Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 3 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE ON PG 71 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
Zabardast update.

Maan curious to find
The reason for Geet's
Absence.

Aww he came home..
Now Geet confused wat she
Will say.

Pinky blabbered everything..lol
Maaneet embarressed.

Annie playing her move i think.

Will Geet go to Mansion.
She is in delimma.
Even Maan came to request her.

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update di
hows our angel
u take care
we will b waitng for ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Dearies...Again being late in updating Geetika...I will do my max to finish both my FFs by end of Sept...please bare with me and thanks for all my IF friends to have liked, commented and supported me... 🤗

Part 61:

Sir...Please wait , I will change and come with you

Geet gets ready in two minutes and leaves with him

On the way to KM...Maan looks tensed and worried about Daadi...Geet could easily sence it. Both remained quite during the drive when Maan gets a call...

Finally Geet broke the silence.

Sir...I assure you...Daadi will be fine. She has always been worried about her grand children and today she's getting tensed for Annie...that's all

Maan takes a sigh...I wish she is all fine...

At KM...

Here Geet walks into KM along with Maan...Surprisigly, even aadi joined them..

Aadi!

SS..sir...I am here to see Daadima...I happen to call for daadima casually when nakul told me about it.

In meantime Aanie comes there

Didi...Daadi ko dhekiye na kya hua? She's continuously uttering your name... and Annie cries...Geet hugs her...

Annie..Daadi will be all fine. Where is Daadi now?

In her room...

Geet heads towards daadi's room...Annie Maan and adi follows her.

Daadi and Doctor alone in the room...

How was my acting? Daadi winks at her family doctor...😉and the doctor is nodding his head with surprise dont know to laugh at Daadi's kiddishness at this age or to worry about the outcome if her entire family comes to know about the truth behind this emotional black mail.😕

Savithriji...if your Grandson comes to know that I supported you in playing this drama, he will chop me into pieces in the name of operation and that too in the operation theatre of my own hospital...the doctor wipes the sweat on his forehead with his hankie..🥱.

Dont worry...he will never know...

Par Savithriji...

Doctor, its high time I need to bring my family back to track...Moreover, Dont you want to see my Maan settling in his life? Please help me then...

Nakul gets into her room...Daadi again acts unconscious...

Doctor saab...Geet is here along with Maan baba...to see Daadi...

Please send them inside...

Daadi is all excited...Doctor, you see Geetika and you will get your answers hidden behind this drama...

In next two minutes...Geet, Maan, Annie and Aadi walk in...Doctor had a great first impression about Geet...She is beautiful mixed with simplicity..He came near Daadi as if he's fixing one of the medical machine and spoke in Daadi's ears...WOW...wonderful selection Daadi...I really wish your wish comes true😛

Geet is really worried to see Daadi like this...surrounded by all medical equipments...it instantly reminded of her Paati when she was in her death bed...

Daadi...What happened to you? She started crying...Maan hesitates initially then tries to control her by holding on her shoulder...Geet turns to look at Maan still sobbing..

Daadi slowly opens her eyes noticed maneet's every move and closed back her eyes...

Listen...please be relaxed. Its just a High BP...

Daadi instantly pinches the doctor's hand...and guestures him to tell something big...

Doctor clears his throat and continues...

But its not good if the BP shoots further...it may result in heart attack...

Maan looks worried at Doctor...Geet didnt know what to do...she holds his hand and Maan responds back with a tight grip

Maan beta, these are the medicines you need to ensure that she takes them...and more than medicine you need to ensure she is always happy and relaxed. Ensure that she is not told about anything that will hurt her or disappoint her...

I have given her a mild sleeping pill she will wake up in 15 minutes..Doctor rests his hand on Maan's shoulder for a sec ...remember every wish of hers needs to be fulfilled hmm...and leaves from there

Dev walks in...He and NT had an appointment with another doctor. NT had to leave alone as all this happened.

Bro...you cant believe, Daadi has been repeatedly taking Geet's name...Now that Geet has come here, Daadi will be all fine...

Maan takes him to the window side of the room so that Geet, Annie and Aadi doesnt listen to them

You tell me...Howz NT? What happened?

