GAWGUS when you smile.

Kria is SHOCKED! (kitnee sare shocks de ga rey kria ko LOL)

KRIA: REY shutup! K! Mujhe such me bauth dar lag ra hai! And you are making fun of me!.

SUDDENLY there is a LOUD BANG! Kria runs to reys arms!!!!

Kria hugs rey around his waist and REY holds her head gently in a protective manner.

REY (loving the fact that Kria is so close to him HAHA): Kria its okay kuch nahi tha. Please don't be scared mai hoon na.

Kria slowly puts her head up from Rey chest and NODS. For the first time Kria listens to REY.

Rey: Kria i don't know kii why we fight so much?? I don't understand kii when and why the fight started.

Kria: LOL even i don't know. PAR i remember kii from DAY1 you never liked me.

Rey: KYA!!? Thats not true. Infact you didn't like me!!

KRIA just stares at REY. Is this true? Is this really how he felt?

They share a moment (ohoohooo).

Rey: Kria you know you are beautiful? Moving a piece of hair that was in her face gently.

Kria gets goosebumps. His touch just does something to her.

Kria: Rey and you know kii you are HAWT!. She thinks to herself but doesn't say it to rey.

KRIA: haan haan ...make fun of me!

Rey: I'm not! He pulls kria close to him again and wispers. Kria you are BEAUTIFUL and that is coming from my heart!.

Kria starts to melt!. SHE has butterflies in her tummy.

Rey puts one hand on Krias cheek and looks deeply into her eyes.

Kria: also lost in rey puts her too hand on his cheeks and sements his direction of his eyes towards her.

Rey is shocked by this move of krias but he doesn't do or say anything as he doesn't want to ruin the moment. Rey slowly takes his arm which is on krias warm cheek and slides in down her arm.

Kria gets the tingles in her body.

As rey reaches kria's fingers he sements his fingers between hers. THEY BOTH ARE SO LOST IN EACHOTHER. Being millimetres apart both Kria and Rey can heart eachothers heart beats and can feel eachothers heavy breathing.Rey moves near Kria's face. He could hear her heartbeats.

Kria: Rey Vo main...

Rey: SHHH... chup raho...

Kria: But ye sab!!!

Rey: Bahut accha hain..!

Kria knew that she wanted this BUT her ATTITUDE..

She pushed Rey and ran off to the ATRIUM!

<<REVIEWS>>

PROMO: KRIYAANSH KA LOVE STORY BEGINS AND KRIA'S SECRET OPENS..!


PS: This whole update was by YUKTI/kriareyD3 ..so please ppl...thanks and tell her how u liked it..!!

YUKTI IT WAS AWESOME FROM MY SIDE!!!😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
AWW! RISH! I LOVE YOU! and thank you! =) <3333
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I LOVE YOU TOO YUKKERS! 😉
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HAHA YUKKERS! LOL good one =P
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haha...
i like it..!!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
yukti di...u write so very well...awesome yaar
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AWW! thank you Rosha! =) <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaa really awsom update
lovely 👏
nd every line is so so megical😍
nd nxt promo is fantastic 😍
ray nd kriya love story start osum😉
nd keep it up good work👍🏼
pls update soon nxt part
nd thnx for pm me
good job👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
wwoowww fantabulos updt
loved it a lott
yaayyy kriya n rey r coming closer
rey toh already fida hai..lol...now its kriya time!!..lol =)
sharon is attracted by swayam..n she jealous of simmi rinni..lol
the promo is awesome
kriyansh story will start
but yeh kriya ka secret kya hai? wanna know soon!!
so continue when u can
see yaaa
mmuuaahh

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