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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

i just loved it! it was amazing!
can't wait 4 next part!
cont asap
thnx 4 pm

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Amazing amazing start Jyotika. Firstly I am so glad you've started an ff and the title of the ff is really adorable, like a whiff of fresh air. The set up of the ff and the background is beautiful. Its an amazing start with both of them being in a school with all their friends common, I am really inquisitive to read more !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wows! amazing update!

LOVED IT! cont soon pleashhh

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

m readin it at d blog!!! :D

luv

nandi

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

I hadn't reserved a spot here! Shit! No wonder I couldn't find it in my posts! :P

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Hey Jo, Hi!!!

Wow that is so awesome...perfect!!! i love it...really really nice concept...keep u reading!!! Riddhima , Armaan , Muski, Nikki, Rahul all r great...hmmm really nice start!!!!

'A Slice of Life'...Interesting one!!

Thanks 4 the pm

Take care

🤗

Pranishta

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Looks like it's gonna be a fun FF!

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Hey Jo!
Finally after all festivities caught up with ur FF!
As I said already I have never been a viewer of DMG...but ur characterization is completely different from dat of the show, I guess...So its easy for me to follow!
And ur update...I can relate with Ridz, me too never studied in the same in school for more than two years, thanx 2 my father's profession!
Hey, this gang s so cool...loved their bonding...
first meet main BB match, fight ... Next apology😳 😳
Ur giving importance to the detailing of the location, I was able to picturize it!

Brilliant update! Will b looking fwd for it😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Jo 🤗

I'm sooo glad you are writing a FF! . . . I seriously love your work and its hard on us readers that most of your work is a one-timer! 😆

Love the title! <3. . . The banner looks pretty! =)

Gawddd yeh ladki bhi na.. kitna advertise karthi apne galls ko! 😛 😆

Galls se yaad aaya.. I still have comments pending there! Will edit them soon-ish! 😳

I always wanted to read something full fledged from your side! And thanks to Aanya and Shrutika, I get to do it today! 😆

I mostly like college romance and school stuff, they are refreshing and have a pleasant feel in them! I love all your other works too, but this one is more fun to read and its more and more special!

The first chapter is awesome! <33 Haha, it would've been a treat for Niki and Muskaan to see someone defeat Armaan! 🤣 Love the gang! 😳

Love the way you've started it and the way you've proceeded! In love with this AR already!

Do Continue soon!

Loveyouuu! 🤗

Edited by PurpleRain - 13 years ago