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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#481

you want comments???...hell i am speechless...i said it is one of the most intense stories i have read on this forum...i change that...it is THE most intense story in this forum...but i want to know how that creep played a part here in their love story...and oh oh i miss those flashbacks...the office ones...and you promised you will throw some light on their first physical encounter in the 1st chapter...how and why she seduced him...he got enraged...i know i know i am blabbering and i said i am speechless 😆...but seriously this is freakin awesome 😃

thanks for the PM...plsss update soon 😊

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: renee27
you want comments???...hell i am speechless...i said it is one of the most intense stories i have read on this forum...i change that...it is THE most intense story in this forum...but i want to know how that creep played a part here in their love story...and oh oh i miss those flashbacks...the office ones...and you promised you will throw some light on their first physical encounter in the 1st chapter...how and why she seduced him...he got enraged...i know i know i am blabbering and i said i am speechless 😆...but seriously this is freakin awesome 😃

thanks for the PM...plsss update soon 😊

Ah renee u r a mind reader. actually the next chapter is a flashback full of ARHI 😉 the past ll b revealed in chronological order so u guys need 2 wait 4 shyam truth & the consummation in the 1st chapter!

the next few chaps ll b like the original ones. ll b flipping back & forth bet past & present so i hope u like the upcoming chapters!

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

wow finally both of them realised they are tormented souls who are suppose to mend each other
wow that is amazingly written
oh my god very superurb update

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slgirl

@slgirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Angels11

I wanted 2 do a BA Lit but my dad vetoed it & i ended up as a software engineer 😆

ha ha..how is the feeling of writing fiction turned into writing c#/Java/C++ code?? 😆

FYI I have a degree in computer engineering too..so same pinch 😛

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#485

This has left me astounded. Honestly such brilliantly described emotions, amazing read.
He Finally realized her love, yes! Can't wait to find out about history.
Can we have a 2010 encounter pls? I miss their fight n arguments.

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123460

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

tht was good...very well written
Keep it up n update soon !!!

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

hello...

i just came across ur ff...

i read it in a go...and i must say i enjoyed to the core...

every part was beautifully written...

iam happy that arhi realized eachothers love...

do continue...

pls add me to ur pm list

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pc_pals

@pc_pals

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

nice one..

beautifully written😊..

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desilife

@desilife

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

nice.. continue soon. thanks for th e pm once again.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#490

Hey Anu.

I completely fell in love with your story. The way it's written , the description, the story , the intensity everything is fab.
Really Khusi had a very sad and disturbing past. Waiting for Arnav's side of story

Do continue soon and keep me in your PM list.