Dont know bro, she was feeling dizzy for last two to three days...Didnt take it that seriously for the first time but after it all happening frequently, I suggested her to consult the doctor. The doctor still taking few more tests on her...It would take another half an hour or so...Hope everything fine with her...

Maan rests his hand on his shoulder...Hmm...no wonder even over laziness can also cause dizziness and tiredness...It was a taunt...I know you are worried for NT... Let her take some responsibilities towards home management and she will be fine.

Geet has been sitting next to Daadi holding her hands. Maan has been observing them. The bond that both Daadi and Geet share has really amazed him...wonder what they find in each other...Daadi slowly opens her eyes and expresses her excitement in seeing Geet sitting right in front of her..

G..eet bb..ete...Daadi gets up slowly seeing Geet just next to her...

Geet and Maan immediately reaches out to her and their hands again clings each other...Annie and Dev also sit by her side. Daadi...Daadi please relax...You cant get up like this..Doctor has asked you to take rest...

Geet...you are here with me right? I was worried that I would never ever get to see you..

Geet has tears in her eys...she is again and again reminded about her paati. She holds Daadi's hand...Daadi, I am here with you...Now that I am here, I will make sure that nothing will happen to you.

Promise?

Yes...PROMISE!

Then you shift your base to here...she said at one go...Everyone surrounding her were shocked to hear what daadi just said...

Geet is blinking with her teary eyes...her mouth just open with a "O"

DAADI...Geet gulps her saliva...she doesnt know what to say now. On one hand she has given a promise to Daadi and on other hand she cannot move into this place...

Daadi...I promise to visit and see you regularly...Daadi instantly stops her...

Geet...Its not only about me...its also about Annie...

Every one present there look at each other

Woh abhi bhi bachi hain...I tried to be a good parent to her but I failed...I have been trying to find a good care taker for her but I failed...today after going thro her progress report, I am worried thinking about her future...how will she ever face this competitive world?

Annie interrupts...Daadi, Believe me, I did my best...I really dont know how my marks went so low... Geet holds Annie's hands guesturing her to remain quite

Even Maan interrupts...Daadi, is this is what bothering you? I will take care of Annie's studies hence forth...

Maan beta...Aap ko apne kaam se fursat milegi tab na! Do you even realise? Waise bhi...baat sirf padai ki nahin hain...Look at your sister...she still doesnt like to interact with people...and she gets into a shell when she meets strangers...do you even realise how this will effect your sister's future?

Maan really went speechless when Dev continued... Daadi, myself and NT will take care of her...

Daadi smirks...Dev, you first be able to take care of you and NT all by yourself and then talk about it...by the way, have you and NT even once tried to spend some time with Annie? How is she doing with her studies...About her school, friends, hobbies, likes or dislikes? She's your sister for god sake!

Dev remains quite...his head bent down in shame...

Yeh acha tarika hain...remain quite like this for your entire life...Maan Atleast spends some time with her...he loves her but unfortunately he cannot do more than what he's doing as he needs to concentrate on our business empire...but you? I got you married to NT understanding the fact that you both love each other...Inspite the fact that your elder brother is still unmarried...

Geet was rolling her eyes...she doesnt know what's the family problems...

I had high expectations that you will turn to be a responsible person atleast after your marriage but you didnt...Daadi was taking out all what's hidden within her...Maan stopped her...Daadi please relax

Enough...ab aur nahin.. I cannot take a chance with Annie...She needs much more attention than anybody else.. Daadi pauses for a while...I have seen Annie sharing a different bond with Geet...and Only Geet can help her out...

Daadi...What are you saying? Geet? Dev is confused Why Geet and how?

HAAN GEET...She and her family in Bangalore took care of Annie during the time she needed the understanding and the care most...which you couldnt give it at that point of time...you and NT were newly married na, how could you have time for others?

Daadi...eisa nahin hain...please calm down...Dev is feeling small...daadi never told him anything all these days but today, she has been pouring out on him

Did you even realise under what circumstances we had to send Annie to Bangalore? I really wish you would have told these responsible words at that point of time.

Geet and Maan Hold's Daadi's hands at the same time...This time Geet consoles her...Daadi, please me and my family didnt do anything special...We shared everything with her like we did with other family members that's all..

