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ketki_arshi

@ketki_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

too good, wow i just get totally worked up when these two come close, its become difficult for me to breathe actually. waiting for next update...

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

that was sooo awww and the imagery was stupendous because i could literally see it in my minds eye like a a movie!!

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Aahsma tum ajeeb ho 😉. It was just too good. love the way you described their emotional state. In part 2 the way you described their closeness omg I almost stop breathing for few seconds and then the way she looked back before entering her house was also a nice touch. Night surely going to be difficult for both of them. Wish we get to see something like that in IPKKND. 👏👏

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I loved both parts!!!

thanks for the pm

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Loved both parts. Thanks for the pm. Just fantastic👏

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
that was sooo awww and the imagery was stupendous because i could literally see it in my minds eye like a a movie!!

Aww thanks so much, its nice to know that what im writing is coming across so well, i sometimes worry about that!

Thanks for reading🤗

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NidhiChi

@NidhiChi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

so please update soon ya... :) :) can't wait!! :(

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Nikita99
Aahsma tum ajeeb ho 😉. It was just too good. love the way you described their emotional state. In part 2 the way you described their closeness omg I almost stop breathing for few seconds and then the way she looked back before entering her house was also a nice touch. Night surely going to be difficult for both of them. Wish we get to see something like that in IPKKND. 👏👏

LOLZZ loved the whisper😉 aur ajeeb toh main hoon hi as u know...too late to do anythin bout that now😆

Thanks and remember i was worried while i was writing? Well it was just before that part u got breathless on lolz, i kept thinking i was writing it wrong!! I guess it worked itself out in the end tho😳

Hmm who knows, we might get to see something like it, could easily happen cos La's always trying to get her to parties...😉

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dyhardfan

@dyhardfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Omg go girl... Awesome... Truly awesome
Please write more more
Your know u my best writer ever:)
Thanks jaan, continue soon. Love ya:)

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Awesome OS..brilliant scene description, it was as if i was actually watching it......I totally loved it 😊 esp. the Part 2, dat was truly magical 👏...really hope Khushi actually wears colors like black on the show...she wd definitely look breath-taking 😳...especially for ASR 😉 ...i hope something like this does happen in the show too 😍...Plz continue it even more and do PM me again 😊

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