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@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

please pm me when u update

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radzammy

@radzammy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

PART -2

SWAYAM after hearing kria's voice leaves her

SH:how dare u touch me..

SW :mai toh bus... [kria interupts..]

KR:hey dun shout haan isse bhi koi souq nahi hai tumse takrane ka OK...

SH:ya ya isliye tumhara frnd mere raste mai aaya ryt??

KR:correction wo tumhare raste mai nahi balki tum uske raste mai aaie thi GET IT...

SH:haan mujhe bada shaow hai tumhare frnd ke raste mai aane ka hena????

KR:listen u tum mere frn ko...[swayam stops her]

SW:but kria galti srf uski nai hai main bhi dekhke nai chal raha tha..

SH:sunliye miss KRIPA watever!!

KR:swayam tum isse defend mat karo iski toh aadat hai apni galtiya kisi aur pe thopna hum iske liye apna mood kyu kharab kare Kitne dino baad mile hai N HUGZ 🤗him...

SHARON couldn't stand it dunno y but she dint feel good she was feeling lyk abhi jake Kria aur Swayam ka CHIPKOO MOVEMENT khatam karde
sharon 2 her slf:mujhe kyu itna kharab lag raha hai Y DO I CARE???😳

SH [in really annoyed tone]😵: simmi rinni tum dono bus tamasha dekho we're geeting L8 letz go..

SHARON n KRIA shared a DISGUSTED look 🤢 🤢n sharon leaves along wid rinni n simmi

SW:kya yaar kria wo kitni upset lag rahi thi tumhe usse bewajah dant diya..😒

KR:uske ka rozz ka kaam mai WO ATTENTION FREAK hai is liye... eerrgghh leave her na chalo mai tumhe apni team se milati hun...😊

SW:k letz go *[but still he couldn't get off sharon's that innocent look wen he holded her]*😍

P.S:srry for d l8 updates [actually kuch jyada l8 ho gya ]
:P hope u guyz lyk it...!!! [NXT PART 2 BE UPDATED SOON PROMISE :p]

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

it was superb, mind blowing , excellent, outstanding what else can i say loved it. its awesome

thanks for the pm and please continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part please😍

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radzammy

@radzammy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: cherrysood
it was superb, mind blowing , excellent, outstanding what else can i say loved it. its awesome
thanks for the pm and please continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part please😍

thnx it meanz a lott!!!! 😊

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

its was awesum.. And brilliantly written... Iluv u for writing this... Now even ur added to my luving list...!

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553993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

aw very nice dear :) waiting for next one :D

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Yash Inani

@YashInani

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

nice yaar, its gud, keep writting and plz update fast...

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643875

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Beautifully written!! 😃 WOW!! Sharon getting effected by Kria hugging Swayum 😆 PERFECTO!! 👏 Thanks for the update and plzz agli baar jaldi update karna 😳