Its not THAT's ALL Beta... Daadi looks at everyone present in there...

You all should Admit that Geet is the one who had greatly contributed towards Annie's progress in her studies when Annie lived in Bangalore. And from when Annie's back to Delhi, she again going weak in all terms.

Par daadi...Geet is working full time with KC how can she contribute further on this?

I am not asking Geet to leave KC did I? I just want Geet to spend some time but quality time with Annie...

Geet is really confused...She is looking at Maan as she is unable to decide anything...Bhagawane, Naan enna seyya? Indha Maan bootham marupadiyum enna pathi tappa ninaika koodadhu (Babaji...what should I do now? This deer devil should not mistake me again)

Daadi notices her confusion...Dont worry about your boss...he will not mind...Our Outhouse is also been empty for a long time...Daadi looks at Maan...Kuch boliye na Maan..

Haan...Haan Geet...You can stay in our out house

Geet still remains quite

Geet beta...I know that these days, time is much equivalent to money...I will pay you for this role..

DAADI...yeh kya keh rahe hain aap? Geet holds daadi's hand again...My silence doesnt possess this meaning at all. You know very well...I never charged for that when Annie used to visit my home in Bangalore for tuitions... Now Geet holds annie's hands and continues...and we had considered her as part of our family...then how can I charge now Daadi? Please dodnt repeat that again...

Daadi and Maan look at her amazingly

Then, what is stopping you beta?

Daadi..I must talk to my parents...

What? but...but why?

I must let them know and seek their permission...They were not convinced for me moving to Delhi all alone...I convinced them repeatedly by saying Pinky's name. They let me to be in Delhi because I am living with Pinky. And If I am moving out of Pinky's home, Its better I tell them as I respect them in all aspects.

Will they agree? Should I talk to them?

Daadi... Its just that I need to explain them the situation. I have been telling about you to them from the time we have been meeting in that temple..Now they will surely agree when I talk about Annie...

She goes to a secret place to talk to Appa...Maan was looking at her with awe...Daadi was really admiring her for the respect she has towards her family...Dekha Maan beta...this is what I like in her...See how different is she from other girls.

Maan was looking at Geet...her every moves and action when she was talking to her parents...Geet was explaining her Appa about what all happened..their family knew about Daadi and now the biggeset coincidence of her being Daadi of her MD and Annie...Her family was actually overwhelmed with this sweet coincidence...

Appa...Daadiku udambu mudiyalai...adhu poga avangaluku Aanie bathi romba kavalai...Avalai pathukaradhukku ennala mattum thaan mudiyumnu urudhiya nambaranga (Appa...Daadi is not keeping well off late...Moreover she is really worried for Annie...She has a strong faith that only I can take care of Annie) She remains quite for a sec and continues further...Daadi has requested me to stay with her family as that will help in Annie's development. Appa...idhu ungalukku sammadhama? (Is it ok with you?)

Sure kutta...

Her eyes twinkled with joy...Romba romba nandri appa... (Thank You so much)

Without thinking twice her father agreed...because he trusts her every decicion. Moreover, Annie is also close to their family and annie's development is also of Geet's family's equal concern

Radhika (Geet's Amma ) took the phone...Geet repeated her request to her...A mother is a mother and Geet's mother is of no exeption...

Kondhai...idhuellam vidu...ni thaan jagradhaiya irukanum...Inime thaan nee paarthu nadandhukanum...pudhu edam verai...neeyum pinkiyum eppadi irundengalo appadi inga iruka mudiyadhu... (Baby...Leave all his, you need to be more cautious than before...its a new place and that too your boss's place...You cannot live like the way you lived at Pinky's place)...

Sari Amma...(OK Amma)..

Keep us posted till you settledown...

Sari Amma...

Geet's Appa-Amma talk to each other after cutting the call...

Namma ponnu...velai seyyara edathulla nalla peyar vangita... Enakennavo ava vazhkailya inimel ellam nalladha dhaan nadakumnu paduthu... (Our daughter has taken a good name in the place she works...I have a strong feeling that all that happens in her life will be for good)

Adhellam sarithan...aana enaku oru sandegam? (Yes...but I have a doubt)

Enna? (What?)

