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Posted: 12 years ago

I realised this is much easier than spamming you with every chapter review scraps...

Chapter 2:

W*F Arnav?


Chapter 3:

Oh Lyra and khushi, come here


Arnav's being an Ass, f**k him


Chapter 4:

Oh Khushi you poor baby


Chapter 5:

Shyam did WHAT!!!


((bitch here is an exclamation not a personal insult))

Chapter 6:

I have no hope for Arnav, can Khushi please get married to Aryan instead? I'm so excited he's coming...


Chapter 7:

Are you kidding about the chapter being crap?

I loved their face-off, Arnav needed a harsh slap of reality, he shouldn't build a world of whims and fancies just because he couldn't face certain relics of his past, I'm so glad Arnav got proverbially bitch-slapped by Aryan.


Chapter 8:

What the bloody hell?!


Khushi woman stop kissing the enemy, the dude is a douche! LOL!

Chapter 9:

Aaaww this chapter is making me all kinds of sad


Chapter 10:


Chapter 11:


Chapter 12:


Chapter 13:

Loved the song..


Chapter 14:

If something happens to Aryan, Shyam Manohar Jha is going to regret the day he was born.


Very good decision Khushi! You go girl!


Chapter 15:

Oh No He Didn't

Seriously? that Shyam dude needs medical help!

Chapter 16:

Oh what a chapter Lyra!! So proud of you!! Brilliant writing sweetheart!


Chapter17:

Oh man, look at Arnav and Aryan, bonding and bromancing, eh!


I'm not completely heartless, I'm feeling quite bad for Aryan, but I guess for him, this was the right decision, he was the better choice but not the right one...

Chapter 18:


~New thread, New comment~

~sri


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_ffn


I realised this is much easier than spamming you with every chapter review scraps...

Chapter 2:

W*F Arnav?



Chapter 3:

Oh Lyra and khushi, come here



Arnav's being an Ass, f**k him



Chapter 4:

Oh Khushi you poor baby



Chapter 5:

Shyam did WHAT!!!



((bitch here is an exclamation not a personal insult))



5 chapters done.. u r fast
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Lyraa99


5 chapters done.. u r fast


6 actually.. 😃

~sri
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey lyraa i still have to catch this one will comment once read
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING WORK!!!...ma nu got me totally hooked with ur writting,.,...may god bless u dear! :D :D :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
aryan's sacrifice made me cry.. and i just knew they would name their son after him.
and i really love your definition of love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just started this reading this FF! I've read the prologue so far and it's so well written. Especially the way you describe things 😊

Lovely story so far!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have just read till chapter-6, must say its so beautiful & deeply rich in emotions..
The emotions are so very well put.. You have done an amazing job dear.. applause to you⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was crying my heart out when Aryan was telling about the life of Khushi in last one year.. Khushi has faced so much, she has been wronged in so many ways, my heart goes out for her..
Arnav was so busy in self-preservation that he didn't give attention to what Khushi could have been facing all alone when she has left her family.. His pride so big that he couldn't even apologize to her when she came back..
The emotions, relations are so mixed up, someone's heart is bound to break...
I want to kill shyam right now. He is still obsessed with her...
Now going to next thread so as to know what you have in store for all of them
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah! read it in one go... i really liked it actually loved it! :D

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