Neenga avalodu modhalalikitta pesinengale? Avar eppadi? Enna vayasu irrukkum? (You have spoken to her boss right? How is he? What could be his age?)

Romba nallavaru...oru 26-27 vayasu thaan irukum...(He is a very good...must be 26-27 years of age)

Ayyooo...Radhika (Geet's Amma) is tensed as imaginations cooking in her mind...Vayasu pasanga irukara edathula ava eppadi irupa? (How will she live where young guys live?)

Enna di pesarai? (what are you saying?) There's nothing like that in today's world...Moreover, I trust my daughter and her self confidence.

Back to KM...

Geet gives this exciting news to Daadima...

Daadi...My parents have agreed...

Annie instantly comes to her and hugs her...Didi...you will stay with us...WOW!

Maan was equally excited...wish he could show it by hugging geet like how Annie did

Daadi's joy knew no bounds..please do tell Thanks to your parents beta

Geet holds Daadi's hand...No problem Daadi...I told you na, they will understand.

So, when are you shifting here?

Is it ok if I shift tomorrow evening?

As you wish beta..

Dev leaves from there as he gets a call on his mobile. It was a call from the clinic. Excuse me guys...and he leaves the room

Daadi calls Nakul inside...Ji...Wo outhouse ki saaf safai karna shuru kardijiye...

Daadi...is there any changes/ shifting needed to be done? Nakul asks her

Ji...I will show you what all needs to be changed...Maan leaves from there along with Nakul. Daadi is so happy to see Maan taking personal interest. Even I will join you bro...Annie tells him with an excitement.

Daadi holds Annie's hands...Aap khush ho na beta?

Bohuth bohuth bohuth Khush...Annie screams with joy. Daadi, Geet & Maan were so happy to see her like this

And Aadi beta...Thanks for coming..Main dar gayi thi ki aap yahan phir kabhi nahin aayenge..

Aadi comes forward...Daadi see I am here in KM...please take care of yourself..dont take unnecessary worries...I am happy that Geet will be staying with you people...

And Geet...how is your health?

Geet could sense Daadi getting tensed again...

Oops...this Aadi sir had to ask this question now only? She feels like banging her head to the nearby wall

Sir I'm fine...she immediately changes the topic as she knows Daadi would get tensed unnecessarilly

Aadi sir...I have a request...

Yes Geet

Please dont tell anyone in the office that I am moving into here...I dont want them to talk unnecessary things...hope you understand.

Sure Geet...I will keep it confidential....and he leaves from there leaving Geet and Daadi all alone in that room

Geet, why do you want to keep it confidential?

Daadi, our office has few people who look out for reasons to gossip unnecessarily...Although I wouldn't care about their talks but why to make a way for them?

Teek hain beta...as you wish and thank you so much..

Geet holds her hand...what is this Daadi? Wont I do even this for my SMW (Super Miraculous Woman)?

Daadi laughs listening to SMW after a long time...and I have one more request

Ji Daadi!😲

Please continue with your DD praising about your boss I am missing it so much...Dont hold yourself back just because I am Daadi of your boss Hmm!😉

Geet smiles and hugs her...

Precap: Oops...NT 😡

Edited by Vaidhumom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ... dadi ko oscar milna chahiye. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me😛

Hi Lakshmi di
How are you and kiddos???
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippeee geet moving to km
waiting for nt response
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Me😛


Hi Lakshmi di
How are you and kiddos???


Hey Dia...Me fine and how about you?

Kiddos are keeping me very very busy 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

geet staying with maan...wow...dats gr8...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...


thank u sooo much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part di
ha ha i guess dadi can get all the acting awards available in this world for her acting in the beginninng but she did pour out her pain she has been carrying around bcoz of her grandchildren loved that geet took her parents permission to move in
maan n annie excited to have geet in their house

ha ha naughty dadi

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant part :D
Aww dadi faked it lol.
Loved what the doc said. Maan will chop him in his own hospital lol.
Geet took the permission awww. Good girl she is.
Oops her mother is scared.
Is NT pregnant :s
Interesting.
Cant wait for more :D

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